{Champ Concept} The Psychic Brothers

Hey, I have been thinking about this for a bit and just wanted to see what you guys think. The Psychic brothers, an ADC (Axel) and Support (Larian).

Axel ADC: Ranged Passive: Axel uses his telekinetic ability to bend the path of bullets, increasing his critical strike chance past a certain range. When attacking from 1/2 range to the end of attack range, he gains 5% critical strike and gains 10% increases on critical strike increases from other sources. Q: Sticky Grenade, Axelr throws a grenade that can be transferred from one target to another by melee attacking or other physical contact (walking by another champion). The grenade is detonated remotely by pressing Q again, or when it is transferred 3 times. W: Psychic Scan, Axel sends a pulse of psychic energy read enemies (travels half distance in bushes). Enemy champions hit by this pulse cannot dodge Axel's basic attacks, and blind affects do not work. E: Telepathic Dash, Axel makes a short dash and reads enemy champions using telepathic power. The next auto attack on Axel is dodged and countered with a empowered attack. R: Blast Shot: Similar to breath of light from Aurelion Sol, after a short cast time, shoots a large bolt of energy that knocks back all enemies in a line back. Enemies in melee range are knocked to 75% attack range. Enemy champions that hit walls are stunned.

Larian Support: Melee Passive: Mind reading, whenever Larian inflicts auto attack damage or hits an enemy champion with an ability, he can see their cool-downs at that exact moment. Q: Toss, shoves characters (ally and enemy) with a wave of psychic energy. It can go in any direction (to push away or toward, or even to the side), it does not shove very far. W: Concussive shield, gives a small shield to an ally and slows the movement speed of enemies around the shielded ally by a small amount. E: Illusion Barrier, creates a small sized zone where if enemy champions linger to long, they are feared for .25 seconds and then cannot see out of the area. R: Psychic Domination, this ability can only be used on champions who have been mind read in the past 3 seconds. When activated, Larian channels a beam of psychic energy into the enemy champion (similar animation to Malzahar ult), giving them panic for 2/2.5/3 seconds. A panicked champion will run from and auto attack the nearest champion (friendly or enemy, depends on who is closer). This can be cancelled by applying hard CC to Larian.