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[Champion Concept] - Elyn, The Blade Princess

WTF Shipoopi·2/24/2015, 3:40:31 AM·39 votes·11,404 views

So I know that a couple people have written idea's for this picture! I don't see why they wouldn't it's awesome :D. The creator (Hans Ekaputra) had a great idea when he created this work of art! So here we go this is my shot @ bringing you what I think would be a great champion in league of legends!

Elyn, The Blade Princess

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Elyn is a melee bruiser who excels at dealing large amount of damage in a short time.

Passive - Blade Therapy

Each time Elyn switches stance, she gains 25 attack damage for 3 seconds or the first 3 hits which ever comes first.

This cannot stack or happen again within 5 seconds.

Q (First Spell) - Gun Blade COOLDOWN: 7 MANA: 45/50/55/60/65 PERSISTENT EFFECT: Elyn gains 10/12.5/15/17.5/20% attack damage.

STANCE ACTIVATION: For the next 4 seconds Elyn's attacks will also shoot a random enemy behind the hit target and apply magic damage and on-hit effects. 15/30/45/60/75(+ 50% Total AD)

W (Second Spell) - Saw Blade COOLDOWN: 7 MANA: 45/50/55/60/65 PERSISTENT EFFECT: Elyn gains 7/14/21/28/35% armor penetration.

STANCE ACTIVATION: Elyn swings her Blade, dealing (100% bonus AD) physical damage and slowing all enemies around her by 40% for 1/1.25/1.5/1.75/2 seconds.

E (Third Spell) - Twin Blades COOLDOWN: 7 MANA: 45/50/55/60/65 PERSISTENT EFFECT: Elyn gains 7/14/21/28/35% attack speed and 15% life steal.

STANCE ACTIVATION: Elyn jumps to a target. (Range 400)

** R (Ultimate) - Ultimate Blade ** COOLDOWN: 200/140/80 MANA: 100 PASSIVE: Elyn gains 10/15/20% CDR.

ACTIVE: Elyn combines her weapons creating the Ultimate Blade. While active Elyn gain the persistent effect of all her abilities for 15 seconds and her AA range increases to 200.

Lore

As the oldest daughter of the noble House Laurent, a family known for its long line of elite duelists, Elyn always fought for greatness. Dueling everyone who dare challenge! Beating all foes who dare cross her path she thought herself the greatest duelist. Finally choosing to challenge her father, she lost in what was a humiliating defeat! When she later found out about her fathers treachery she demanded a rematch only to have her younger sister to earn the honor first. After the fight and her fathers lose, she refused to accept that her sister was the new head of House Laurent. Taking her fathers custom weapons Elyn took to find training from true masters. Training in on Mount Targon with the Rakkor clan. Learning all they were willing to teach her, Elyn now seeks to bring House Laurent and her family's name back to the legacy it once was.

Strengths and Weaknesses

Elyn has a very weak early game, because of this early ganks to push her out of lane are a must. She is a snowballing monster so try to never 1v1 her without a hard form of CC or huge burst damage! She can easily stay in lane or jungle for as long as she needs. Using and crowd control after she uses E means she has no escape. She is strongly countered by any anti-AD champion.

Stats

HP: 547 (83+/LvL) 1958 Mana: 258 (30+/LvL) 768 AD: 57.58 (3.1+/LvL) 114.785 AS: 0.666 (2.95%/LvL) 1.0 (.999~) Health Regen: 6.33 (0.6+/LvL) 14.6 Mana Regen: 7.144 (0.5+/LvL) 15.644 Magic res. 32.1 (+1.25/LvL) 53.4 Armor: 24.125 (3.15+/LvL) 77.675 Mov. Speed: 335 Attack Range: 150

Art

The image I used was taken from - This site

Change Log

**Update #1 ** - Re-wording a little added Cdr for abilities. Changed AA a little bit also! **Update #2 ** - Added Stats and a bit of changes nothing to much!

66 Comments

Boku No Ezzy2/24/2015, 4:38:07 AM7 votes

I think she seems a little overpowered but I like the concept a lot I just think she would dominate everyone top with her given stats but that's my opinion but I would buy her for sure in a heartbeat she looks kinda bad ass too

The pimp P0P02/25/2015, 8:57:00 PM3 votes

I love the Stance idea, i feel the game needs another and this is a great way to do it, but she needs a tuneup. i like the cooldowns, i feel that they are at a perfect time, because she is a stance champ you dont want them to high or low and i feel 7 is a good median. Before i get into the abilities i think some stats should be said... we know she uses mana but dont know how much or how much each spell costs. So i think she should have mid to low end stats for everything (hp/mana/ad/as/ and so on) but not of all camps just the melee bruiser ones. Now her spells.....

