[CCCCC] Darkseid, The Lord of Apokolips

ZedUsanGovos·5/14/2017, 10:23:21 PM·2 votes·1,159 views

Darkseid, the Lord of Apokolips comes to League of Legends.

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Darkseid is a Tank/FIghter, who emits a dominant and threatening aura while on the Rift.

Darkseid is an AD Tank, with True Damage on his ultimate.

Darkseid's Passive is: Boom-Tube

Every time Darkseid spawns or respawns, he has a Mother Box trinket. This trinket is a one time use until he dies again, and allows him to teleport anywhere on the map (does not work for the first 7 seconds of the game), however, it lasts indefinitely, given that Darkseid cannot use other trinkets like wards or the Herald Buff. The passive cannot be renewed via revives a la Chronoshift or Guardian's Angel.

Darkseid's Q is: Omega Sanction

Darkseid gathers energy, firing his Omega Beams towards an enemy. They cannot be blocked or dodged (point and click), and killing a minion with Omega Sanction grants Darkseid +30 armor for 3 seconds at all ranks.

Range: 700/750/800/850/900

Damage: +80/120/150/170/200 Attack Damage Cooldown: 18/15/13/11/9

Darkseid's W is: Apokoliptik Endurance

Passive: When Darkseid is near death, he gains +40 AD and invulnerability, scaling with level. This only occurs once every life, and also cannot be activated via revives.

+40/45/50/55/60 AD +2/2.5/2.75/3/3.5 seconds Invulnerability

Active: Darkseid generates a shield that blocks the damage next enemy ability, no matter what it is (stacked Nasus Q, Veigar R, Zed R pop), but cannot block CC (Morgana Q, Yasuo Tornado, Syndra E). This does not work on summoner spells like Ignite or Exhaust either.

Cooldown: 30/28/26/24/20

Darkseid's E is: A God Among Worms

Darkseid slams his fists down, releasing an explosion of energy, knocking all enemy minions, monsters, and enemy champions in the vicinity back.

Range: 650/675/700/725/750

Damage: +80/90/100/110/120 Physical Damage

Cooldown: 18/16/14/12/10

“loneliness + alienation + fear + despair + self-worth ÷ mockery ÷ condemnation ÷ misunderstanding × guilt × shame × failure × judgment n=y where y=hope and n=folly, love=lies, life=death, self=Darkseid”

By speaking said equation, Darkseid can insert the full formula into people's minds, giving them the mathematical certainty that life, hope and freedom are all pointless. This drives all enemies on the map insane for 10 seconds, forcing them to bend to Darkseid’s will, silencing, blinding, and stunning enemies and pets for the first 3 seconds, and slowing all allied champions and pets. The Anti-Life Equation damages enemies based on missing health, dealing true damage, at the end of the Equation.

Damage: 150/225/300 True Damage Slow: 15%

> Quotes

Taunts:

“You still try to fight. Can't you see that it's hopeless?” “I shall carve out your heart and put it on a pike in my throne room.” “Your friends have abandoned you or fallen before my might. Only then, after your last pitiful hope is extinguished, will I end your life.” “Surely you see the futility of the task you've set for yourself? The utter impossibility of beating me? I am invincible. I am Darkseid!”

Joke:

“You all should know by now. I always have a pla-” [Darkseid charges and shoots his Omega Beams forwards, but they turn behind him, striking him in the rear, knocking him out of his floating animation]

Dance:

[Darkseid’s Omega Beams spell out Y M C A, as he taps his foot to the rhythm, occasionally nodding]

> Interactions

Galio, Garen, and Xin Zhao: “Super or otherwise, you are merely mortals... and I am a GOD!” All Demacians: “You impress me, Demacian. More, your valor has touched my heart.” [sarcasm]

Darius and Swain: “If you won't be my knight, then you'll still be my pawn.” All Noxians: “Normally a threat from you is worth considering, but with both the Mother Box and Anti Life Equation at my command, I'd rather think you should get off my planet.”

To Zed: “As captain of my Furies your fame will spread throughout the universe. You will see the fiercest warriors flee your presence. Armies brought to your knees. Entire nations crumble at the mention of your name. You will know power you would've never known on Runeterra. Never again will you be lost. To other Ionians: “Ever proud, eh, Ionian? I must say, I find it... wearying.” To Xayah/Rakan: “I can see it. Underneath all of that bravado, you're afraid that'll you never be the hero you want to be. You wish you could kill me.”

