[CCOS] April CCOS Entry Time! Enter Here!

ModEchoing·4/6/2018, 2:32:55 PM·13 votes·33,436 views

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Greetings everyone! Welcome again to this month's Community Concept Open Stage. In this contest, I ask for any and all Champion Concepts posted in the months of March and April (that have not been entered in a CCOS prior), and run it by a temporarily anonymous panel of fellow Summoners! If you're interested at all, read on! Everything is detailed below.

Contents: List of Entrants | Prizes | Entry Requirements | How to Enter | Timeline | Scoring | Judges Needed! | FAQ | Support the CCOS!

Entrants (7/30): Lynn, the Intruder Tor, the Techmaturgical Thermomancer Telford, the Beast Siulv, the Scarlet Orphan MORE DARKIN Shil'Ka, the Darkin that Chose Sir Oswald, the Humble Knight Mallus, the Deacon of the Demons

Note: Don't hesitate to call out errors, mistakes happen!

Prizes:

  • Top 5 concepts will be highlighted and praised in the results announcement.
  • ALL entries will have a score associated with their concept in the scoring categories as well as a good chance at feedback and critiques.

Entry Requirements:

  • Limit ONE entry per player.
  • Concept Entries must be posted this month, or have been posted last month (as in this month; April 2018, and last month; March 2018), and never entered in a CCOS before.
  • No WIP Concepts please. This contest is here to encourage complete content. WIP Concepts will be disqualified and / or ineligible for points.
  • Concept Entries must be YOURS. If the linked Concept's author and your name are different, your entry will be disqualified, and / or rendered ineligible for points.
  • Entries will be taken from now until the 2nd.
  • All entries must at least have a LORE and a KIT section to be considered a concept. More is needed to remain competitive, but to proceed to judging, you need at least that. Concepts without a LORE and a KIT by the time judging begins will be considered a WIP Concept, and thus disqualified and / or ineligible for points.
  • The first 30 entries will be taken. Any posts above that limit will not be entered.
  • Entrants can be disqualified and / or be ineligible for points based on rude behavior towards other entrants / judges (though negative feedback, so long as it is constructive, is fine), as well as disregarding of the Universal Forum Rules (no, porn is NOT a legitimate reference image). Other major problems may also qualify.
  • You must include a meaningful review of another community member's work that, at the time of writing, is NOT in the CCOS, and provide a link to it in your linked concept,. Failure to do so will result in disqualification. If you have to ask what "meaningful" is, give them the kind of review you would want to see on your concept.

How to Enter:

  1. Post your concept normally within the Skin & Champion Concepts Board, if it's not already posted.
  2. Reply to THIS POST with a link to Step 1.
  3. Wait for me to reply with "Entry Confirmed!". If it takes more than a few days for me to reply, don't hesitate to remind me! I might've missed you!
  4. Watch the "Current Entrants" List above and double check that you're up there, if you are, then you're in!

Note: There is max of THIRTY slots.

Timeline:

4/6/18: CCOS starts. 4/17/18: Entries close, judging begins. 4/28/18: Judging stops, results announced.

Scoring:

Scoring is based on this rubric:

CHARACTERIZATION: 0-10 points How well you sell your character personality and/or concept. A low score means you're pitching a generic, cliche, or simply bland character, or rehashing an old concept in a trite manner. A high score means you're delivering a fully fleshed out, unique, engaging personality, crafting a brilliant story that draws the reader's attention, or putting a revolutionary spin on a concept.

FANTASY FULFILLMENT 0-10 points How well your kit and lore interact to sell the character and the fantasy. A low score here means the two feel like alien concepts or simply don't mesh, while a high score indicates that every moment spent in game with the champion lines up to what you'd expect that character to deliver.

BALANCE POTENTIAL: 0-10 points Not how well your kit's numbers ARE balanced, but how well they COULD be balanced without major adjustments to the design. We don't expect you to get numbers 100% right, but it's still easy to tell if something is balance-able or simply unworkable. A low score here means that something fundamental in the kit or playstyle is simply irreparable, while a high number means that the character delivers fair, reasonable mechanics that a little tuning can make nearly perfect.

GAMEPLAY OUTPUT: 0-10 points How well your kit functions in an actual game, and how well it fulfills the role/roles expected of it. A low score here means your kit fails to provide a solid reason to pick it, OR your kit is so overloaded that it warps the game in bad ways. A high score here means the champion is solidly built and has something unique and pick-worthy to bring to the table, but isn't overbearing compared to other, similar choices.

GAMEPLAY FLOW: 0-10 points How it feels to play as or against your kit. A low score means your kit is clunky, awkward, impossibly difficult, or otherwise frustrating to play as, or, conversely, that it is infuriating or perhaps impossible to meaningfully play against. A high score means that your kit is fun to play, offers opportunities to express player skill, and provides meaningful counterplay.

ELEGANCE & FOCUS: 0-10 points How much unnecessary baggage your design has. A low score here means your kit is awkward, clunky, and possibly full of tiny insignificant or unnecessary components that muddy up the design. A high score here means your kit does what it intends to do as simply and elegantly as possible, to the point that any added mechanics would feel like added bloat, and any removed mechanics would feel like you're harming the very core of the character's mechanical design.

