[CCOS] October/November CCOS Entry Time! (And September CCOS Results!)

ModEchoing·10/8/2018, 4:17:42 AM·11 votes·33,398 views

https://media.giphy.com/media/g1n3pswjr0ouc/giphy.gif ENTRIES ARE OPEN Before the usual greeting, check out our new C&C Discord!

Greetings everyone! Welcome back to this month's Community Concept Open Stage. In this contest, I ask for any and all Champion Concepts posted in the months of September and October (and now November!) (that have not been entered in a CCOS prior), and run it by a temporarily anonymous panel of fellow Summoners! If you're interested at all, read on! Everything is detailed below.

But first, we have winners from September's CCOS! It must have been pretty busy, given I was the only judge available. Not really a good situation - I hate being the only guy to weigh in on things. You can see my scoresheet here if you want to see my scores and comments.

In first place, Entier, the Thunder of Drums, by Alzon, with a total of 45/60 points!

In second place, W, the Nameless Knight, by Lil homie busta, with a total of 34/60 points!

In third place, Sayuri, the Reflection, by Raxistaicho, with a total of 32/60 points!

In fourth place, Liu, the Girl with the Dragon Spirit, by FlameHalbrdOkido, with a total of 31/60 points!

In fifth place, Vek'La, the Forsaken Thaumaturge, by Bombolz, with a total of 29/60 points!

Several concepts were disqualified due to either reviewing a CCOS contestant or not reviewing anyone at all. The reviews are meant to encourage community interaction and keep the CCOS from turning into an insular elitist club - please review!

If I scored you poorly, don't take it personally. If I wanted you to fail, I wouldn't have put the effort into this at all. Try again, ask for help on the C&C Discord, and practice your craft and improve.

Contents: List of Entrants | Prizes | Entry Requirements | How to Enter | Timeline | Scoring | Judges Needed! | FAQ | Support the CCOS!

Entrants (6/30): Sikander, Xer'Sai's Bane Tamra and Sizzle, the Lizard Cavalry Lernea Abyssos, the Stars' End Ling, Shock and Awe Spero, the Traveller's Beacon Lorelei, the Blade of Hope

Note: Don't hesitate to call out errors, mistakes happen!

Prizes:

  • Top 5 concepts will be highlighted and praised in the results announcement.
  • ALL entries will have a score associated with their concept in the scoring categories as well as a good chance at feedback and critiques.

Entry Requirements:

  • Limit ONE entry per player.
  • Concept Entries must be posted this month, or have been posted last month (as in this month; October 2018, and last month; September 2018), and never entered in a CCOS before.
  • No WIP Concepts please. This contest is here to encourage complete content. WIP Concepts will be disqualified and / or ineligible for points.
  • Concept Entries must be YOURS. If the linked Concept's author and your name are different, your entry will be disqualified, and / or rendered ineligible for points.
  • Entries will be taken from now until the 22nd.
  • All entries must at least have a LORE and a KIT section to be considered a concept. More is needed to remain competitive, but to proceed to judging, you need at least that. Concepts without a LORE and a KIT by the time judging begins will be considered a WIP Concept, and thus disqualified and / or ineligible for points.
  • The first 30 entries will be taken. Any posts above that limit will not be entered.
  • Entrants can be disqualified and / or be ineligible for points based on rude behavior towards other entrants / judges (though negative feedback, so long as it is constructive, is fine), as well as disregarding of the Universal Forum Rules (no, porn is NOT a legitimate reference image). Other major problems may also qualify.
  • You must include a meaningful review of another community member's work that, at the time of writing, is NOT in the CCOS, and provide a link to it in your linked concept,. Failure to do so will result in disqualification. If you have to ask what "meaningful" is, give them the kind of review you would want to see on your concept.

How to Enter:

  1. Post your concept normally within the Skin & Champion Concepts Board, if it's not already posted.
  2. Reply to THIS POST with a link to Step 1.
  3. Wait for me to reply with "Entry Confirmed!". If it takes more than a few days for me to reply, don't hesitate to remind me! I might've missed you!
  4. Watch the "Current Entrants" List above and double check that you're up there, if you are, then you're in!

