[Community Champion Concepts] Delora the Crystal Wrath

Nameless Hero·5/1/2015, 8:25:07 AM·1 votes·1,405 views

Hello Guys, I'm taking a break from my work and posting a new champion with a new type of creation process. CCCs are fan REQUESTS that may or may not work in the League of Legends universe but whatever, the idea is to have fun. The ideas are not mine. They are community creations.

For the first CCC, the request comes from Occams Raiser who wanted a black female pressure point void-touched berserker martial artist and requested a lore to kickstart her bio. Well, I made a bio but since then, it seems that he forgot about her and I figured that the lore was too good to go to waste so here it is:

Base Delora the Crystal Wrath Role: Tanky top/ tanky jungler Range: Melee

Inspiration: Theme: Beauty and the Beast Personality: The Incredible Hulk Is most similar to: Wikus from District 9 Q Ability: Butcher - Rei from Fist of the North star

LORE

"Hello little bird, it seems that ...today will be our last lesson" The crystalline monster, blood dripping from its claws, tightened its grip around the old man's neck

"Let's try to ...introduce ourselves. Tell me who you are"

**I AM TERROR! I AM DEATH! I AM THE SCOURGE FROM THE VOID! **

"Try again... little bird... remember who you are"

**I AM THE SLAYER! I DESTROYED THE CITY OF EE! COUNTLESS MEN HAVE DIED FROM MY WRATH! ** The fire was blazing fiercely, casting sinister shapes on the horribly mangled corpses of the assassins. It was only a matter of time before the whole demacian tavern would collapse

"You were just...defending ...yourself. Demacia...3 regiments...ambush. Could not... control" I AM A MONSTER! THOSE WERE MY FRIENDS! MY COMRADES IN ARMS! And I BUTCHERED them just like that crystalline horror butchered my arms!

“You...are right. But the Crystal Curse...is not you! Who... are you? _The monstrous creature was shaking violently. Struggling mightily, the crystal creature fought to control her breathing and gradually, the crystal carapace receded revealing a young woman with skin like ebony. _

"I... I am...was a captain of the Purifiers until that mission where that...that void horror took away my arms and replaced them with those... those monstrosities" As the woman regained control over herself, she let go of the old man, revealing the noxian dagger that was planted in his chest.

I am sorry old man. I almost killed you and it looks like you don't have long before you die

"Rubbish!" said the old man in his dying breath. "You almost SAVED me and you finally managed to control the beast. Now, do... you know... who... you... are?"

"Yes," said the ebony warrior.

I am Delora the Crystal Wrath and whoever did this shall pay with their lives!

GENERAL DESIGN PHILOSOPHY Delora is a brutal melee fighter that gets more dangerous the more she gets hit. Her right arm has been brutally severed by a void horror and in its place, a malevolent crystal growth has started developping that is threatening to take over her whole body. The crystal growth is threatening her sanity and Delora is in danger of losing herself to psychotic rampages if she does not control her impulses.

** APPEARANCE** Since this is a relatively new concept, I could not find any relevant art. However, I did find pictures that are close to what I had in mind http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/guiltycrown/images/e/ec/Guilty_crown-19-shu-crystal-arm-regeneration-void-power.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20120302131624 Shu From Guilty Crown

http://flafly.deviantart.com/art/ice-girl-281414277?q=special:dd&qo=4 Ice Girl by Flafly

http://th03.deviantart.net/fs70/200H/f/2012/353/5/c/girl_monster_arm_by_fasslayer-d5ojefj.jpg Girl monster arm by FASSLAYER

GAMEPLAY Ionian Meditation - An old man taught me that Passive: Delora uses her meditation techniques to control her wrath. Basic attacks or getting hit reduces her control, increases her armor and fills her rage meter.

Q: Butcher Delora extends her crystal growth into fearsome needles and stabs in a line in front of her. Needles are then broken off. Victims afflicted by needles receive more damage.

W: Leave me alone! Delora extends her crystal growth into a thick carpace all around her that knockbacks any melee attackers. She gains alot of armor for a short duration but uses a lot of rage.

E: Crystal Slice Delora extends her crystal growth into fearsome claws and dashes in front of her. Slicing everything in her path.

R: Crystal Wrath Delora completely gives in to bloodlust and lets the crystal growth take over her whole body. She is rooted in place and all her abilities are transformed. Butcher becomes a hook that drags heroes to her. W spikes the ground around her. E lets her deal 5 slashes on nearby enemies. QWE are completely independant and she can wait for her q to drag her unwilling victims while focusing on a nearby melee enemy.

So here's my first draft of Delora. All crticisms are welcome.

If you liked that champion concept, you can check out more champions that I made: Su the wandering calligrapher

1 Comments

Nameless Hero5/1/2015, 1:44:03 PM1 votes

Hey guys, what do you think of her? I tried a different approach on her lore to make it more cinematic.

Drafting her lore was kind of fun from mixing what with all those different and weird elements. If anyone posts any weird or interesting concept, i'll try to draft a lore for it. No promises though. It could be a total fail or a total troll. :)