.. Why did I make another OC?

Queen Mae·12/31/2017, 12:04:49 AM·1 votes·387 views

Critique is wanted

Name: Shane

Title: the Night Step

Gender: Male

Age: 17

Ethnicity: Noxus

Eye Color: Green

Skin Color: Peanut tan

Hairstyle and Hair Color: Shane has short hair with half a straight bang(kinda like Rem from Re: Zero). His hair is green with a black streak on the bang.


Personality: Shane is very temperamental. He doesn't like to wait on things. Shane often is very annoyed by anyone who gets near him. He's also pretty rude. Shane secretly is friendly and bittersweet once you get to know him for a little while.

Strengths/Talents: Shane is smart and can pick up orders easily. He can also move quickly and delivers hard to heal blows. Shane is surprisingly good at making sweets as well. Shane is good at ball-dances as well.

Flaws: Shane is very easily overworked when he's fighting more than three people at a time. Shane also is sort of clumsy when it comes to holding small things. Shane has low stamina

Weapon: Shane uses a whip with a large metal lancelike tip and small spikes near the top of the rope. The whip is mainly shades of black and dark grey. The spikes have a slight green shine to them. Shane almost looks like he dances when he uses his whip.


Outfit: Shane wears a semi-thick leather black coat with a silk vest underneath. He has shoulder pads on his shoulder. He wears dark beige cloth pants and decent black leather shoes with a small spike that comes out on the heel of the right shoe.


Friends: Shane is the only Noxian Riven kept as a friend. Shane is somewhat friends with Talon. Shane is good friends with Katarina.

Enemies: Shane doesn't enjoy Draven when he's around. Shane disliked having Darius as a commander. He despises Lux and Fiora.

Crush: Shane has a crush on Katarina and sometimes visits her secretly. He sort of has a crush on Riven

Likes: Shane likes baking sweets and wearing fancy clothing. Shane also likes baking sweets. Shane enjoys dancing to soft, colorful music. He enjoys roses and reading. Shane likes crows a lot because they sometimes flock to him when he's eating or when he's dancing.

Dislikes: Shane dislikes loud noises and huge parties. He dislikes being around lots of people at once. He dislikes beating around the bush and likes to get to the point.


In Game:

Abilities:

Passive: Careful steps

Whenever Shane is near a trap that is invisible a ! will appear and the trap will be canceled for 1 second. Shane cannot see the trap, only sense it's there.

Shane has tenacity scaling with level as well

Q: Stinger

Shane twirls around and lashes his whip forward dealing damage scaling with AD.

Base Damage: 25/40/46/70

Cooldown: 10/7/5/3

W: Spike Step

The spike on Shane's shoe comes out and Shane's next basic attack is a step on the opponent dealing damage scaling with AD and bleeding the target.

Base Damage: 30/50/70/100

Cooldown: 9/6/4/2

E: Over To You

Shane throws his whip and dashes to the target. He then spins his whip around dealing damage. Shane gains 35/40/45/60 bonus movement speed after he spins

Base Damage: 60/78/80/93

R: Let's Dance

Shane throws his whip and pulls an enemy champion to him. He then consistently whips his target. If they are below half health he will execute them.

During the execute like Urgot's thing the player's screen turns red and white roses turn red.

Cooldown: 2 minutes/1.5 minutes/56 seconds

How to use him:

Shane is very squishy. He gets one-shot and has very little escape. Play carefully until you max your first item. Once he gets his item run from him. If you see his ultimate it very wise to run away or flash. His skillshots are skinny and hard to land. Especially his ultimate.

Lanes:

Midlane: Like Zed and Talon, Shane is a squishy AD assassin played in midlane.

Top Lane: Shane can be played top lane, but Shane is mainly midlane

Jungle: Shane can be played jungle, but it is very hard since he doesn't have the best clears.

Adc: Shane sucks as an adc. He is ranged, but has short range.

Support: Shane isn't a support unless you count his E.

Role: Shane is an assassin/fighter

Build: Shane build lethality and attack damage. If you really want to build crit.


TL;DR Lore:

Shane was a wealthy child born in Noxus. He then was forced to fight. He picked up a whip and made his own adjustments to it. He was partnered alongside Riven to go slaughter an Ionian village. Shane got bored and walked out of the village to set off on his own.

1 Comments

Queen Mae1/5/2018, 6:02:13 PM1 votes

Could someone please give me some criticism... I want to improve..