  1. Q) A lot of people think that the 20% attack damage is to much, but when u think about it its not... She only gets it while in that stance and can only AA with it. The active not that bad either, it only dose 50% ad (even with the 20% increase its still less then a normal AA)

  2. W) The armor penetration seams high at first but if you look at all the champs that have armor pen its right there with them (Link) The active is solid i think... haven't read any complaints about it, its damage is off bonus AD so it will be weak early and the slow is a good amount. If anything the damage should go down to 90% bonus AD

  3. E) Attack speed is good but people seem to not like how much life steal she gets... wait i mean how little she gets, yes i said little. If you look at the 5 other champs that have life steal she gets the mid point of all of them (Link) The passive is cool, it gives her a little bit of mobility and dose no damage.

  4. R) That CDR should not be there... If you want a passive on ult then give her something like crit (she is a master of the blade so knowing how to get a crit makes sense ) how much maybe 5/15/25%. Onto the active, it last for 15 seconds (so as long as Rivens Ult) and it gives you the persistent effect of all her abilities (+ %AD/ %armor pen/ %AS and 15% life steal) and increases her AA range to 200. The AA range is cool but the other part of this might be to strong, not sure tho. Why because the increases while in that stance are ok because its only while in that stance but getting them all even tho they are the median of other champ that have them, those camps dont have all of them... So this might ge a good amount or it needs to be weakened.. Maybe make it a % of all the persistent effects.. but dont change the idea of it... i feel it ties her together...

JELL0shots2/24/2015, 4:25:48 AM2 votes

Nice champ hope to see her soon on the rift

Snikda Kinfes2/24/2015, 1:27:30 PM2 votes

Like the idea of making her Fiora Fiora's older sister. But with the lore i dont think you should put where she trained "Elyn took to find training from true masters. Training in on Mount Targon with the Rakkor clan.". cut the where or put why they helped her or somthing

TheFameAnimal2/24/2015, 5:04:14 PM2 votes

LOOOOOVE IT! :D

SpecterVonBaren2/24/2015, 6:49:06 PM2 votes

I think it would be better to change her passive to the % damage amp but have it so it stacks. What I mean is, have it so using an ability increases her damage by 10% and each successive ability use increases this by 5%. So her main combo would be to say, use E 10% increase, three autos, then switch to W, 15% damage increase, three autos, then Q, 20% damage increase, three autos, and then finish off with her ult, 25% damage increase.

Have it so her full potential is only reached by fighting consistently. I'd also change her Q passive to be lifesteal while removing that from her E. This would also make her Q more obviously for the end of her combo after she's taken damage she needs to lifesteal from.

Her ult needs some work I think. Having all of those passives at once is pretty op, it's just too many free stats. I think a better way would be to have it have the persistent effect of the last stance she used before ulting, remove the CDR passive, and instead have her ult give her some sort of combination of the active effects of her basic abilities.

So maybe have her ult give her auto attacks altered for the duration where right clicking an enemy will cause Alyn to dash to that target and then spin around with an aoe auto that slows enemies close to her and causes bullets to spray out.

Overall though, she might still have too many free stats without enough draw backs, so I think one of two things might need to be done. One is a bit controversial but also interesting, make it so she doesn't gain AD per level. This would make her have to build damage period to make use of her free stats so she can't just build tanky and get by on just that.

The other idea is to just make it so she loses stats when she is in a different stance. So maybe have her lose attackspeed and movespeed when she uses her W for instance and maybe range and damage when she uses E and MR and Armor when she uses Q?

Edit: She'll also need to be very mana hungry. Like, EXTREMELY mana hungry, as in, AD Anivia mana hungry.

The pimp P0P02/24/2015, 4:19:14 AM2 votes

Cool idea... I really like the idea of multiple attack ranges per ability

X SkeletonCandy2/24/2015, 6:49:51 AM2 votes

Jesus that ball of stats champion.

Oh my lord.

N30NP4NDA2/24/2015, 11:36:09 PM1 votes

So... RivenxUdyr?

MajorFailage2/25/2015, 6:05:13 AM1 votes

ok, i love this, i would play this champ so hard, pls rito make it happen!

my only issues with her are balance things, seems like with the chainblade (combined with last whisper and bork) she would turn tanks into a joke... like wat would that be about 70% armor penetration, on top of the bork health shred... makes me cry as someone who likes playing tanks

Helzing Vxz2/25/2015, 7:48:59 AM1 votes

Awesome concept, 10/10 would main if she hits the rift, but her numbers must be lowered a bit.

