Zenith, The scourge of Demacia

Lord Zeta 1313··1 votes·3,313 views

When you break a man you leave a dangerous foe. When the man who became Zenith returned to demacia from Noxus he expected a warm welcome Instead his family was slaughtered in front of his eyes as he was declared a traitor. Now he lurks the city's of demacia, using lethal Ionian shadow magic to orchestrate the destruction of cities and the deaths of millions Wrapped in a cloak forged from pure shadows he waits for an opportunity to tear Demacia from its Zenith

Passive: Unwavering item 1054 Broken shield: whenever Zenith casts an ability a shield is created in front of him which absorbs damage until it breaks if Zenith uses an ability while a shield is active the shield breaks and the ability is empowered the shield is instantly destroyed if Zenith is hit by a turret shot Shadow arts: whenever an a champion dies Zenith will gain a brutality stack if it is an enemy champion and a heroism stack if it is an allied champion if a champion dies nearby the stacks gained will be multiplied by 10

whenever a brutality stack is gained a Heroism stack is lost and vice versa

Brutality stacks increase Zeniths Attack damage, Attack speed, and movement speed. if Zenith has 70 brutality stacks he will gain unending brutality. if zenith uses a basic attacks a champion below 15% maximum health he will channel for 4 seconds (decreased the lower their health is) before he executes them. upon gaining unending Brutality Zenith will lose all Heroism stacks and cannot gain any more

Heroism stacks increase your defense, magic resistance, and movement speed. if zenith has 70 Heroism stacks he will gain purity. if zenith attacks a champion above 75% maximum health he will knock them up. upon gaining Purity Zenith loses all brutality stacks and cannot gain any more

the damage and healing for zeniths ability's are influenced by his Heroism and Brutality stacks

**Q: Shadow forceitem 3122 ** Zenith dash's in a line knocking up all enemies he comes into contact with and leaving a shadow at his original position his next basic attack gains increased range and causes both him and his shadow to dash to the target knocking up(if he has more heroism stacks than brutality) or dealing Aoe damage(if he has more brutality stacks than heroism ) if the ability is empowered Zenith can recast Shadow force multiple time before it goes on cooldown (all shadows will dash at the target)

W: Eclipseitem 3513 Zenith calls upon ancient shadow magic to create a temporary eclipse within a zone, damaging and limiting the vision of enemies and healing and granting an attack damage boost for allies. the zone last for 6 seconds and damages enemies within when it disappears if the ability is Empowered the zone is bigger, lasts for 10 seconds, and the healing and damage increase over time

E: Abyssal Blastitem 3512
Zenith channels for a few seconds before sending out a blast of shadow magic in a cone. Enemies hit are terrified and have their armor reduced for 4 seconds
If this ability is Empowered a mark is applied to all champions hit. all damage taken during this period is stored and 25% of it is dealt again at the end of the duration. also grants a attack speed buff to allied champions

Ultimate: Might of the shadowsitem 3001 Passive: this champion gains momentum after moving in the same direction for a few seconds. while above 25% maximum momentum this champion experiences a movement speed increase that increase that increases with momentum.if this champion stops moving or changes direction momentum will be lost (momentum is the secondary resource bar)

Active: After channeling for 5 seconds (lowered based on current momentum) Zenith leaps into the air and creates a giant shadow avatar to surround him. then gains enough momentum to completely fill the bar and charges in a single direction (decided upon when the ability is cast) draining momentum constantly during the charge. he can pass through terrain and creates shock waves wherever he steps. These deal damage, knock up, and execute all champions bellow 15% maximum health. champions directly in the area that he steps on are knocked aside, dealt true damage, and executed if they are below 20% maximum health. Zenith can recast the ability to smash the ground dealing damage and knocking up based on current momentum as well as his brutality and heroism stacks

