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(Revamp 2.0) [Champion Concept] - Odi'Vez, Mystery of the Void

neveronline·8/1/2015, 4:58:02 AM·18 votes·2,997 views

#Odi'Vez, Mystery of the Void http://i.imgur.com/72xrU64.png http://i.imgur.com/WaBzKFY.png

NEW SPLASH ART CURRENTLY IN PROGRESS! Lore also in progress!

[Note: This is my SECOND revamp of this champion. I have completely changed the kit - except the passive - and have added quotes and lines. The reason for this is that i believe that my older revamp was not good enough, and that it needed MORE changes. His old kit sucked. Honestly. Consider this a rework.]

http://i.imgur.com/MP4Tlnt.png Passive - Void Energy Storage Killing a minion, large monster or champion gives stacks of Charging Void Energy, up to a max of 15 stacks. Each stack grants your next ability 1 - 18 (scaling by level) extra magic damage. Minions grant one stack, large monsters grant two stacks, and champions grant 5. Having 5 or more stacks of Charging Void Energy makes your abilities Empowered, giving it an extra effect. Using an Empowered ability consumes 5 stacks, only if an enemy is hit with it. Killing an enemy champion with an Empowered ability lets you keep the amount of stacks you have.

http://i.imgur.com/E1kqH9R.png Q - **Void Tentacle ** (75 Mana, 16 second cooldown) Odi'Vez locks on to an enemy and smashes into the ground, making a tentacle seep through the ground in a path toward the enemy. If the tentacle reaches the enemy, it smashes out of the ground in an AoE, grabbing the enemy dealing 95/110/145/180/210 (+ 50% AP) magic damage and snaring them for 0.8/1.2/1.5/1.9/2.3 seconds. If the locked enemy leaves the ability range before the tentacle gets to it, the ability will not hit. Empowered: This ability gains range and deals 10% more magic damage.

http://i.imgur.com/45HoWms.png W - Energy Seep (60 Mana, 7 second cooldown) Odi'Vez saps out the energy of a nearby enemy and gains 20%/25%/30%/45%/55% bonus movement speed, and gains ability power for 5 seconds depending on how much remaining health the enemy has (1.5% of remaining health) if it is a champion. Empowered: All gained buffs are increased by 5%.

http://i.imgur.com/y0QBYsV.png E - Dark Blast (80 Mana, 5 second cooldown) Odi'Vez throws a ball of energy at a target location. On impact, the ball explodes in a large AoE, slowing all enemies caught by 18%/22%/30%/40% for 1/2/3.5/4.5/6 seconds. After 2/1.6/1.2/0.8/0.5 seconds, the blast area will explode again, dealing 60/80/100/125/140 (+ 40% AP) magic damage over time to enemies still in the energy radius, removing the slow. If used with The Consuming Void, Dark Blast's slow will not stack with the slow of The Consuming Void, and will instead apply The Consuming Void's slow instead. Empowered: Slow and damage increased by 5%.

http://imgur.com/o90qRv1 R - The Consuming Void (120 Mana, 82 second cooldown) Odi'Vez sends out a long trail of void energy that slows all enemies who touch it by 20%/35%/50% for 3 seconds and marking them as well. After the slow stops, all marked enemies explode, dealing 150/210/350 (+ 60% AP) magic damage. When the trail stops, tentacles will erupt at the trail's end, dealing 50/85/100 bonus magic damage to enemies caught at the end. This ability can be reactivated to stop the trail earlier. If this ability kills an enemy champion, Odi'Vez is granted 5 stacks of Charging Void Energy.

#Quotes **Upon Select: ** "They will soon know the dark grasp of the void."

**Movement: ** "I've changed my ways." "The Void welcomed me." "My destiny is in the Void." "I will consume." "That city will be fine without me." "I will come back, Ionia, and kill all of you." "Me, afraid? No. Angry? Yes." "I will never forgive them." "Going back in time is beyond my capabilities." "If Ionia is known for peace, I wouldn't have fit in."

**Attacking: ** "More power for me, then." "Endless power... endless possibilities." "This is the end for you." "I walked a path that split to two ways, and I went to the Void." "Forgive me if I overkill you a little."

**Upon using Void Tentacle: ** "Don't worry, the tentacle doesn't bite." "This might tickle a bit. Just don't move." "You're not going anywhere." "Where do you think you're running?" "You're coming with me."

**Upon using Energy Seep: ** "Give me all of your power!" "Thank you for contributing to my endless pool of power!"

Upon using Dark Blast: "Don't think you're faster than me." "Leaving will only get you trapped."

Upon using The Consuming Void: "I will show you the TRUE power of the Void!" "I have awakened the Consuming Void." "Let it consume you."

Joke: "You know... I honestly don't like the color purple." "These effects are a little too much for me." "Purple. The design team... HAD to make me purple." (The fourth wall has been officially broken) "In the void, it's actually kind of boring, to be honest." "I'm completely covered in tentacles. And you ask me if it's comfortable. Sigh."

**Taunt: ** "Take your time. You need all the time you can get before I KILL you." "The Void tells me you will die." "Are you scared?" "You're not attacking? Come on, I'm getting impatient."

Taunting an enemyAhri: "You're not making my pulse rise at all." "You are pretty, I can hand that to you. But I don't trust you." "I don't trust you as much as I don't trust the rest of Ionia."