Note: There is max of THIRTY slots.

Timeline:

10/8/18: CCOS starts. 10/22/18: Entries close, judging begins. Echoing extends CCOS into November due to lack of entries, gets lazy and doesn't edit anything else in this post. 11/10/18: Echoing's birthday hits, entries close, judging begins. 11/30/18: Judging ends, results announced, next CCOS begins.

Scoring:

Scoring is based on this rubric:

CHARACTERIZATION: 0-10 points How well you sell your character personality and/or concept. A low score means you're pitching a generic, cliche, or simply bland character, or rehashing an old concept in a trite manner. A high score means you're delivering a fully fleshed out, unique, engaging personality, crafting a brilliant story that draws the reader's attention, or putting a revolutionary spin on a concept.

FANTASY FULFILLMENT 0-10 points How well your kit and lore interact to sell the character and the fantasy. A low score here means the two feel like alien concepts or simply don't mesh, while a high score indicates that every moment spent in game with the champion lines up to what you'd expect that character to deliver.

BALANCE POTENTIAL: 0-10 points Not how well your kit's numbers ARE balanced, but how well they COULD be balanced without major adjustments to the design. We don't expect you to get numbers 100% right, but it's still easy to tell if something is balance-able or simply unworkable. A low score here means that something fundamental in the kit or playstyle is simply irreparable, while a high number means that the character delivers fair, reasonable mechanics that a little tuning can make nearly perfect.

GAMEPLAY OUTPUT: 0-10 points How well your kit functions in an actual game, and how well it fulfills the role/roles expected of it. A low score here means your kit fails to provide a solid reason to pick it, OR your kit is so overloaded that it warps the game in bad ways. A high score here means the champion is solidly built and has something unique and pick-worthy to bring to the table, but isn't overbearing compared to other, similar choices.

GAMEPLAY FLOW: 0-10 points How it feels to play as or against your kit. A low score means your kit is clunky, awkward, impossibly difficult, or otherwise frustrating to play as, or, conversely, that it is infuriating or perhaps impossible to meaningfully play against. A high score means that your kit is fun to play, offers opportunities to express player skill, and provides meaningful counterplay.

ELEGANCE & FOCUS: 0-10 points How much unnecessary baggage your design has. A low score here means your kit is awkward, clunky, and possibly full of tiny insignificant or unnecessary components that muddy up the design. A high score here means your kit does what it intends to do as simply and elegantly as possible, to the point that any added mechanics would feel like added bloat, and any removed mechanics would feel like you're harming the very core of the character's mechanical design.

Note: If you have any questions on a category, I'd be happy to go into more detail.


TOTAL: 0/60, averaged between all judges.

It's also important to note that, to give some context, The Djinn thinks that most official Riot champions would earn between a 40 and a 55. Just helpful to provide some context for these numbers.

Judges Needed: So if you're at all interested in judging this month, E-Mail me at '[email protected]' and I'll give you more info. I encourage lots of questions! I ALWAYS need more judges, and there is no detriment to stop trying and walk away halfway through (because a lot can come up over the course of a month).

I do ask that all judges fill out the rubric and provide feedback for every champion. If you don't, I can't accept your scores.

FAQ:

But I've never made a Concept before....

Honestly, just give it your best shot. Try searching up other CCOS entries and look at what won first place. Focus on what makes your champion unique from everyone else. Imagine playing against it - is this guy going to be permabanned like Zed or Yasuo? Study up on how Riot writes their lore.

Or just reference Sir ArmaMalum's Introduction to Champion Concepts. That works too.

I have a WIP Concept...

Feel free to post and work on your Concept as much as you want. It's not technically entered until you provide the link to the entries thread. Just make sure you're not the 31st entry or beyond, and that the Concept was either made in September or October, and has not yet been entered into a CCOS!

I don't have a Concept, and I don't have time to judge, but I want to help!

This is still cool. The single best way for you to help is to give feedback. Negative or positive, just make sure it's constructive, and that the author can use it effectively if they choose to do so.

Can I change my Concept after entry?

