The Void Prisoner

Imortal Dragon·2/15/2016, 4:18:17 AM·1 votes·471 views

The void to many had simply been a story turning into legend. But for those who believed enough it had become an irresistible challenge to discover. One man had discovered long ago but never had been seen again. That is if you consider the creature seen today as man. An adventurer known as Drake set out in seek of evidence of the exsistance of the void taking a group who all shared his belief,including me. On the path we had found signs and hints but craved more. The signs we had found all led us to this mysterious temple with monstrous statues. we should had left right there but drake was determined as if something drew him closer, drew us all closer. We 12 of us entered the temple into a massive room every inch of the wall covered in cracks and symbols. We it was all new to us 3 men took a few steps forward landing the into a track, a pit opened up devouring the 3 men. We panicked but drake calmed us and led us through as if he was there before. At the end of the path was a door with chains locking it all rusted.We broke through and opened it with a pedistal in the center.The cold feel of darkness was rushed from the room filling my head with whispers, voices but not of this world. I stood there until the sound of the door slamming shut woke me up. I tried opening it but it would not move. The only sounds i had heard was the screams of creatures i had never heard before. I waited until the door finally opened. Seven bodies were in the room torn, but eight had entered it. Drake was not with them but his hat sat on the once emptied pedistal. I ran as fast as i could never looking back. I spent 25 years with that memory forever in my mind. Than i relived it when those same creatures attacked my village, we faught them off and during the fighting i saw him again, drake wrists wrapped in chains, and body mutated belief. I only knew it was him because of that hat.What if he had finally found the void.

9 Comments

regonas2/15/2016, 11:48:18 PM3 votes

Well, while making void champion, you should follow trends of other void champions: link here.

Usually, void champions are unarmed or use void energies as weapons (including Malzahar). So, armed void champion shouldn't focus a lot in his/her weapon, unless it gets augmented by void energies for some reason.

Also, don't forget that your story must built personality. Try to answer these questions with your champion's lore:

  1. Who is your champion?
  2. Why he/she is like he/she is?
  3. What drives your champion?
  4. What is unique/special/extraordinary about your champion?
  5. How your champions fits its theme?

While designing your champions kit, don't forget these main things:

  1. What is unique in it? Can it be counterplayed against?
  2. Is your champion the best pick for what he is designed to do?
  3. How well abilities work with each other?
  4. Should your champion be easy to master ir not?
  5. Why should your champion be picked over any other existing champion during champion pick?

I hope i helped out.

Imortal Dragon2/15/2016, 5:42:59 AM1 votes

Well im thinking the champion is a person who is turned into a void monster after several years. I think we could make him into either the prisoner who escapes, once driven by adventure and discovery now only wants vengence. So with the power he gained from the void he can now make more void creatures to join him to fight against the void itself "fire against fire" (aka turn people n animals possibly) so his cause is a good one but turning n raiding villages will make enemies. Could do that or make him this mindless follower of the void who carries out order lol.

Imortal Dragon2/15/2016, 6:06:20 AM1 votes

His weapon of choice would be a massive sword that is connected to drake by the chain of his shackle's. Letting him have a long reach when throwing it to ur enemy coming back to you (the sword i have iin my head is massive n having marks n scratches all over it looking like a huge bowie knife.)

Imortal Dragon2/15/2016, 10:30:41 PM1 votes

while in the void he kills a void warrior an steals his armor except for the arm gaurds since the shackles never came off. showing rune markings going down his right arm. they were a way to keep track and control their prisoners by activating the runes letting out a burst of energy. drake had learned this and use it in combination with his chains and sword to make the energy be released from it.

Imortal Dragon2/15/2016, 11:08:58 PM1 votes

Passive: Void Escape - The more damage you take the more movement speed and armor(possibly) you gain. Q: Vengeful lash - Has a cone area affect by taking the chain in his left hand and swinging it causing slowing damage. Physical damage: 80 / 110 / 135 / 160 / 185 Slow Effect 40 / 50 / 60 / 70 / 80: 2 second effect. Range 700/ 80 Cooldown 10. 60 mana. W: Impaler: You hurl your sword into i line going through minion units but stops at a enemy champion doing extreme damage than is ripped out of him/her (perhaps he is able to jump over to him?) E: Back it up: (ran out of names) drake swings his massive sword close range making his opponant fly back gaining distance between the 2 of you and his blade is dipped in poison causing minimum continues effect. Ult: He takes his blade by the chain and swings it round slashing everything around him causinf massive damage for 3.5 second

id like some feedback on this if anyone wants to help me create this champion :) it would be great.

Imortal Dragon2/26/2016, 3:00:04 AM1 votes

Well i thought of a design for Drake. He is pale with long black hair, he wears a stolen void chest plate, shackles from when he was captured and torn clothes (same clothes before he was imprisoned. Runes running down his arms. (the runes were used in order to keep prisoners in line by sending energy through their body, but drake had learned it could be transferred through pure steel) and a steel sword which is attached to the right hand shackle so he would never loose it. he has sword training from before he was imprisoned but now needs the added power of the runes in order to fight harder.