Note: If you have any questions on a category, I'd be happy to go into more detail.


TOTAL: 0/60, averaged between all judges.

It's also important to note that, to give some context, The Djinn thinks that most official Riot champions would earn between a 40 and a 55. Just helpful to provide some context for these numbers.

Judges Needed: So if you're at all interested in judging this month, E-Mail me at '[email protected]' and I'll give you more info. I encourage lots of questions! I ALWAYS need more judges, and there is no detriment to stop trying and walk away halfway through (because a lot can come up over the course of a month).

I do ask that all judges fill out the rubric and provide feedback for every champion. If you don't, I can't accept your scores.

FAQ:

But I've never made a Concept before....

Honestly, just give it your best shot. Try searching up other CCOS entries and look at what won first place. Focus on what makes your champion unique from everyone else. Imagine playing against it - is this guy going to be permabanned like Zed or Yasuo? Study up on how Riot writes their lore.

Or just reference Sir ArmaMalum's Introduction to Champion Concepts. That works too.

I have a WIP Concept...

Feel free to post and work on your Concept as much as you want. It's not technically entered until you provide the link to the entries thread. Just make sure you're not the 31st entry or beyond, and that the Concept was either made in March or April, and has not yet been entered into a CCOS!

I don't have a Concept, and I don't have time to judge, but I want to help!

This is still cool. The single best way for you to help is to give feedback. Negative or positive, just make sure it's constructive, and that the author can use it effectively if they choose to do so.

Can I change my Concept after entry?

As encouraging feedback and Concept participation is a major motive behind this contest, I encourage iterating on a Concept, HOWEVER you have to be able to argue it's still the same champion, so no major changes. Otherwise, it will have to count as a new entry, with your previous entry being disqualified. Please keep in mind that your entry doesn't start until you provide the link here; If you want feedback before entering I advise you to simply post it normally, and provide the link when you feel you're ready. Just be sure to enter before the entry period ends, and before we hit 30 entries!

Does that mean I can't swap out my Concept completely?

No. So long as there's still room left, you can completely swap out your Concept. If we're at 30 entries and you want to change, then I can't allow that.

Should I drop out?

You can, but there's no opportunity cost to staying in, so I'd recommend you just go the distance.

Can I change my Concept after judging starts?

Yes, but this may not be the smartest thing to do. The judges peruse the entries at their own pace once judging begins, in whatever order they desire. This means there is no guarantee that your changes will be seen by every judge. If you do make changes, especially late in the judging period, you have to be prepared for a score that does not accurately reflect your final Concept.

Will there be any specific themed CCOSes?

I've considered the idea. I don't think it's a good idea to run them in place of the CCOS since they might exclude some up and coming concepts, but if anyone wanted to take the initiative and run their own themed CCOS, such as one where all contestants HAVE to have been a prior entry, I'd very much endorse it. I'd do it myself, but one's enough.

What's it take to host the CCOS?

If you're not judging? Not much - have some Google sheets for scoresheets to pass out to the judges and make sure you get them all back by the end.

What's it take to judge?

You need to be able to understand why certain design choices are made. It's not enough that a concept looks cool, it needs to make sense from a design perspective and still be fun to play and at least defeatable by opponents. You also need to be able to identify the individual parts of each champion and how they work toward one whole champion. If you're in the habit of posting long good neighbor reviews, or if you've scored in the top five in any CCOS, you're in a good spot here. If you're the kind of guy that can't muster even a paragraph for another concept, I'd suggest refraining or improving upon your critical analysis skills.

Support the CCOS: Some of you have been doing this already, but if you'd like to support the CCOS, as well as get more people involved each month, provide a link to this post on your entry so that others can find it easier. This lets the CCOS accrue more visibility without anyone needing to spam reminders. This is by no means a requirement, but thanks to anyone who does help out!

Above all else, have fun!

40 Comments

Wrathful Chicken4/13/2018, 9:35:32 PM3 votes

https://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/mAR7WasG-champion-concept-zara-the-cryptic-king

I offer my first champion to this contest. Make way for the Ruined King reborn.

Serpexnessie4/7/2018, 2:44:08 AM2 votes
MrShunpo5/31/2018, 7:19:50 AM2 votes
bigchubs4/8/2018, 1:20:31 AM1 votes

https://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/zb4l9mlm-sir-oswald-the-humble-knight

Been working on this guy for awhile, finally decided to finish him and post him here. Good luck to everyone else, can't wait to see what you guys come up with. Cheers!

