New Champion Concept: Genevieve: The Beast Tamer

Corp Deadeye·3/15/2016, 3:40:04 AM·1 votes·738 views

Name: Fiona or Genevieve name may need work Pet Name: Legacy

The Beast Tamer

the lore also needs work but its a rough draft Lore:

Legacy was an experiment by scientists who were studying immortality. Or a group of nature preservation people that used black magic to keep his species from going extinct and ended up making his soul or spirit immortal and make him reincarnate into other species.

Eventually he learns to speak like a human and asks for help to break this curse but all the villages he goes to are frightened and seek help thinking he was a demon. "Champion name goes here" hears about this and sets out to see if she can help tame the "demon" for the villages.

She catches up to the "demon" on its way to the next village and starts to ask why it is terrorizing the villages. The "Demon" responds "i am only trying to get help to remove a curse that has been placed on him." champion surprised that it can in fact talk "i heard that u could talk but i was skeptical so u only want help to remove a curse what kind of curse do you have."

"i have lived for 700 years in different bodies all while keeping all knowledge of the previous life there for the reason i am able to speak"

Finish this later.

Champion Look: Body: Average height for females slightly built like Illaoi maybe not as big Race: black Hair: white dreadlocks down to shoulder blades Outfit: woodland or tribal Weapons: two different whips

One made of leather links like a bullwhip Like this https://www.aussiewhipmaker.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/06/whip1.jpg One made of metal links kind of like a Qilinbian something like this https://www.karatemart.com/images/products/main/wushu-chain-whip.jpg

AA Range: 500

Pet: Legacy not sure what animal to base him off of probably a wolf

Second Skin idea:

Dragon trainer: not sure what she should be wearing but where as legacy would be a mini dragon flying around her

Special item: Legacy's collar

Start with Legacy's collar can upgrade into four different items which change his element type based on which one he has. which adds bonus effects to her abilities

Oighear: Ice element Eideann: Fire element Ithir: Earth element Tintreach: Lightning element

Abilities:

Passive: Whiplash

After being attack u can add some of that damage and throw it back with the next auto attack against that enemy can only occur on the same enemy every 10,7,or 12.5 seconds.

The next attack against that person will do 10% of the damage you took from their AA.

Oighear: adds a slow of 20% for 1 second Eideann: ignites for 7.5% of your ad over the next 3 seconds Ithir: Stuns for .5 seconds Tintreach: adds 15% of your ap to that attack

Q: Elemental Surge Cost: Cooldown: 12.5 or 10 or 12/11.5/11/10.5/10

Single target spell point and click

the pet shoots out a elemental projectile that does magic damage

Oighear: Extra magic damage 20% ap bonus Eideann: adds physical damage 25% ad Ithir: knocks them back Tintreach: silences for 1 sec

W: Link Cost: Cooldown: 25 seconds

Throw your metal whip and link to an ally or enemy. if u link to an ally u can pull them to you one in the next for seconds. if u link to an enemy u can pull them to u after a 2 or 1.5 second delay. if they leave the range of the ability the link is broken

Oighear: if the enemy breaks the link they are slowed by 30% for 2 seconds Eideann: they are burned for the duration of the link for 25% of your ap Ithir: after linking to an enemy they are rooted for 1.5 seconds after a 1 second delay before pulling if pulled while rooted they are no longer rooted Tintreach: if a teammate is pulled or brakes the link they gain a move speed bonus of 10% for 1.5 seconds

**E: **Guard Dog Cost: Cooldown: 20

U send Legacy to defend or fight with an ally or yourself and he gains 5 hp. It lasts till u reactive the ability or he loses his hp also he shoots elemental projectiles.

Oighear: his attack deal 35% magic damage instead of physical Eideann: it adds an ignite every third attack Ithir: he doesn’t attack but blocks the next three auto attacks or one spell Tintreach: he gains bonus attack speed 30%

R: Thunderous Crack Cost: Cooldown: 50/35/20

She cracks her leather whip so hard it rips through the air doing different things to enemies in an aoe around her depending on legacy’s element.

Oighear: slows everyone caught in range for 45% for 4 seconds. Eideann: sends out a wave of fire from legacy that heals teammates for 15% of their missing health. **Ithir: **it knocks enemies up instead and stuns them for 1 after they land. **Tintreach: **Fears enemies in range for 3 seconds lightning strikes enemies caught in the fear after 1.25 seconds for 60% of your ap.

If people like this i will work on stats and mana cost

3 Comments

MrXonte3/15/2016, 2:21:20 PM2 votes

i assume english is not your native language because this is hard to read. try to read over it and dont shorten you to u.

Passiv and Q seem ok E: Ithir is way too strong since its a targeted root that then pulls the enemy. R: Tintreach is far too strong and Oighear seems a bit strong too.

Saying that you will work on stats and manacost only if people like it is a bad mindset for a concept creator. you should commit to your concept and present a polished product not something half finished.

Moltentactics3/18/2016, 10:43:18 AM1 votes

a little too short of a cool down for the ult considering the effects it can have depending on the element