As encouraging feedback and Concept participation is a major motive behind this contest, I encourage iterating on a Concept, HOWEVER you have to be able to argue it's still the same champion, so no major changes. Otherwise, it will have to count as a new entry, with your previous entry being disqualified. Please keep in mind that your entry doesn't start until you provide the link here; If you want feedback before entering I advise you to simply post it normally, and provide the link when you feel you're ready. Just be sure to enter before the entry period ends, and before we hit 30 entries!

Does that mean I can't swap out my Concept completely?

No. So long as there's still room left, you can completely swap out your Concept. If we're at 30 entries and you want to change, then I can't allow that.

Should I drop out?

You can, but there's no opportunity cost to staying in, so I'd recommend you just go the distance.

Can I change my Concept after judging starts?

Yes, but this may not be the smartest thing to do. The judges peruse the entries at their own pace once judging begins, in whatever order they desire. This means there is no guarantee that your changes will be seen by every judge. If you do make changes, especially late in the judging period, you have to be prepared for a score that does not accurately reflect your final Concept.

Will there be any specific themed CCOSes?

I've considered the idea. I don't think it's a good idea to run them in place of the CCOS since they might exclude some up and coming concepts, but if anyone wanted to take the initiative and run their own themed CCOS, such as one where all contestants HAVE to have been a prior entry, I'd very much endorse it. I'd do it myself, but one's enough.

What's it take to host the CCOS?

If you're not judging? Not much - have some Google sheets for scoresheets to pass out to the judges and make sure you get them all back by the end.

What's it take to judge?

You need to be able to understand why certain design choices are made. It's not enough that a concept looks cool, it needs to make sense from a design perspective and still be fun to play and at least defeatable by opponents. You also need to be able to identify the individual parts of each champion and how they work toward one whole champion. If you're in the habit of posting long good neighbor reviews, or if you've scored in the top five in any CCOS, you're in a good spot here. If you're the kind of guy that can't muster even a paragraph for another concept, I'd suggest refraining or improving upon your critical analysis skills.

Support the CCOS: Some of you have been doing this already, but if you'd like to support the CCOS, as well as get more people involved each month, provide a link to this post on your entry so that others can find it easier. This lets the CCOS accrue more visibility without anyone needing to spam reminders. This is by no means a requirement, but thanks to anyone who does help out!

Above all else, have fun!

54 Comments

Alzon10/8/2018, 1:51:52 PM3 votes

I have learned from September’s CCOS that it’s best to start with a good character first, and then develop it into a champion. Entier was really, really bland, but his kit was awesome (if I do say so myself). Next time, I’ll try to create a fully-fleshed character before coming up with any game elements.

Looks like the competition in general was much less than the previous CCOS in April, with the top scores being much lower. I don’t know if that’s from overall lower-quality submissions or tougher judges, but I believe it’s fair to assume that it’s a combination of both.

Here’s to another exciting round of CCOS!

Edit: Somehow I missed the link to the scoresheets. After reading through it, I can say that I underestimated the characterization and overestimated the kit’s ability to be balanced, particularly in regards to the ultimate. Echo Chamber/Thunderclap is a more utility-oriented and overloaded version of Swain’s ultimate. While I believe it’s overall fine in that it slows the caster harshly while in use, it is extremely oppressive in optimal conditions. Two options I can think of would be to swap the True Sight to a highlight effect like Oracle Lense, and another would be to increase the base damage/scaling on Thunderclap by around 25%, and halve its damage amp scaling to 5% per attack/cast, maxing at 100% bonus.

Also, I wouldn’t mind judging. My perfectionism has hit me hard, and I don’t want to work on another champion for some time.

ModEchoing10/23/2018, 4:18:21 PM2 votes

With only 6 entrants, I can't really in good faith start the competition. I've extended it into November as a result.

Your new deadline for submissions is November 10. You can still update concepts already submitted without worry during this time. Best of luck to you competitors, new and old.

nasu01010/14/2018, 5:15:29 AM1 votes

Strange i feel as if I already posted here but so be it

https://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/fiWGYNmO-tamra-and-sizzle-the-lizard-cavalry

All else is in my previous post. Lore is to be continued. "Run Free"

The Dreamwalker10/15/2018, 1:59:33 AM1 votes

I miss doing these. Seems like I have a few more days before entries close... lemme see what I can cook up.

stone the blacks10/20/2018, 3:55:28 PM1 votes
Fine Ionian Silk10/21/2018, 8:24:20 PM1 votes

Sliding in just a little bit before it closes off (classic me, I know). Thanks for hosting this, and here's my concept Spero, the Traveller's Beacon!