Zenith cannot cast abilities and is visible over terrain during the charge

Lore Born in a city within Demacia to an Ionian storyteller and a poor farmer whose family had come from Ionia long ago, the boy who would become Zenith was enchanted by his fathers skill with words was so great that he seemed to create pictures out words and shadows. after hours of listening to his father's masterpieces he would dream of far off lands. while his sister was fascinated by the wonders of Zaun and Piltover that their father placed in her head the boy was awed by the place that his father Called Noxus. The boy envied those who lived in a land where if you worked hard you could rise to the top. For a child living in a world where you were bound to the rank you were born with, no matter how hard you worked, this seemed like a paradise. the boy would rush through his meals so he could listen to his father stories. even though his mother was one of the finest cooks in the city she was unable to get some paying work due to rumors that she weaved shadows into the food she cooked the boy swore that he would improve life for his family. When the boy grew into a man he tried to depart for Noxus. however when he tried to leave the city walls the Demacian military stopped him. they questioned him and when they found he was going to Noxus the corrupt officers threw him in a cell. He was able to escape out a window and they did not question him about where he lived, but this indecent began to open this mans eyes to the true nature of Demacia. After several years the man had become successful in Noxus and returned home to his family in Demacia the soldiers recognized him and threw him in a cell deep within the earth. after 7 days the weak man was dragged to a podium where his parents were held. A cruel man stood at the front of the podium holding a sword. with a wicked grin he launched into a speech that fully opened the mans eyes to the cruelty of the nation of Demacia. As the speech ended the man hefted his sword and severed his parents heads from their bodies. The man's rage unlocked something deep within the broken recesses of his mind. Ancient Ionian shadow techniques flooded his mind and ancient voices tried to consume him. but the pure rage that had consumed the man crushed the spirits. the man tore off his chains and smashed a executioners head and relived him of his ceremonial shield before turning his rage on the rest of the city that had done nothing while one of its citizen's had been wrongly executed. the mans rage was endless and he barely listened to the pleas for mercy from his former neighbors. he eventually stormed the castle that overlooked the city and demanded that the lord of the land tell him why they slaughtered his parents. the lord stammered about how they were nothing but filthy Ionians and the city was glad to be rid of magic users like them. as his rage peaked the man removed the lords head with a single blow from his stolen shield and turned his rage and the ruins of the once great city. when the dust settled the entire city had been destroyed. forging a cloak out of shadows the man vowed to not use his own name until the day that Demacia burned to the ground. he swore to destroy a country whose power was at its peak, and so to create his own Zenith the man sought to crush an empire. whenever a Demacian city reaches the peak of its power Zenith uses his shadow magic to bring them down to earth.

Nobility, Heroism, Demacia, All Lies, perpetrated by the fools in power -Zenith the scourge of demacia

14 Comments

Lord Zeta 13131 votes

hey guys comment and give your opinion below also this champion is a muscled man with glowing eyes and a cloak made of shadows. he also has the ceremonial shield he got in the lore

Zeta out!! Velkoz Swain Xerath

Markula011 votes

I stopped reading after the passive because it sounds a little too similar to Kayn. Also, the lore doesn't really fit that of the LoL universe.

Lord Zeta 13131 votes

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I stopped reading after the passive because it sounds a little too similar to Kayn. Also, the lore doesn't really fit that of the LoL universe.

i was aiming for a kayn/Gnar passive (uncontrolled transformation)

also, how does the lore not fit the lol universe?

Sad Tyrant1 votes

Ummm..... Of course they would throw him in a cell, he was going to the enemy and came back from the enemy. Noxus and Demacia are enemies

Noxus is about Strength and Anarchy to the point of paranoia about your own children trying to kill you.

Demacia is about Duty, Justice, and Order, to the point of rigidity and inability to change, and who hate magic so much they created Galio

where'd he get the Ionian shadow powers

Sad Tyrant1 votes

The passive forces a playstyle on him, and it'll be hard to reach either Purity or Brutality.

Q is unfortunately like the new champs E,

W is a very good idea but it does too much.

short sight and stun and attack speed buff and heal and damage and move speed, it does 6 things on the base

E empowerment, is Zed ult. ULT and the base does too much.

Short sight, Fear, armour reduction, attacks speed and Zed ult , not as many as the W but seriously

R, way to powerful, there is a reason the Urgot ult is 25% and a skill shot,

and a knock up and more damage

Lord Zeta 13131 votes

[{quoted}](name=Sad Tyrant,realm=OCE,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=UZmwvKjL,comment-id=00020000,timestamp=2018-05-15T02:22:26.175+0000)

The passive forces a playstyle on him, and it'll be hard to reach either Purity or Brutality.

