AD Bard's Magical Journey

Hey guys I am new to the video editing/YouTube/Streaming and was looking for some feedback! I ask that you look at the quality of the video editting what would you recommend I work on? I already have made a third video and have fixed the text and transition between scenes. Also if you could look at the content, do you enjoy it? Did you think the scenes were funny and so on! I really appreciate any feedback thanks a lot guys!

Edit: I am currently using Windows Movie Maker! Looking for new software soon!