ModBianca Colt10/21/2018, 10:02:48 PM1 votes

Here's mine:

https://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/azlMKAxB-champion-suggestion-ccos-entry-lorelei-the-blade-of-hope

[slayer-jinx-wink]

P.S. I did try to find my previous reviews, but for some reason it's not letting me access my boards profile. It just keeps giving me this error:

https://i.imgur.com/cUQ9GCW.png

The reviews are on my EUW Boards. I'll try to add them as soon as I find out how to fix this issue.

Edit - fixed the issue: https://boards.euw.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/community-creations-en/g8EiEUBz-champion-ammonia-the-woken-curse-concept?comment=00000001000000000000

Recent one: https://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/1qzefP2c-champion-spotlight-concept-leollu-the-witch-doctoress-of-the-wild-video?comment=0000

xUnRavelx10/27/2018, 11:19:48 PM1 votes

https://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/twTAbEhL-shelly-the-dream-chaser

please accept this. i suck at everything but i like making abilities. my lore and description sucks but i just like making champions abilities thank you

nasu01011/7/2018, 4:25:46 AM1 votes

And so as the the time draws ever closer the question still remains who will be the victor of this November CCOS, WITH THE ENTRIES numbered at 6, WHO WILL BE NUMBER 1. JUDGING BEGINS 10/11/18 THIS SATURDAY, STAY TUNED.

rareform11/7/2018, 8:30:21 PM1 votes

My entry - https://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/JxgIum4I-icathias-ruin

Please Echoing, let me know before the 10th if my review passes the requirements. You disqualified me last time and didn't tell me until the contest was over, when I could've reviewed something else before the last day. Thank you.

xUnRavelx11/9/2018, 10:00:56 AM1 votes

so is my entry (Shelly) accepted or is that not. should i make a new one again lol

FlameHalbrdOkido11/13/2018, 4:12:34 AM1 votes

did i make it in?

ZaneShadow11/30/2018, 6:28:04 PM1 votes

Hello! Probably being a bit early off he block, but when will the next one begin?

LordChampa12/2/2018, 4:34:41 PM1 votes

still nothing m8? cmon i want to see the results, not that i am competing.. but im a champion concepts maniac and im hyped 4 results, i want to see results and enter the next one... cant wait, literally counting the minutes these 3 days [slayer-pantheon-rainbows]

Mr Voidling12/3/2018, 4:56:53 PM1 votes

Sure hope that it's happening this month, since I've been waiting to submit a champion but she was made near the end of last month so I probably can't submit her if it doesn't happen until January :\ It said 11/30, but I guess we'll see. [sg-soraka]

nasu01012/3/2018, 10:36:12 PM1 votes

lol so imagine how i feel I've still got like 8 champs to day view just waiting for this to end so i can get proper feed back

nasu01010/8/2018, 11:09:46 AM1 votes

Hahaha so much i can enter not sure who should participate so I'll do a random selection

And so we got

https://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/alenfkkP-loaloas-kit-and-play-style

Making a splash


https://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/GujzwrvW-champion-concept-briar-the-warrior-of-the-wood?comment=0005000000010000

And this is my contribution to the community am always here posting.


If you like my concept check out some more from my gallery

https://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/Eal50gAL-nasu-010-concepts-gallery

LordChampa12/6/2018, 9:35:40 PM1 votes

hey leave a tought on my concept for the next ccos i would appreciate it here [vlad-salute]

ModThe Djinn10/10/2018, 4:40:59 AM1 votes

I've threatened to do this for a while, and I rather like this concept, so you know what? Time to put my money where my mouth is and see how the judges like something of mine.

Sikandar, Xer'Sai's Bane

xUnRavelx10/13/2018, 1:36:56 PM1 votes