(Champion Idea) Jainyu, The Imprisoned

Green Guy Geno·11/20/2014, 4:39:20 AM·1 votes·1,493 views

This is my idea for a champion. I don't have a concept art or splash art (yet) for you to get an idea of what he looks like. However, I have done most of the thinking behind how he plays and interacts. So here is what I propose to the Institute of War: the recent escapee of Noxus's most unforgiving prison, Jainyu. I hope you enjoy this champion!

EDITS: (11/23/14) All changes are indicated by crossouts and bolds, but here's a rundown: -Swing Shackles gives one stacks of Stained Steel instead of 2. -Cold Steel Strike's Active will stun the target for one-fifth of a second times the stacks (5 Stacks = 1 Second) -Grasping Anguish no longer reduces cooldown or reduced damage. Instead, it will do the opposite (increased cooldown and damage if missed to a cap or succession). Special thanks to AGarner for thinking of this -Major Nerfs on Ultimate. Kills now diminish the durration of the ability for balance reasons. After a certain time, the bonus effects will start to decay overtime. -Added Suggestive Build

Lore: “Do you know who that man was?”

“No sir. All we found was this file. We tried to catch him, but he just disappeared from the scene.”

“The guy is fast, I’ll give him that. Quite impressive if I may-”

“Now’s not the time for that, brother”

“We need to know who we’re dealing with. You’ve seen what has done to those wardens. Imagine what he could do to our forces. It would be a lost cause if we try to go for him without any clues of weakness. Hand me that prison record, executioner.”

“Here you go, commando.”

“…”

----Subject 9102014 Prison Report---- Subject Name: Jainyu (CLASSIFIED) Gender: Male Species: Human Bloodtype: (CLASSIFIED) Fingerprints: (Separate File) Arcane: None (Unconfirmed) Eyes: Blue Age: (CLASSIFIED) Subject Number: 9102014 Subject Height: 6ft 10in Birthday: (CLASSIFIED) Birthplace: (CLASSIFIED) Martial Status: Single (Presumeably)

Brief History: At (CLASSIFIED) years old in (CLASSIFIED), date (CLASSIFIED), he was known for his whipping skills. He was considered as one of the best warriors of his village. He appears be skilled with both hands. However, in (CLASSIFIED), as the Noxians invaded his village, he fought to save his people. His skills prove to be great. Noxian forces greatly overpower him. The Noxian commander (CLASSIFIED) has crippled this man and made him watch as his people were mercilessly slaughtered by his forces. All he could do was scream to stop. When the attack ended (Successful), the Noxians took him to (CLASSIFIED) as prisoner. He is currently held in (CLASSIFIED) for (CLASSIFIED). His skills could be useful to Noxus.

Treatment: Torture to join Noxian Forces. Continue until final orders are received by (CLASSIFIED). If he continues to persist for (CLASSIFIED), then give him a chance with the executioner, (CLASSIFIED). WARNING: Appears to be mentally scarred (from onslaught of (CLASSIFIED)). Have anything necessary on standby.

Status: (CLASSIFIED): Persistent, shows signs of aggression. (CLASSIFIED): More persistent. Increasing signs of aggression. (CLASSIFIED): Silent. Aggression increases. (CLASSIFIED): Subject is acting more unpredictable. Rambles. (CLASSIFIED): Subject is…

----END OF REPORT----

“The rest of the report is ripped, sir. This is the only evidence we have found about this “Jainyu” person. What should we do now?”

“I say we should just go for it. Give him all that we go! What do you say, hotshot?”

“…”

“Commander?”

“Hey, hotshot. What’s wrong?”

“Darius. Draven. A manic that has lost all moral is on the loose. And he is thirsty for blood.”

** Roles:** Attack Type: Ranged Melee Primary: Assassin Secondary: Fighter, Support Primary Lane: Jungle Secondary Lane: Bottom, Top

Stats (100 Scale) Attack Damage: 100% Health: 78% Ability Power: 10% Difficulty: 78%

Abilities: (PASSIVE) Unstable Mind *Any time he is chasing someone, he gains increase movement speed. The first attack (basic or ability) will deal bonus damage. This ability can’t be used more than once for a period of time if the initial target persists. This can not be used on multiple enemies once it triggers on an opponent; you need to wait before it can be used again. Kills/Assists will allow the passive to refresh.

(Q) Swinging Shackles Jainyu swings his shackles around him, causing physical damage. Adds 2 stacks a stack of Stained Steel. If the target gets 5 stacks of Stained Steel, the target will be pushed away from Jainyu instead of adding a stack (meaning at 3+ **4+ **stacks, the target will be pushed). This consumes the stacks. Targets that collide with terrain while being pushed will receive additional physical damage.

(W) Cold Steel Strike Passive: Adds a stack of Stained Steel to an enemy (5 Max). Each stack will reduce the target’s armor and inflicts Grievous Wounds based on the stacks. Active: Jainyu will cripple a target with at least one stack of Stained Steel, dealing damage and stunning them for a period of time based on ** 1/5 seconds times how many stacks are on that target. Otherwise, those not afflicted will receive physical damage. The stacks would be consumed.

