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My first champion concept, take a look! :D

PikaCHU567·10/16/2015, 11:36:20 PM·2 votes·563 views

EDIT: Passive and Spells have been edited. http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/pGFlTHTV-first-champion-concept-edited

Champion doesn't have name atm. ^-^;

Passive - Each time X's spell hits an enemy, it applies a stack onto them. Once X manages to get 3 stacks on the enemy units, her next spell with have an increased affect on them. She cannot stack for 8/7/6 seconds after she has activated the stacks. If she does not use a spell on an enemy unit with stacks for 4/4.5/5 seconds, the stacks will disappear one by one each .5/.75/1 seconds.

Q - X sends out a shard of ice dealing damage and snaring the first enemy hit for 1/1.25/1.5/1.75/2 second. Q with Passive - Shard can pass through stacked target and hit an additional target. Magic Damage: 60/85/100/125/150 (+40% AP) Cooldown: 12/11/10/9/8 Mana Cost: 60/65/70/75/80

W - X blows cold wind towards an area, slowing enemies inside it for 8 seconds. Enemy units inside the area are slowed for 50%/55%/60%/65%/70%. Enemies who enter/leave the area get 1 stack(CAN ONLY APPLY ONCE). If enemy units stay in the cold area for 8/7/6 seconds, they are stunned for 1.5 second. W with Passive - (Players that enter the area with 3 stacks: Slow gets stronger every .5 seconds. Maximum of 2 seconds.) (Players that leave the area with 3 stacks: Remain slowed for 2 seconds.) Cooldown: 20 Mana Cost: 80/90/100/110/120

E - X forms a shield around an ally champion for 8 seconds. The ally champion is shielded for 80/120/160/200/240 (+60% AP) Any enemy unit attacking the shielded ally are slowed for 30% (+15 AP). If an enemy champion destroys the shield, they are stunned for 1/1.25/1.5/1.75/2 seconds. Cooldown: 12 Mana Cost: 60/70/80/90/100

R - X summons a huge blizzard in an area dealing 50/70/90 (+20% AP) for 10 seconds. Enemies inside in the area are slowed for 20%/30%/40% while allies are speed up for 10%/20%/30%. Cooldown: 120/110/100 EDIT Mana Cost: 100/110/120

What do you guys think? What should I change and what should I add? Any suggestion for my next concept?

4 Comments

PikaCHU56710/17/2015, 2:56:47 AM1 votes

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ShatteredSkys10/17/2015, 6:35:00 AM1 votes

Hey! Anyway good job putting out your first champ concept! Here are my opinion on it. Sorry if I'm a bit harsh.

Before I begin going into details I notice all your cds are pretty high. The problem is that with cds this high i don't think your going to be able to proc your passive fast enough for it to be useful.

Passive: I like the idea of the passive, awards the player for landing skillshot though your cds need to be lower to actually use this.

Q: i think the Cd needs to be lowered and the passive effect could be buffed, it's not easy to hit an enemy with 3 spells the player should be awarded accordingly.

W: 8 seconds is a really long time, you could probably lower the duration by 1-2 seconds. Also no champon is gonig to stay in that storm for a full 8 seconds I think it should be lowered to 3-4.

E: 8 seconds is a REALLY long time, it is essentially an entire teamfight. I think the duration should be definitely lowered especially with the secondary effect, it essentially a don't focus this champ spell, there really isn't any counterplay for it except have your tank focus said champion but that's not always applicable. I think the spell wwould be more healthier on a shorter cd, it encourages proper timing of the spell and creates ample counterplay for you opponent to wait out the spell and not get stunned. I really do like the idea behind the spell, pretty creative.

R: Provides good zone control nothing really else to say. But feels a lot like Anivia's ult.

Overall: Overall this REALLY feels like Anivia, the q is incredibly similar, they're both frost mages, the ults are very similar, and they both have immense zone control. i think you need to lower the cd of your spells there simply too high right now, the passive effect could be buffed it's not easy to get the passive going and the reward for procing it should be good. I do like a lot of the idea you have particular the e, w, and passive.

PikaCHU56710/17/2015, 8:03:42 AM1 votes

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