Taunting an enemyAkali: "Wait. Why are you called a 'Fist' of Shadow?" "'True Balance' is something ironic for you to talk about." "Nothing in this world; whether it's Runeterra or the Void; is balanced. Not me. Not you."

Taunting an enemyEkko: "Time machine? That could be useful to backstab...him before he did it to me." "I'm going to need to borrow that Z-Drive."

Taunting an enemyIrelia: "Totally gnarly indeed." "Prepare to be demoted, Captain." "I get angry when i get pissed off. So don't piss me off. Word to the wise."

Taunting an enemyKarma: "Speaka-da-normal language please." "Ionia speaks through you. The Void speaks through me."

Taunting an enemyLeeSin: "Nice kick. I didn't see it coming. I don't think you saw that either. "The only smelly enemy here is you."

Taunting an enemyMasterYi: "What in the world is Wuju?" "You have to have mastered something to be called a master."

Taunting an enemySyndra: "You are a very interesting person, Syndra. But you are not strong." "Get on my level, Syndra." "Your untapped power means nothing to me."

Taunting an enemyTeemo: "Now that is evil." "I seek entrance to the gates of Hell. I heard you are the gatekeeper." "You are definitely not someone to toy with. Well, for everyone else."

Taunting an enemyMonkeyKing : "You know, for a monkey, you are interesting." "The journey you have wanted to complete has been completed by me." "I have reached the top already. Looks like you have competition."

Taunting an enemyYasuo : "A swordsman who has a sword as dull as his head." "The blade - below all things - except the person who wields it."

Skins:

Eternum Odi'Vez The artwork for this is still in progress. Honestly right now it kind of looks like Ultron xD

Arclight Odi'Vez This will portray Odi'Vez before he was corrupted, and when he had... a different name!

Some of this is not yet complete. Up vote so that Rito can see!!!

19 Comments

Bârd8/4/2015, 1:59:00 AM2 votes

Passive: can give an assload of damage lategame. Eh, there are worse things. Q: What kind of immobile mage wants to bring enemies TOWARDS them? W: In theory this could be great... but the champion bonus is too weak. If you bind to someone with 5500 hp, it only gives 27.5 ap. The speed is nice on minions, but what kind of mage cares about attack speed? E: Too weak at early levels (5% slow for 1 second? Really?). Also, given how this would be the champions main DPS (Being such a low cooldown), its damage is too unreliable with that 2 second delay. R: Secondary damage needs an AP ratio to be worth anything, as those numbers are very low.

Gripes: One mobility spell which requires nearby minions, and is worthless at early ranks No reliable DPS spells No poke (Q has the potential, but it is more of an engage) Mediocre burst (Q has high damage, but E is unreliable and the ult is slow, so you cant rely on half the kit for damage)

Bârd8/4/2015, 1:45:38 AM2 votes

Tentacles? Well shit, I thought Annie only had to worry about Velkoz ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Spizzle90008/1/2015, 1:34:09 PM1 votes

THIS. This is awesome! I want this to happen!

teedddyy8/1/2015, 2:29:34 PM1 votes

In my OPINION I don't like it because it's YET ANOTHER ap champion when we never get a ad. Also it would be nice to see another Energy or just no mana or energy champion

Bigg Fuddgee8/1/2015, 2:38:36 PM1 votes

I dont understand that passive part where it says 1-18 magic damage, so his spells will do 1 more damage per stack? okay so 360 with 20 stacks at level 18, nvm I understand :D

Q: This sounds really Ez to dodge, is the tentacle large radius? or small?

W: Does this do damage or anything besides a steroid?

E: I like the E maybe the second explosion could remove the slow and apply a stun? or knockback?

R: I like the way this sounds, id just want to see it in gameplay. When champions explode does it do splash damage, so if 2 targets are on top of eachother they take 2 explosions?

I'll read the lore later, i gotta go now :D

Poro Scotty8/1/2015, 7:29:55 PM1 votes

Seems a lot work went in, glad someone likes to do this except me and the few others :P

For the passive 360 max seems a bit much, perhaps 10 stacks maximum? As 180 max extra AP sounds a lot more fair.

Q perhaps instead of making it a knock towards, make it a root for about 1.5-2 Seconds? I mean u don't want to throw an enemy who could easily kill you straight at you :P

W i like all of this except the last one's scaling, how about 1%-1.5% of max health?

E love this as it is

R instead of enemies dying from tentacle giving you stacks, perhaps any enemy that dies from the ability give stacks as well.

I really like the concept and he sounds kinda fun, keep at it lad :)

jmaishere8/2/2015, 1:04:42 AM1 votes

Ok for the Q, how would this be coded? Does it function like a morgana ult? for the W, is this a damaging ability? why would this benefit the champion? The E sounds fine. The R, does it function like lissandra's e? you need to clarify how each skill works, as some of the descriptions are confusing. Also, for your description of the W, I think the word you're looking for is sap, not seep

whitefox2038/2/2015, 2:32:43 AM1 votes

I like it, I would love to see this champion in game.

moohannamtat 28/2/2015, 6:06:45 AM1 votes

Wow this champ looks awesome Tryndamere

Muted Summoner8/1/2015, 5:08:32 AM1 votes

I thought this champion was designed as a female at one time?

Shénzhì8/4/2015, 8:45:32 AM1 votes

If it wasn't humanoid I'd be happy. :p

Xochtil8/1/2015, 5:38:50 AM1 votes

His q is dumb. If It missed he gets mana and a cooldown reduction.... no.... If he misses, he fucked up. Use that mana potion fool.