(E) Grasping Anguish Jainyu tosses his shackles towards an enemy, creating a tether, causing physical damage and sight. He can choose to reactivate this ability to real the target to him. If the shackles disconnect from the target or misses,~~ this ability’s cooldown is reduced by 50%, but the next activation will deal reduced damage (Does not stack)~~** the cooldown is increased by 50%, but the damage is also increased by (10%/20%/60%) + 10% of the targets maximum health. This effect increasing each miss for a total of three tries; after three tries or a successful hit, you lose all the bonus damage but your cooldown will return to normal. Suggested by AGarner **

(R) Blind Rage Jainyu gets consumed with insanity, increasing attack speed, movement speed~~, and armor.~~ While he's on the rampage, he is immune to slows and fears. Kills will reduce the cooldown and diminishes the durration of this ability. Targets at 5 Stacks of Stained Steel will receive a burst of damage for the duration of the ability (Consumes Stacks). Bonus effects given by this skill will begin to decay after a certain amount of time. This ability requires precise timing and planning, or it will be wasted.

Suggestive Build: item 1055 item 3252 item 3071 item 3072 item 3046 item 3022 item 3340

Ingame Quotes: Champion Selection: “I was left to rot. Was...”

Moving: “They tell me where to go.” “They will snap. One way or another…” “Come out, come out, wherever you are.” “I see them. Do you see them too?” “They know nothing about true pain. But they will…” “They will feel my pain.” “Do you hear them calling?” “ Laughter

Attacking (Basic): “DIE DIE DIE!!!!” “FEEL THE STEEL” “I HAVE THE SHINIEST MEAT BICYCLE!” (Reference to Borderlands) “Maniacal Laughter” “Intimidating Snarl

Using Q: -Normal Hit: “HA HA!” “SWING IT! AAAAH HAHAHAHAHA!” “Battle Cry” -Knockback: “STAY. BACK.” “GET AWAY FROM ME!” “Laughter”

Using W: “SUFFER!” “FEEL MY PAIN!” “STAY! STILL!” “COLD ISN'T IT?”

Using E: “Where do you think YOU’RE going?!” “Come back! COME BACK!” “Get over here!” (reference to Mortal Combat)

Using Ultimate: “HERE’S JAINYU!!!!” “Inhumane Laugther” “BERSERK SCREAMING!” (Reference to Borderlands)

Joke: “If you think you’re insane, that makes you sane. If you’ think you’re sane, you’re insane. Even THAT drives me insane! Swings shackles**Hits head Owwie!” “Yes I agree. He is kinda bossy. Hmm? Oh nothing, summoner. IT’S NONE OF YOUR BUISNESS! Swings shackles**Hits head Oh for the love of!” Rare: “Don’t get any ideas. I’m not interested in her. She’s too reckless.” “I don’t want to be involved with him. That smile is too creepy.”

Taunt: “I had to suffer, and so shall you!” “I will make you see what I’ve seen. Wait, you don’t want to? Too bad…”

Dance: Option 1: Moves like a Gandayak from Final Fantasy XIII 2 Option 2: The “Have a Filler” Dance (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HOmpfZ7h1HE&list=UUGdeRb1fqrkzMH13qrO2pDQ) Option 3: The “Spy Shuffle” Dance (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v_vgqUC9qag&list=UUGdeRb1fqrkzMH13qrO2pDQ)

Death: “Death Scream” “NOOOOOOO!” “Maniacal Screaming” “No Sound”

Special Interactions: Darius -“You….” Draven -“YOU CALL YOURSELF SKILLED?! AH HAHAHAHA!” -“Overconfident fool!” Swain: -“You should have stayed in your nest, bird!” -“You shall suffer what I had planned for those who imprisoned me!” Jinx -“They’re gonna make it happen. I just know it.” -“I’ll show you true insanity. You have no idea what I’ve been through.” Shaco -“Shack- who?” -“chuckles Oh I agree, he does look ridiculous. Oh, didn’t see you there.” -“You won’t be smiling when I’m through with you.”

11 Comments

Green Guy Geno11/20/2014, 4:44:34 AM1 votes

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AGarner11/20/2014, 6:41:57 AM1 votes

This is sooooo OP

GRIMFREAK11/20/2014, 7:00:22 PM1 votes

I like your idea, cool concept. I do agree, however that he is a little over powered. He sounds like he could take all the other champions on at once and when you're playing 5v5 that doesn't really work out fair for the other team. Anyways, I think it's a good idea to go off of, just tone him down so he isn't completely devastating. Good lore, good quotes, definitely looks like you put some time and thought into it. Keep at it, make some adjustments, I think this would be a cool champion.

AGarner11/23/2014, 4:37:09 PM1 votes

how about instead of the E cast dealing less damage but having a shorter cooldown for missing be the opponent as you have a lot of utility.

"If jainyu misses the target (meaning he doesn't hit a minion or a champion) the cool down is increased by %50 but the damage is also increased by %10/%20/%60 + %10 of the targets maximum health (increasing each miss for a total of three stacks, after three stacks is reach if you miss you lose all the stacks) this makes it balanced because it will have such a long cooldown and you'll have to decide over utility or burst damage."

EDIT: just to clarify at the end the cooldown will be %150 percent of its original so it stacks as well.

Green Guy Geno1/8/2019, 4:27:12 PM1 votes

Um hey uh Riot? Sylas sounds familiar.