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I Have some concepts for some Characters (Izij)

TyrantMonkey·11/10/2017, 5:28:17 PM·1 votes·460 views
https://imgur.com/vf3a1tc

Izij (A true friend)

-Ability power, mage, support -Range attacks (tossing Dna's)

*Facts-Story: Izij is a creation made by Yakujin Toto. In the beggining it had no life and it was used by Yakujin to drink water. He sold it at a Japanese mage, called Izij (from whom it took the name too) who was also responsible for giving life to that wood by filling it with holy water and Ulyss' dragon skin from the Ulyss Dragon's river.

*Skills: -Passive: Izij has an all time aura which fills health and mana to all his alies around him. -1st Skill: It uses its Dna arms to steal life from an enemy. As long as it lifesteal its mana is reducing. -2nd Skill: It uses its Dna arms to give life to an ally. As long as it heals the ally, it's losing an amount of its own life. -3rd Skill: It uses its Dna arms to steal AOE mana from enemies, taking it for itself and its allies around it. -Ultimate: It stands on the ground, dealing a huge full of colours,butterflies and birds lighting around him. It causes Slow and damage to the enemies and attack speed to the allies.

I've made a second sketch of Izij (which I personally liked it more) and here it is https://imgur.com/mpA2VFH

12 Comments

Merryjayne42011/10/2017, 5:31:48 PM1 votes

eyy thats a pretty good character concept!

Necrozard11/12/2017, 3:57:42 PM1 votes

-Range attacks (tossing Dna's)

This is League of Legends, magic and swords, are you aware of that xD !!?

More seriously, DNA is as dangerous as water and it's an expensive molecule to create. Very expensive and ineffective way of hurting

Yakujin Toto

Who ? We need information or background You can't assume we know things that actually don't exist

a Japanese mage

"Japan" don't exist in Runeterra, the planet of League of Legends That's **impossible **to have "japanese things"

Izij

Original name ! The "Z" makes it sounds like "BZZZZZ" , dont feel smooth to say

giving life to that wood by filling it with holy water and Ulyss' dragon skin from the Ulyss Dragon's river.

  • Ulyss ?
  • Ulyss' dragon ?
  • Ulyss dragon's river ?
  • Holy water ?
  • Holy water + wood = Brain throwing DNA with spaghetti arms ?

That's so vague and we know nothing about all of this It's only frustrating to read I want to understand And i can't Because all the information i want to learn about isn't here It's very frustrating

Holy water + wood = Brain throwing DNA with spaghetti arms ?

There is a very command cliché in Role-playing games When the game master is lazy to create something, he will do :

<something normal> + <something magic> = <something magic unrelated to everything>

Having wood and holy water don't explain everything, like :

  • Where the brain comes from ?
  • How can he afford to use DNA as a weapon ?
  • Why the arms are so colourful ?
  • Why the brain and the arms are flying ?

It don't need to be realistic ! It just need to be coherent !

[slayer-pantheon-thumbs]

i have a detailed analysis of the abilities But there was already so much to talk about the "base concept"