Embertine2/25/2015, 8:15:13 AM1 votes

Kinda cool concept.

Klutz Bunny2/25/2015, 11:21:50 AM1 votes

If the Gunblade is based of the Blades from FF8, then it would be more of a Defense breaker rather then range. I was bored at one point an looked up how Squall's blade work. At the point of contact, The trigger would be pulled increasing damage and some times breaking Defenses. So It could be used as her Pursuit, Charge and Flee move that has piercing damage of 2%, 2.5%, 3%, 3.5%, then 4% for basic with a 5%-7% Piercing for active skill. But Due to the recoil from each shot, her attack speed would go down by .20 - .30 at level five

The Twin Blades I would Suggest lowering her Damage by Half and dropping Life steal in favor of auto block and three hits or damage. Attack speed and be raised by up to .35 at level five after starting out with .20 For level one The jumping stays as a Hi how you doing move

The Saw-blade's original set up I think works best by having it be an Arc based weapon which sacrifices speed and Defense but acts as a splash with higher damage. This would drop her Piercing damage but make her a decent minion farmer and Group fighter with another person near by. Making this most likely her starting move of choice. Due to momentum being a thing though with arc based attacks, If She stays in a single place constantly attacking, her attack speed can increase with each attack with up to 10 Stacks of +0.05 AS, but as soon as she moves or stops attacking the attack speed is lost. The active for the move though would possibly be a single forward spin for 50 - 250 Piercing. Using the active will cause her to step forward with out losing her stacks.

Due to the Sheree weight of all the ultimate weapon, I would advise it be temporary for maybe 10 seconds with the ability to deactivate it sooner by pressing Q/W/E; Which when hit has a temporary double buff for the active skills only with an added cool down of 10 seconds to the other two as her swords would be 'left' on the ground. Like Gnar's boomerang, picking them up would drop the additional five seconds This Ignores the (Second) Main passive as her swords are not on her. The Passive would be The Gun-blades Piercing and speed with The Saw-blades arc and Damage with every 3 hits auto block activating

For her Main Passive I would giver her something that lowers the cool down of her current stance by 2 (At 1) - 4 (18) seconds Or Granting her the ability to 'sheath' her swords once every five seconds out side of combat by pressing the Key of the equipped sword cutting her cool downs to 0. Ultima Excluded To compensate for that though, her cool downs would have to be ten seconds minimal even when they are maxed out.

Going by what I just said, her standard abilities in one on one are decent with her Twin being the entering choice until about the five second cool down mark with her then moving to Ether the Saw-blade for tanks or Gun-blade for runners for early on But in late game depending upon where and who you are dealing with it could go Twin or Gun for entrance with Ult as one on one followed by Ether Gun or Twin for the finish

I hope this makes sense to you all ^^;

Roxas Solaris3/5/2015, 7:27:57 PM1 votes

Like the idea. Hopefully Riot looks at this

PANBU3/8/2015, 12:31:56 AM1 votes

wow that is OP with the passives

LeonDemonOfDeath3/8/2015, 12:45:24 AM1 votes

35% armor pen overkill much. Buy BC and LW, GG no one lives.

Tepig2233/10/2015, 7:54:12 PM1 votes

I really like the artwork and idea, but as others think.. Kinda op.

I want her to be added but nerfed. Just don't know how.

Bootleg Gay1/10/2016, 5:25:36 PM1 votes

I like this a lot. Good way to make another stance based champion for the League.

Although, not sure how the stance activation works for the dash.

igknight calibar5/24/2016, 10:25:37 PM1 votes

want her so bad and i feel like fans make better champs than rito dose*[slayer-pantheon-thumbs]*

TheShadowyOwl9/24/2016, 8:19:54 PM1 votes

OK Let's take a look at what we got,

Backstory and Design: Similar, very similar, ok almost carbon copy, of fiora's backstory, might need to be updated, but the design works very well for this kind of character. C for the technicals.

