Quick feedback on quick edit

The Rengar cam looked nice, however the others seemed slightly crowded by the particle effects and colors.

The song also made it seem slightly slower than normal and less exciting, but the whole edit is better than most youtubers you see.

I heard ice cream and I'm hungry. Damnit.

Pretty nice tho. Also, the part where the camera pans behind rengo and looks at him sneaking up to mf lags a bit, but that might just be me.

from an animators perspective its could use a bit more consistency as it sorta feels as if being thrown around a bit with the jump cuts.

the beginning quick zoom (at 2 seconds) to Ash is fine (maybe could be slowed by 2 frame), but the straight cut to MF puts it off. maybe should maybe have it be a quick pan around to her or increase the spin timing to show MF for the cut to work (have it be paned longer to see MF down the lane and quick cut when she says "I'm pulling on (then cut) one real hard"). also the zoom out (at 5 seconds) when Rengar entering should maybe quickly pan to the left and be on Rengar's right to keep the flow and not zoom out until he has pounced (which you already have). when she says "ice cream card"(at 11-12 seconds) their is a jolt in speed that throws it of and isn't timed with any signification event although trying to stay on beat. then at "whole damn Park" the jolt would work if you delayed it maybe 2 frames to effusive the kill.

Edit: the last part should be 2-3 frames early, miss judged that

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