Q is unfortunately like the new champs E,

W is a very good idea but it does too much.

short sight and stun and attack speed buff and heal and damage and move speed, it does 6 things on the base

E empowerment, is Zed ult. ULT and the base does too much.

Short sight, Fear, armour reduction, attacks speed and Zed ult , not as many as the W but seriously

R, way to powerful, there is a reason the Urgot ult is 25% and a skill shot,

and a knock up and more damage

the e does not reduce sight and is 1/2 as powerful as a zed ult

i if you have the purity side the allied bonuses are great and the enemy debuffs are bad and vice versa for brutality

you can see the ult avatar over walls so you can dodge it unless you are really slow

i wanted to make a champion that

  1. was anti-spamming (passive)
  2. had a kind of Gnar/kayn overall (he cant control which path he takes directly due to it being based on Allied and enemy deaths)
Sad Tyrant1 votes

100% AD (+ 25 / 40 / 55% of damage dealt) = Zed Ult, hmmmmm, unless you are talking about post mitigation, at which its power is the first rank of his ult

and yeah, you edited.

put it like this, you will never reach either of the passive empowerments, why?, cause people are shit and will die.

Anyway I recommend you remove the stun on his W, and put the attack speed buff on the empoweremnt

Lord Zeta 13131 votes

[{quoted}](name=Sad Tyrant,realm=OCE,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=UZmwvKjL,comment-id=0002,timestamp=2018-05-15T01:56:11.575+0000)

Ummm..... Of course they would throw him in a cell, he was going to the enemy and came back from the enemy. Noxus and Demacia are enemies

Noxus is about Strength and Anarchy to the point of paranoia about your own children trying to kill you.

Demacia is about Duty, Justice, and Order, to the point of rigidity and inability to change, and who hate magic so much they created Galio

where'd he get the Ionian shadow powers

the idea is that his ancestors (on his Ionian fathers side) were part of a previous version of the order of shadows these people were defeated by the old ninja clan (the one that Zed blew up) and that is where they got the box of shadows that Zed stole

also i wanted to make a champion based around the dark side of demacia

Sad Tyrant1 votes

I know you want to make someone around the dark side of demacia, but you need to play to the lore that's already there. For example

"The Boy to become Zenith's Father was a storyteller, puppets made of shadow weaved in his words, he amazed the children with his artistry, he told stories of how his own grandfather defended his Clansmen, but one day a caravan came into town with the military traveling behind them, and the father was discovered by the annullers and executed in the town square, the last mistake on the annullers part"

Lord Zeta 13131 votes

[{quoted}](name=Sad Tyrant,realm=OCE,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=UZmwvKjL,comment-id=000200010000,timestamp=2018-05-16T04:08:23.266+0000)

I know you want to make someone around the dark side of demacia, but you need to play to the lore that's already there. For example

"The Boy to become Zenith's Father was a storyteller, puppets made of shadow weaved in his words, he amazed the children with his artistry, he told stories of how his own grandfather defended his Clansmen, but one day a caravan came into town with the military traveling behind them, and the father was discovered by the annullers and executed in the town square, the last mistake on the annullers part"

i edited a bit of shadow magic into the storytellers description and added a part where he demands that the lord of the city tell him why they killed his parents and the lord says theey were looking for an excuse to get rid of them because they suspected they were using magic

Lord Zeta 13131 votes

also the q may look like Pyke's E but if you look closely

  1. this was released before Pyke was revealed
  2. the shadow does not return to him, they both dash to the target of Zeniths next basic attack
Lord Zeta 13131 votes

also does anybody like it that i added the little thing that starts off every riot champion reveal?

Lord Zeta 13131 votes

edited W and lowered amount of stacks needed to get 2nd form also i will point of if the champion is nearby and dies the stacks received are multiplied by 10

Lord Zeta 13131 votes

nerfed E

any recommendations for ability's i should change?

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