Ole Steelo The Western Robot

Borgamagos·7/19/2015, 9:51:33 PM·5 votes·2,570 views

Ole Steelo

PASSIVE: Self Destruct - When Steelo hits 10% health he starts overheating and starts dealing damaging sparks in an area around him. If he dies he explodes dealing damage in an area around were he died. (like cogmaw's passive except he cant move like karthus)

(Passive EDIT: When steelo hits 10% health he starts over heating for 10 seconds dealing damage to random enemies in an area. When he dies he immediately self destructs dealing 10% of his max health as magic damage in an area around him.)

Q: 6 in the hole - Steelo fires 6 explosive shots at the ground at a targeted area if anyone walks over them they explode dealing moderate damage and knocking them up for a short duration.

(Q EDIT:- Steelo fires 6 Shots in a line dealing magic damage and knocking up all enemies hit for .75 seconds at all levels. )

W: Cannon Fire - Steelo prepares himself for 1 sec then launches himself towards target location deals physical damage. He also gains a small shield = to 10 = max mana. (like tristana's jump.)

W additional info- He can jump as far as Aatrox dark flight. He can break roots but not stuns or slows.

E: Magnetize - Steelo launches magnetized shells at his enemies. All enemies hit take magic damage and are slowed.

(E EDIT- Steelo has to shots. The first shot He launches a highly magnetized rod at his enemy the first enemy hit gains magnetize. Steelo launches his second shot if in the range of the magnetized enemy then that enemy will be drawn to the second shot wherever it landed if it was in his range. )

R: Suicidal Clone - Steelo creates a clone and can control for 3 seconds after 3 seconds it explodes drawing all enemies to it (diana's e) then pushing them away (xin ult but not as much push )and dealing mass damage.

(R edit - changed name more detail.)

This is my first idea.. the pic is a little bit noob ish because im not good with the paint program but its the best i could do to describe what i was talking about. Let me know what you think in the comments.

15 Comments

Carniverous7/20/2015, 7:51:06 AM2 votes

Besides me hunting down reds, this idea is cool and deserves my attention.

I will discuss my feelings as for each sectioned part.

Passive: I really like this idea. But it dose not have the clarity that I want. At 10% HP, how long do these sparks last? And when you say like Kog, he just cant move. Do you mean he sparks at 10-1% HP, and explodes at 0?

My other thought: Also, is there a slight delay for after he explodes? I imagine a really great explosion, but people can escape from hit. But the cool thing is, when your team plays off of your explosion to hurt someone. Like using cc to knock them into your dying body, or Skarner using his ult. again, I like it!

Q: It sounds like a skill shot, but also sounds like the old GP ult. Where things randomly damage an area. Im not sure how to imagine this. Can someone get knocked up by more than one time? Or is it like Zigg's minefield. WHere they take reduced damage for hitting extra mines? ( I think so at least)

W: Very solid, I like it. There is a charge up, and reaction for the opponent. Does he stop on first enemy hit? And how far do you think he can go? My concern is, if he can jump too far, and can go though enemies, it might make him too good at getting though front lines. It's only a maybe.


E: Probably my favorite on him, since, there are a lot of cool things this could do. Lots of room for how this ability could work. In a way, I imagine a skill shot that curves to try and hit enemies. But being madnetic it can swing all the way around.

What I propose: Making this a double skill shot. Imagine on first use, in a line it shoots magnetic rod. That implants it's self into what ever it hits. Terrain, or an enemy champion. Then on the second cast he shoots the magnetic shell. That is attracted to the rod. This would cause it to curve at the rod, helping hit the champion. Or, shooting near, might swing it around the rod. Letting you; Shoot around corners, shoot around champions, or hit multiple champions by having it swing in a wide arc!

R: I have no complain'ts, it's straight forward. Raw, I AM GOING TO EXPLODE YOUR FACE!

My Idea: I think it would be cool to control the clone like Tibbers. And be able to stick him with my "Rod" Idea. Letting you control the swooping magnetic shell as a skill shot, while also pulling in champs for damage.

In general: I really love to see creative things. And I know other people who throw up concepts are making big flashy things, and putting in great art, and doing huge details like mana cost, HP, CD's, and going the extra mile in everything.

But it only takes a good idea to absolutely make something incredible.

This has potential, I hope my pep talk motivates you to go all out for your creation!

RiotKindlejack7/20/2015, 4:06:44 AM1 votes

I don't know why exactly but I love this concept. I think it's the name and the fusion of my favourite genres: Western + Scifi.

The pic is gold.

Taredom7/20/2015, 8:22:35 AM1 votes

Two moves named self destruct? Otherwise it's an interesting concept that's not really been done.

OJ1917/20/2015, 8:28:32 AM1 votes

pretty sure you just called him steelo so we can call him freelo the western robot

:^)

Avious7/20/2015, 9:01:24 AM1 votes

I love 'vacuum' abilities (think Orianna's R and Diana's E) so I can't say no to this ultimate ^^.

Seriously though this is a solid idea. You should put a little more effort on base stats, scalings, cooldowns and mana costs (if he uses mana). Also, you should work on the ability names. 2 parts of the kit sharing the same name is not too great. How about changing R to 'Suicide Drone' and make it spawn an agile drone instead of a clone.

Finally, I believe that the idea about the 'rods' that @Carniverous discussed above is great and should be included in your iteration.

All in all, I think it's a good idea with a unique kit that Riot hasn't introduced yet. Good job.

EDIT: Been thinking about the flashy & strategic plays potential this guy has. Zoning and enemy for an easy slow and then nuking them with an ult or going full kamikaze mode with W when you know you will die so that you can die a courageous death with the passive. Maybe you could add a reset on his W for when his HP drops below 5%. Just throwing ideas to complete his kit :3