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Champ concept

Kavren2055·3/6/2018, 1:46:52 AM·1 votes·395 views

http://media.blizzard.com/wow/media/artwork/wow-mop/wowx4-artwork-14-full.jpg https://i.ytimg.com/vi/4INKlTfTiuI/maxresdefault.jpg (Just found these) Some kind of monk, but a peaceful monk. Support or tanky bully

P: Equilibrium, After 5 seconds not in champion combat your mana and health equalize to percentages. I.E. 75%hp and 25% mana both go to 50%. AND gets extra gold from assists and slightly less gold from kills.

Q: Essence, Low cost, Medium CD, A skill shot that goes out and comes back can hit in either way but stops on the first enemy hit. If the enemy dies you gain mana, if it hits a champion they lose some mana (More damage if they are mana-less but not much or could decrease rage etc.) this is not used for damage but just for pushing them out of lane.

W: Presence, Medium cost, High CD, creates an aura around target ally or yourself this aura charges for a few seconds then heals all allies(including minions) Can be used to heal or mess up the enemy's CS.

E: Palm strike, Low cost, Medium CD, Next AA gains more range deals slightly more damage and applies dizzy.

R: Silence, He yells out silence and in a massive circle around him ALL champions(Including yourself) are silenced for a few seconds. OR every action other then movement is stopped. (Abilities and AA's)

Dizzy: While the debuff is active the person affected has a chance to miss AA's. Meaning the animation happens but no damage is applied.

I want this to be a passive person. Peaceful, simple, and nice.

3 Comments

nelogis3/6/2018, 9:02:19 AM1 votes

Alright so first of all that passive is fucking horrible. Not the design but what it actually does.

HP is a lot (and seriously I mean A LOT) more valuable than mana. I would rather have no passive at all than that passive. It's negative value.

Q: Mana drain is a dangerous concept. Hard to balance out for league so that might be tricky. The other thing is that this ability is pretty dull. It's basically Ahri Q or Swain E, we don't need another one.

W: sooooo... a redemption? We have the exact same thing on an item.

E: Dizzy debuff is RNG, nobody wants that (You could use a blinding effect instead of that) The ability is rather dull too if I'm going to be honest. It's just an empowered attack.

R: sooooo... a Blitzcrank ult? Which also silences allies and self for some reason.

This champion just doesn't have anything new or interesting in his kit. It just feels so generic, try adding some interesting mechanics (In the second picture he has like a ball that is soul bound to him, why not make a support with a smililar playstyle like Ori? that he works off with that ball an what not)

By the way you should include the artist names when taking pictures from the internet.