To Nasus and Renekton: “You can't control me, you can't destroy me, and there is no prison in the universe that can hold me.” To Xerath: “You refused me once, but this may be the moment when you'll reconsider my offer.” To Azir: “There is darkness in you and great power. I think we'll go far together, you and I.” To Sivir: “There must be a part of you that's disgusted by how easily your people fell to me.”

Void Creatures: “I am fear itself -- the terror hidden in your darkest dreams.”

“I'll crush you like a gnat.”

Taunt Response: “A blatant attempt to taunt me into combat. But in truth, it has been an eternity since I've exercised purely physical force. And I relish the opportunity.”

“Very well! This world dies now!”

On Death: “It was a calculated risk.”

Zilean R: “It seems I have you to thank for my resurrection. Though your world will suffer slowly, I grant you a quick death.”

Spawn/respawn:

“Let the universe howl in despair for I have returned!”

“I'm more powerful than I've ever been and the last time we met, you barely managed to hold your own.”

Under CC: “If I were free, I'd tear you limb from limb.”

First move:

“I am many things, creature- but here, I am God.” “You may live to witness my triumph. Live -- to witness the darkness transcendent... and your ultimate, undying doom.” “The skies will rain fire, the oceans will boil, the streets will run red with the blood of billions.”

First attack:

“Do not concern yourself with what I have done; rather tremble at the thought of what I am about to do.”

First Blood: “I am many things, insignificant insect. You couldn't even begin to imagine half of them. But for now, I shall take the role of the executioner.”

Champion Selection: "I am entropy. I am death. I am... Darkseid."

Champion Ban: “I CANNOT BE DESTROYED! I AM EVERYTHING! I CANNOT BE STOPPED!”

Joke Response- Ally:

“I must admit, that was exhilarating.”

Joke Response- Enemy:

“Is this where you hurl a clever retort at me? No? Then I shall separate your atoms into the primordial ether. A most fitting demise.”

Pentakill: "You dare challenge me? Insanity."

Shutdown on enemy: "A final gift, my wayward son. A fast death."

> Final Notes

I really went all out with the interactions here, because I wanted to make it feel like it IS Darkseid in the Rift, if you think I went too far out with the amount of interactions, let me know so that I can limit myself in the future. ^-^

4 Comments

Friendly Ram5/14/2017, 11:03:38 PM1 votes

The point of darkseid needing to die to retrieve two of his passives seems a little overkill. your abilities should generally have a base damage and an ad ratio. P: i like the idea on this one but think it might be better in an item slot like kal passive or on a minimap interaction. Q: i'm nervous with the range and damage both scaling with points but otherwise fits lore. W: Nasus Q is a aa for all intents and purposes your wording would require lots of spaghetti to implement. otherwise i'm fine with it. E: again range and damage scaling isn't really nice. R: WAY WAY WAY too overpowered global 10 sec cc with 3 sec hard cc with true damage execute is just no. try finding some other way to execute the equation. Also can he include his couch in some of his jokes?

showcase255/15/2017, 8:51:43 PM1 votes

Hey this isn't a full review, but man I like his quotes. Yes, they are too long and chatty, but it fits perfect to how Darkseid would talk to his enemies and insignificant allies.

As a point of clarity, the Anti Life Equation skill is a channeled ability? If it isn't, it should be. Another thing is "The Anti-Life Equation damages enemies based on missing health, dealing true damage, at the end of the Equation." But I don't see where the scaling is off of missing health is, and only what the base true damage is.

His q beam should root him and follow the mouse cursor until it hits the edge of a short radius, then continue straight, to give him that (semi) full control of his omega beams hes known for.

His W just needs to say "goes below X% health" instead of 'near death'.

Lastly, I. Would reduce the cooldowns by at least 25% for all spells, at all rankings. They are all too long, and would make him feel less fun with so high cd on everything.

Otherwise, best of luck!

If your any interested, here is my entry: Dr. Octopus, the Superior Octopus

Also, i have the same problem too where the ">" doesnt copy over, and need to delete it and add it back in again when i post the copy/pasted concept. Well, unless you wanted it like that instead of inside the box :

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