I Have some concepts for some Characters (Defacer)

TyrantMonkey·11/10/2017, 5:31:23 PM·1 votes·549 views
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Defacer (The unfacing monster)

-Not sure about his race (I think he could be a jungler though) -Melee attacks (With his two back tentacles)

*Facts-Story: Defacer born at Dr. Facer's factory from Dr. Facer. It is a creation from poisoned water, trashes, chemical gas and human-animal flesh. Factory is based near Salmaz town, in front of Sisu river. Defacer is skinny with long arms, long legs, giant fingers, a head like an octopus's one, two stretching tentacles on its back, and a hole-mouth on its front side of his neck, from where it eats. Defacer for some reason which only its creators knows, is always gestating and it need huge amount of flesh.

*Skills -Passive: When Defacer dies, it borns again with 25% of his max. life. (4-5 minutes cooldown) -1st Skill: It grabs a minion with its tentacle and eats it. It heals for a period of time. -2nd Skill: It uses its tentacle to cut a part-piece from the enemies body, causing damage to the enemy. After that it eats it, healing and gets one stack (max. 10) -3rd Skill: In every activation Defacer borns a baby from his hole-mouth which runs into the enemy and explodes. 1 stack = 1 born -Ultimate: For each stack, Defacer's belly getting bigger. By the activation Defacer releases a devy of flies around him dealing damage and poisoning overtime. After Ulti's activation, babies will be covered with flies too.

14 Comments

Arakadia11/10/2017, 6:46:50 PM2 votes

Probably a little too gory for a League character. Particularly cause of the blood.

Necrozard11/10/2017, 6:29:05 PM1 votes

Not sure about his race (I think he could be a jungler though)

A jungle is a role , not a race

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-1st Skill: It grabs a minion with its tentacle and eats it.

Nunu's ability ?

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-2nd Skill: It uses its tentacle [...] causing damage to the enemy. After that it eats it, healing and gets one stack (max. 10)

You don't need to uses long sentence like "to cut a part-piece from the enemies body" It doesn't help to understand what your ability do

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-3rd Skill: In every activation Defacer [...] which runs into the enemy and explodes

Maokai/Elise's ability ?

The stack's concept is original, but will not make the champion interesting You need to flesh out better, who he is and what he does

I know you're young or that english is not your native language But that's not the reason of why your concept is incomplete

Remember, your ideas are not bad Just need to be more fun to play