This is a new champ idea about a mage/bruiser
Q : AA empower his fists become ice and he deals physical + magic damage
W: freezes all near by monsters and minions(enemy) make them unable to deal or take damage
E: creates a whip from ice if it landed it drags enemies closer to him
R when cast it slows all nearby champions by 50%
This is the basic idea i have no clue about how the damage numbers should be but i really hope you like it :)
rootScythe1 votesDefinitely seems like your W and R should be switched. That W sounds like the core focus of the kit, and the R is just a massive aoe slow.
PugsAus1 votesI agree that the W sounds like the focus of the kit, but I think you want it during laning phase before level 6 so maybe keep it on W. I think the other abilities should interact with the frozen minions more. Also, I think this champ should be able to damage frozen minions, but towers and teammates can't perhaps.
The problem with a champ focused on manipulating enemy minions is that it makes them far less useful out of lane. Maybe give the W a second effect that can be used on enemy champions somehow, for example the W creates an icy aoe surface that freezes enemy minions but also causes champions that move into it to slide in a straight line until they exit the aoe and can move again.
I think an ice based monk character could be really cool. Have a think about how you can make his abilities more thematic/interesting. All champs released by Riot these days usually have a really distinctive kit. (Yuumi jumps on champs, Qiyana interacts with the map, Sylas steals ults etc..)
King of Laris1 votesAbout his W i was thinking that he can freeze monster as well like dragons or jg camps this way he will stop the enemy form taking objectives.