Gameplay: Ok so the base abilities are good, except for one thing, the passive effects are broken beyond belief, seriously look at the amount of attack damage, lifesteal, cdr, and armor penetration she'll have late game, so remove passives, but the abilities and her overall gameplay is good. B+ for gameplay

so here's my final standings, It's good for it's time but it's in desperate need of refining and updating so overall it's a C+ champion concept their are some pros (good design and fun base gameplay) but the cons (REALLY uninteresting and copy backstory and really op late game) are what keep it down, now before you say how, "oh their early game is supposed to be bad" the problem with that is that when they max out one ability they can completely snowball (see also Akali Twitch and Ashe). Hope you see this and improve the champion concept later on, ta-ta. [slayer-jinx-wink]

ChauvinPlaysLoL2/1/2017, 9:24:47 PM1 votes

The passive is kind of useless if her attack speed is too low, isn't it? I mean, hard CC and it's basically useless. E is kind of like Jayce Q in Mercury Hammer stance... Otherwise, great concept!

MCSpinky1/2/2020, 5:05:39 PM1 votes

Does anyone else think her base AD is a little strong for a "weak early game"? I mean 57 base ad with her kit would do alot early.

Nagirah2/24/2015, 7:56:11 AM1 votes

I like the concept, but this champ has more passives than all the CertainlyT champs combined and it's not a good thing. They seem rather op.

Sirsir2/24/2015, 3:01:16 PM1 votes

OoOOooh, a stance champ, lovely! Strong kit but with no CC or escapes (unless E is like Jax Leap Strike). So its not completely OP

But why CDR for the ulti? Stance users generally don't NEED CDR... Although you haven't put the cooldowns on her skills so it might be based on that...

Also please tell me she uses mana :\

Simplicate2/24/2015, 6:56:02 PM1 votes

Sounds like Fiora, Akali, and Katerina but mostly Fiora. Damage output is high in such a short time frame. Also by reading the abilities once I would guess the combo would be something like E, W, Q, R or E, W, R, Q which is OP as fck lol. My main question is why does she have base lifesteal when she is a blade master or whatever? Also I feel like her persistent effects should be like Rengars fury stacks except on her ultimate. It would work like this, when she used her ultimate she would be able to activate only one of her persistent effects, not complicated but it would stop her from being as OP as she seems to be now. I'd also think about buffing those CD's and making them vary from each other because she could easily pop that entire combo and then in exactly 7 seconds could unleash her ENTIRE combo once again, with CDR that's kinda crazy. If she ran off mana then it would probably help to keep her under control in lane so she can't spam abilities so much. This would also add a small skill curve to using her as well because spamming would cause you to not have abilities to use by being oom.

Aaaaany how, I really see potential in this champion hopefully my mere constructive criticism didn't throw you off ^_^

ZylotheWolfbane2/24/2015, 7:31:08 PM1 votes

So it's like Fiora/Udyr? Interesting. I absolutely HATE Udyr because playing him feels one-dimensional and boring due to how lame switching his stances feels. This however seems to be making each 'stance' into an ability as well. Which is a far better way to handle it. I do think some of these numbers are a bit too high. Like the passive Armor Pen from her Saw Blade stance. Even Darius' passive E only gives him 25% armor pen. Maybe flat Penetration would be better than % for her? Dunno, 35% just seems pretty high, considering that 35% armor pen is what a Last Whisper gives you. Also, the Gun Blade passive giving you % extra AD seems really powerful, especially if she maxes it first, it makes ALL of her item purchases, runes, and masteries FAR more effective. Maybe instead of AD, give her a range increas in auto-attacks? Like Jayce switching to Hammer Form. She IS using a GUNblade after all, so when she's in that form give her increased Auto Attack range as a passive? Just a thought. Her AA range does increase in her ult form after all, so maybe just move that extra AA range from her ult, to her Gunblade passive. You might also be able to then put the 20% extra AD into her ult instead, make it into a temporary high-damage form where she does tons of extra damage with her Ultimate Blade?

As for her lore, getting to Mount Targon seems pretty hard. Maybe instead of just waltzing up there, she got heavily wounded in a battle, but the Rakkor clan saw her talent, and took her there to heal her, and train her? Might also be a good explanation of where she got her blades, since the House Laurent doesn't seem the most technical of families. Maybe the people on Mount Targon had them in their armory and she chose them as her weapons? Once again, just spitting out ideas. I like the concept though, and that art is awesome.

worldwar1 gunner2/24/2015, 8:52:04 PM1 votes

so another riven gj

nachocheeseeeee2/24/2015, 9:55:09 PM1 votes

It seems to belong more in Final Fantasy than LoL

PerishSoftly2/24/2015, 10:05:04 PM1 votes

Uh...get rid of the passive CDR on her ult. CDR passively is a terrible mechanic especially for bruisers. You're essentially increasing her ability damage by that %. If you want CDR you should have to buy CDR. Could you imagine the wreckage if Riven, Yasuo, Diana, Renekton, Jax etc. got CDR passively from their ults?