Othello the Cat4/8/2018, 12:13:09 PM1 votes

Hey again! I'd like to submit Mallus, the Deacon of the Demons to this CCOS! Trying my hand at a champion that doesn't fit directly into a playstyle, so hopefully it'll work out!

foxpower20014/11/2018, 7:01:11 AM1 votes

https://boards.euw.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/community-creations-en/PMEN3E9A-rackid-the-demon-tamer

https://boards.euw.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/community-creations-en/hAoe6wQm-c-punk-the-augmented-horror

https://boards.euw.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/community-creations-en/rHz9buAm-new-champion-idea-i-am-making

i want to introduce myself just a liitle bit i am roy bloemendaal from the netherlands i made champion concepts sinds i started league of legends my first champion concept ever was a champion like kai'sa kai'sa wasnt even released yet and so i had some similar ideas for him. i made him in the year 2017 sadly dont know where the drawings are, but if i find them i show them here's a link of the champion ideas of that time https://boards.euw.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/community-creations-en/UuBwbboF-champion-idea-time

Seoshi4/15/2018, 8:00:04 PM1 votes

https://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/rX2uE5xz-champion-concept-yuna-the-dragoness

Ionia always protects her children. Yuna, the Dragoness is ready for her grand debut

Fine Ionian Silk4/15/2018, 10:00:38 PM1 votes

Hello, I have returned (this time not as a judge) to the CCOS! I look forward to hearing feedback for Cyril the Warmth Seeker. :D

nasu0104/21/2018, 6:51:36 PM1 votes

Ok so first time here so here's my pitch Tallow the frostborn ,born in the frozen tundra of the feljord Tallow had to rely on his with to survive the harsh environment one day while he was out hunting he lost his way and came upon a vast carven leading into the snowy peaks the light was fast fading and he decided that it would be dangerous to stay in the cold tundra night and ventured into the cave not knowing what was in there he decided to stay only a few feet from the entrance in case he needed to make a hasty escape while he slept he felt as though the heat and life was being sapped from him and decided to go even further in to avoid the fridgid winds blowing near the entrance equipt with a hunting bow he made from the bones of a dieing wolf he noticed a faint light glowing in the cave moving in the shadows of the cave he came upon a stone alter which looked as if it had frozen and carved by the winds looking about the cave he saw nothing but 2 flame pillars burning an irridecent blue and an orb shaped relic with his weapon in hand he moved toward it feeling nothing not even the cold as though the room was a void possibly outside of time he figured it beats sleeping in the cold entrance and decides sleep near the alter that night while Tallow slept he visioned a wolf entering the cavern and walking towards the alter he was somehow floating above the relic watching what transpired the wolf brought in a rabbit and placed it at the alter sitting back and watching as the rabbit froze into ice and altogether vanish into the relic at that point his image decended to the front of the cavern entrance and the wolf dadhed into him emmiting a pulse as it howled Tallow shaken from ihs dream awoke to an empty alter frightfully looking about he cought his reflection in the ice walls of the cave his skin had the same as the flames which burned at the alter his breath was ice and he could no longer feel the warmth of his blood looking at his hand the blue surge couple only be his blood as though frozen his self but somehow alive he recollected his dream and found no evidence of anything coming into the cavern and decided to leave, at the entrance he realized he had left his bow but by the mere thought one materialized in his arms a bow made completely of ice , sturdy hard and tought drawing on the string he felt the hum and there before him stood a silver wolf howling before it returned to the bow Tallow grinned as he stepped out of the cavern rasing he head to new snowy day he was reborn. Tallow the frostborn,Apc marksman,mage/assissan
Passive path of frost (from frozen rabbit) leaves a trail of frost giving allies extra movement speed and slowing enemies who pass in the trail. Basic attack fires magic arrows dealing frost stacks 6stacks root target 3sec-5 sec.Q wolf dash mid range skill shot hold to channel for distance adds 3frost stacks and deals additional magic damage to fear targets .W howling wind aoe selfcast fear and slow 6-8sec +2 frost stacks E ice pounce fires a magic wolf arrow at Target transporting Tallow to Target area also leaves path of frost effect in area for 12sec.R cold front The wolf howls Freeing Tallow from movement restrictions and causing him to enter wolf sync for 3 mins (increases magic damage shorten cooldowns and empowers abilities)(Empowered Q wolf dash gains increase range and is recastable for 3 times .W selfcast knoch back and root 5sec frozen targets take additional damage from all sources.E extended area of path of frost and summons 2 frost wloves to roam and attack and revel enimes in area adds 2frost stacks and increases slow %and duration. Tallow; "a lone Wolf steps from the shadows under the moon on a frozen tundra" By Nasu010

Cute Grill4/26/2018, 11:57:08 AM1 votes
ExpStealer5/10/2018, 1:24:19 PM1 votes
AcidTheWarlock5/10/2018, 9:14:54 PM1 votes

Are these still a thing or nah?

Melborne6/1/2018, 7:46:15 PM1 votes
nasu0106/4/2018, 7:13:55 PM1 votes

Hey so am not sure if this is still live pretty sure the deadline was couple months ago but there's no new thread on in closing or announcing a winner so here's my newest champion concept I think I Also already placed one though

https://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/alenfkkP-loaloas-kit-and-play-style

Psychoaryama6/5/2018, 1:38:22 AM1 votes

Okay, at least I'm not the only one wondering where the CCOS went after April.

EvilGrinNol7/8/2018, 12:08:12 AM1 votes

Hey, so, not to be an jerk or anything but is nobody doing this any more?

Eclairius4/7/2018, 2:02:51 PM1 votes