|CHAMPION CONCEPT| Enoc - Guardian angel

Ksyksao·8/18/2016, 11:34:31 PM·1 votes·603 views

Hello people,

I had one concept already, but let's hope this one will do better.

I really want more supports in the game and so my concept is about support class. And YES again yordle..

Let's start with some lore:

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Enoc - Guardian angel

Before Enoc got his blessing, he was living in Bandle city as guardian of purity. Enoc promised his life to serve for good, protect innocent, and punish evil. He was a skilled archer, but the main reason he was able to kill demon spirits were hextech arrowheads made by Heimerdinger. They could penetrate magic, shields and disable every effect. One night he was hearing voice screaming with similiar noise around. He found out that noise was what evil spirits do. But he didn't know what the voice should mean. So beautiful voice, had to scream. So pure and clean. And scream was so painful and full of woe. One day he could see something what he have never seen before. An angel appeared before his eyes. Her beautiful face was full of tears. She wasn't alone. She came to Enoc with another angel lying in pain. That angel had patterns of black magic on him. His scream was exactly same like what Enoc heard before. She said to Enoc, that he was corrupted by black magic and she knows that Enoc guard Bandle city from demons. With seas of tears in her eyes, she wanted Enoc to kill the corrupted angel to end his suffering. She said that angels are immortal, but if he will be successfull, Enoc will become an angel for his services against evil. With hextech arrowheads, Enoc penetrated angels heart, from where dark magic patterns started. Disabling all magic, hextech arrowheads did their work. Looking at dead angel, Enoc got blessing and two majestic wings came from his back. Enoc started to scream, with sorrows dropping on the dust. He killed a being that was holy and so pure. After while he pleased into the skies that he don't want blessing to be angel but rather wish to give life back to dead angel. After while of screams, one of his wing started to dissappear slowly. Dead angel took a breath and came back to life right when Enoc's wing dissappeared. He was surprised why the second one on the left side of his body was still there. That angel's sister said, that Enoc sacrificed his gift given to him and he gave a wing for a life, but with his behavior and what Enoc did, he deserve to keep the angels blessing. After that Enoc with one wing given for life and one still on his left side of the back closer to his heart, went with angels to fight the evil. In golden armor, golden helmet with aurora on it, golden bow with silver feathers on it and one wing, Enoc is considered as guardian angel of all good.

My bad englando didn't wish Enoc's lore, buuut em, I hopefully you can solve what I wrote Ziggs


About Enoc's skills:

P - Angel's Wish - Whenever an ally dies, Enoc will grow second spiritual wing and can revive one ally instantly. Cooldown 120 sec.

Q - Holy feathers - Enoc swings his wing and release golden feathers in triangle radius, if it hits an enemy - he blinds him for 3 seconds. if it hits an ally - grants attack speed.

W - Angels mark - Enoc marks a location on the ground, allies standing in that circle get regeneration, after few seconds get shield.

E - Hextech Dreamchaser - Enoc shoot an arrow, if he hits an enemy, creating path behind enemy, increasing movement speed for Enoc and allies if they are on the path, and disables all positive effects from that enemy.

R - Globaly Enoc can sacrifice his defensive stats, giving them to an ally for 15 sec. Enoc can cancel it. When an ally has less than 25% hp, effect doubles.


Oh and his quotes would be in "angel language"

Again sorry for my language skill, but I hope you get it, you like it, you vote it, and they add it and finally me and you play it.

Thank you for your time.

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1 Comments

Ninja Baby one8/25/2016, 6:24:54 PM1 votes

So I focus most on kit because that's where I lie most of my work usually. His Passive: A reactive revive is too strong. All current revive effects are pro-active, meaning they have to be used before someone dies, Like Zilean's Ult. Having it possible to activate after an ally dies is too strong. I don't think this would work well as a passive as it's too strong. An increase in Cooldown will not save the spell, it'll just make it more clonky. His Q: Just needs some scaling. Shouldn't be 3 second blind at rank 1. His W: Dependant on the size of the AOE it could be either great or bad. An area around the size of Akali's stealth could work. His E: First part of the spell is fine, but do not disable positive effects. I've seen it time and time again and it destroys some champions, making them completely useless with just a basic spell. I will make a list of all the characters that get extremely useless at the end of the comment to show you how bad this would hurt some champions. His R: A defensive boost is not something you want on an ultimate. If someone needs it, it's likely that they are likely under attack and if they're caught out, no amount of Armor can save them. The entire spell needs rework, sorry.

List of champions hurt by this guy's E, some of them to the point of being useless: Aatrox Akali Alistar Amumu Anivia Annie Bard Blitzcrank Corki Darius Diana DrMundo Draven Evelynn Ezreal Fizz Galio Garen Gnar Heimerdinger Illaoi Janna Jinx Karthus Kayle Kennen Khazix Kindred KogMaw Lissandra Lulu Malzahar Maokai MasterYi MissFortune Mordekaiser Morgana Nasus Nautilus Nidalee Nocturne Nunu Shen Shaco Rumble Riven Rengar Renekton RekSai Rammus Quinn Pantheon Shyvana Singed Sion Sivir Skarner Sona Soraka Swain Taliyah Talon Taric Teemo Thresh Trundle Tryndamere TwistedFate Twitch Udyr Vayne Vladimir Volibear Warwick MonkeyKing Xerath Yorick Zilean