barrand,the shield of shadows

Skarner the scop·1/7/2016, 10:32:11 PM·2 votes·733 views

+no this is not a zed copy this is my own idea name: Golzir shadowblade selection quote: alive again hmm? make it worth my while nationality: formerly: what was before the shadow isles currently:demacia occupation: formerly:guard to the ruined king currently: tactician and minister of defense of demacia age: 3000 years(he was alive for 1000) (asleep for another 1000) and awoken again for 1000 years until now appearance: Golzir wears heavy black armor and grey eyes his weapons are a pair of bucklers on his arms and yes they are spiked and with demonic faces think 2 small wanyudo from japanese mythology and he has a brown goatee and he wears a helmet with the visor open so you can assume his hair is brown too

lore: "we found the suspect with deep gashes throughout his body,he constantly mumbled something about a demon that will come for him by dawn and he said something about a pair of bladed shields chained to his wrists and daggers hidden in his sleeves the 2 of us were surprised to see the "demon" in front of us with black armor a helmet a pair of bucklers on his arms and 14 daggers in a pouch on his back he said:"do you hear them?" "the shadows an unholy cacophony of screams is just DELIGHTFUL TO MY EARS" we tried to run and we hid under a desk as he then said" ah ah ahhh" before he dragged james from under the desk and i had to watch as he flung him around with his shields until he stopped and said "you are just a treat you know?" RUNETERRA WILL KNOW MY IMPRISONMENT FOR 1000 YEARS AS IT'S LAST MISTAKE

that was the last report from alex pucker and james tanner "

passive: dark shields Golzir's shields inflict a debuff called "sickening plague" which reduces magic resist for 4 seconds and increases his damage to them and HIS alone to the target.the debuff is dealt by autos

q: shadow charge Golzir braces himself for 2 seconds before brutally charging forward stunning his foe upon impact scales with ability power 100/200/200/300/500 range as long as vi q but he can cancel it for increased armor for 3 seconds w: broken oath Golzir remembers his oath to the ruined king and becomes filled with wrath increasing his damage and attack speed for 5 seconds by 6% 5/7/8/10/15 scales with ad(70%) e: forgotten promise Golzir is reminded of the cause of his original death,betrayal by his own family healing him for 300 of his missing health and knocking up an enemy on his next auto attack scales with ap(50% of ap) 300/500/800/800/1000

r: banshee's wail (no not like the item) Golzir screams into the sky giving all enemy players the "sickening plague" debuff for 10 seconds after 3 seconds or if he dies during the effect of the debuff he deals damage to all the enemy players by calling down a rain of shadow arrows on them doing 1/10% of their current health 500/900/1400 (+90%) ap

friends and reasons for being allies with them

sona: he was delighted by her music already from childhood both were in the same orphanage and he once stated to a bunch of kids who called her "mute" that they will be just as mute and much less alive if they continue pretty much her guardian watching from the shadows(allow me to clarify) when Golzir first died his incorporeal form/his shadow was watching several champions throughout time and more often than not he would stand aside but he even states that the only reason he allowed sona not only to see him but to even"speak" to him was because he felt an odd feeling he had not felt for ages(can you guess where this is going? and that started when she was an adult) he even taunts her directly stating :NO WHAT HAVE I DONE!? or in a saddened voice: forgive me it had to come to this

garen: while garen is known as the dauntless vanguard

he is known as the unbreakable shield and his lore is actually one of the many atrocities he commited before joining demacia in which case he is more calm and collected and is basically demacia's swain because he is a tactician but he does not plan to overthrow the lightshield family

and last but not least(definitely) caitlyn even though she still hunts him for working with jinx which he did not do because of the fact that he despises people like her and even considers himself his own enemy because of how mad he once was when he was brought back to life when he clarified to her that he is just been sleeping for the last 2000 years she told him that another Golzir surfaced WHICH ENRAGED HIM that is another reason for him joining demacia to find the traitor and slay him

1 Comments

lordlightskin621/7/2016, 10:51:09 PM1 votes

Cool champ idea, bro. I'm going to go over a list of some things you might want to change, if that's cool. I'll try to limit my suggestions to mechanics purely.

passive: dark shields barrand's shields inflict a debuff called "sickening plague" which reduces magic resist for 4 seconds and increases his damage to them and HIS alone to the target

How does he induce the debuff? Through being auto attacked, or through damage in general? In that case, can the dragon and/or baron receive the "Sickening Plague" buff? Might want to add that in.

q: shadow charge barrand braces himself for 2 seconds before brutally charging forward stunning his foe upon impact scales with ability power 100/200/200/300/500

When he braces himself, does he channel like Shyvana ult, or Malzahar suppress? What is the range of his dash/charge?

w: broken oath barrand remembers his oath to the ruined king and becomes filled with wrath increasing his damage and attack speed for 5 seconds by 6%

What is the increase between level 1-5? For example, 3%/6%/9%/12%/15%

e: forgotten promise barrand is reminded of the cause of his original death,betrayal by his own family healing him for 300 of his missing health and knocking up an enemy on his next auto attack scales with ap

Again, increase on ability level up with the heal. Also, might want to add how much it scales by.

r: banshee's wail (no not like the item) barrand screams into the sky giving all enemy players the "sickening plague" debuff for 10 seconds after 3 seconds or if he dies during the effect of the debuff he deals damage to all the enemy players by calling down a rain of shadow arrows on them

How much damage does he deal? Also, damage increase between levels?

Overall, your champ could go through much more work. Not bad where he is, but certainly not the best. I'll link to some of the most well done champ concept pages, one of them my own. (humble brag)

http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/M3ERPQq6-champion-concept-sierra-the-bandit-of-freljord http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/YfPBRhOE-champion-concept-ocea-mistress-of-seas http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/5h6lNXNG-champion-concept-warren-the-puppetmaster-revamped