ok so can yasuo
hit him while he is using his q? seem like a good idea but did you really need the you tube video? hmm... i guess it helps you stand out though. so from what i understand hes a hybrid bruiser dealing both ad and ap damage however he has no sustain but a fair amount of burst damage and low amounts of cc.
first of whats up man good job on this concept and welcome to the community!!
now i do under stand that you have put a good amount of time and effort/ energy in this but as always nothing is perfect on the first run, this however is still pretty close, honestly id have preferred if you wrote out this concept on the boards cuz then id be able to quote and reference various points but lets see what i can do.
i like his passive, being able to switch between weapons is always a good niche that i my self have implimented in some of my own concepts.
his passive is good its a bit basic, only being able to switch between melee weapons but, that's a good thing apart from having to design the appearance there's not that much else to add outside of the slight range, good choice on the values.
the stats are good but with the price of these items it's gonna be hard to get these upgrades and actual items so forcing players to choose is a bit of a down side.
his [Q] is good although id say from the second part there might be room for change, since this move can be cced, i suggest adding the effect to pull in the surrounding enemies so that the finial part of this move can have more hit accuracy, now back to my first question...
can yasuo
hit him while he is using his q?
cuz if he can then can he use this like
ult to dodge abilities?
[W] needs a bit more explaining ( might have to watch the video again to see if you further explained this) you said that
it pulls the target towards and behind him
what do you mean exactly, does it throw them behind him or does he move past them? and if so specify how far. hmm a slow here is a bit of over kill since your q already has a 3 part slow so maybe a bleed effect although the upgrade does give him bonus magic damage, ( wait does this apply to his basic attacks? since this magic damage is gained from the upgrade of his weapon). this is his better ability seeing as his rotation goes wq,q,q r e with e as his situational.
[E] is a nice ability and this is a good mechanic that has yet to be implemented so good job on this one, the mechanic in it self is powerful but the ability is kind of underwhelming the range (imo) should be increased to maybe 550 (since this is the maximum range of his attacks) so that other allies can get shelter from this ability,but seeing the current state of the game eehhh...id probably leave it until you can find a way to actually measure its range/size, also what is its interaction with an ability like say
q the fire ball or
q her orb?, if this ability had the effect of canceling such abilities ( either in or out or the zone respectively) id say it makes for a much more unique and dynamic ability the pulse is however a nice touch but you need to factor in its ratios am assuming 20% Ap making it a nice utility damaging ability if paired with
(personal preference with these items) .
[R] first off add the range of the target location, and aoe /crater size. this is a nice ability kind of
meets
ult but you added a
q in the mix so again ratios are needed here, also i like the draw back of only being able to use the whip.... hmm am seeing it more as a chain sword though now that i analyze the way you make his use it. but the effect of the reset should be changed since there's the whole change of weapons happening, id have it Lancsol is now able to recollect caliber resetting the cool down of this ability, holds 1 charge, maximum 2 resets. don't want this to be too op/ perma ban.
so in conclusion this is a good concept however you skipped/ over looked some crucial aspects, but still managed to bring this together.
[zombie-brand-clap] [slayer-pantheon-thumbs] good job man its always good to see fellow creators and as always i welcome and support other like minded creators to the boards. we look forward to seeing more of your concepts but for your next one take a bigger steep out side the box, (this was threshold) and keep an eye out for other concepts posted on the boards, the rest of the welcoming party might be on their way.
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