How To ADC Guide | Beginner/ Intermediate | League of Legends

DontGankMeISuck·Nov 15, 2016·1 votes·985 views

This is my new guide check it out!

Check out my thresh montage as well! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uamr7I70ne8

5 Comments

The LightningNov 16, 20161 votes

as an individual who watches youtube for just about every game i play, i have to say some things. now, dont take what i am saying as an attempt to belittle you or put you down; i want to see you be successful. with that being said, you don't have to take my advice at all. its up to you.

first up, using the words "umm" and "uhh" takes away from the information you are putting forward. the thing about youtube videos is that, unless they are being live streamed, you can edit them. for the instance of sounding more professional, and overall being more professional, retake the audio and follow a script if necessary. your speaking voice is pretty clear, but your ruining the experience with so many "umm"s and "uhhs" in the first 2 minutes. when i hear those, i feel like maybe you dont know what you are saying, even though you are showing that you know what you are doing.

next, the word "very" could be taken out every time you use it. for instance, at 5:18 you explain that staying ahead in gold versus your opponent is "very good to keep in mind as well". now, you could omit the "very good" and use "exceptional" or even "groovy" if you are feeling retro, or you could keep it how it is; it is up to you. i think it was Robin Williams that said (as a line in a movie) "So avoid using the word very because it is lazy. A man is not very tired, he is exhausted. Don't use very sad, use morose. Language was invented for one reason, boys: to woo women. And, in that endeavor, laziness will not do." Granted, I'll bet you aren't trying to pick up women with a LoL Youtube tutorial on ADC, but it wouldn't hurt to keep that in mind.

aside from those two things, i did enjoy the guide. if you avoid certain words and the stopping in sentences (i'm assuming from nervousness or inexperience with recording yourself), you'll do fine. you probably didnt want someone butchering your video, but i really do want to see you succeed. GL in the future.

Nice thresh montage, some of those hooks were impeccable. my favorite would be at 5:00 when you hook the poor vayne. lol

DontGankMeISuckNov 17, 20161 votes

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as an individual who watches youtube for just about every game i play, i have to say some things. now, dont take what i am saying as an attempt to belittle you or put you down; i want to see you be successful. with that being said, you don't have to take my advice at all. its up to you.

first up, using the words "umm" and "uhh" takes away from the information you are putting forward. the thing about youtube videos is that, unless they are being live streamed, you can edit them. for the instance of sounding more professional, and overall being more professional, retake the audio and follow a script if necessary. your speaking voice is pretty clear, but your ruining the experience with so many "umm"s and "uhhs" in the first 2 minutes. when i hear those, i feel like maybe you dont know what you are saying, even though you are showing that you know what you are doing.

next, the word "very" could be taken out every time you use it. for instance, at 5:18 you explain that staying ahead in gold versus your opponent is "very good to keep in mind as well". now, you could omit the "very good" and use "exceptional" or even "groovy" if you are feeling retro, or you could keep it how it is; it is up to you. i think it was Robin Williams that said (as a line in a movie) "So avoid using the word very because it is lazy. A man is not very tired, he is exhausted. Don't use very sad, use morose. Language was invented for one reason, boys: to woo women. And, in that endeavor, laziness will not do." Granted, I'll bet you aren't trying to pick up women with a LoL Youtube tutorial on ADC, but it wouldn't hurt to keep that in mind.

aside from those two things, i did enjoy the guide. if you avoid certain words and the stopping in sentences (i'm assuming from nervousness or inexperience with recording yourself), you'll do fine. you probably didnt want someone butchering your video, but i really do want to see you succeed. GL in the future.

Nice thresh montage, some of those hooks were impeccable. my favorite would be at 5:00 when you hook the poor vayne. lol

Hey Syren, I really do apperciate the feedback and yeah I do not have alot of experience. I couldve edited it out yes but half of this was scripted and the rest was just me going off my own words and thoughts as gameplay footage went along and I do apperciate the compliment on the thresh hooks haha. I will take your constructive criticism into play and make my videos better for the future I promise.

The LightningNov 18, 20162 votes

I look forward to seeing you grow and flourish as a future youtuber :D

DontGankMeISuckNov 18, 20161 votes

Thanks man! I do appreciate it.

DontGankMeISuckNov 21, 20161 votes

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z1JjbyAKaAI&t=335s Hey man this is my new guide! Check it out.