holy knight

dragon of hate·9/22/2017, 9:23:06 PM·1 votes·316 views

2 time doing this so any help would be thank full so lest get started i hope she can be like a holy paladin that uses a lance with a war axe like tip her pas has two parts first is that she cant attack behind her so he horse kick them back every 10 sec and if they airborne they get kick back farther and the next part is she can buy a special pair of boots then when used they get a burst of speed q. she run a enemy threw and deals holy dm for 5 sec or till they get to far away she can not attack when its in the enemy w.she she says a chant and gains some health is lower then 15% but if more she gains armors e. the horse bits them rooting them there for a bit r. she starts running a rope for a bit and if she wraps a enemy up they get drag by her please tell me what you thing and i will have a lore for you

2 Comments

bleufromage9/22/2017, 10:21:06 PM1 votes

I can't understand what the #@$! Your trying to say. In English please or fix your typos

Fine Ionian Silk9/22/2017, 11:31:08 PM1 votes

Hello, may I suggest perhaps a different formatting style? It is a little difficult to read your concept at the moment, unfortunately.

In regards to the kit, when you mean "lance with a war axe like tip" do you mean a halberd? Besides that, I'm not a super big fan of the passive. It feels extremely situational and makes her auto attacks really easy to counter. While I can understand the fantasy, it's probably not something I would recommend in terms of a passive. Also, it doesn't really make much sense for her to be able to buy a special pair of boots... doesn't really fit in and feels pretty random.

The Q... I'm sorry, but I cannot really understand what you're saying here. Do you mean she runs through an enemy, or does she throw an enemy? Also, holy dm is not a stat I'm aware of, and I would appreciate it if you would elaborate.

In terms of the W, I can't say I'm really pleased with it. Only being able to heal yourself when you have that low of health is a bit upsetting, seeing as if you're that low you should be backing off anyways. If you're worried about the heal being spammable give it a long CD so it can't be at earlier levels.

I was unaware she was riding a horse, but alrighty. A horse biting and rooting someone doesn't make much sense? I cannot think of a situation where it would.

The ultimate is pretty unique, but I feel like it would be difficult to use in League. It feels more like an extremely situational and difficult hook more than anything.

Also, I suggest taking a look at doing numbers for future concepts. While they may be difficult to deal with (I know the feeling), it helps people to get a better grasp of what you want to do with your kit... also, may I suggest saying what kind of damage they do in the future? Whether it be physical or magical, it would be heavily appreciated! Oh, and I can understand wanting to get an idea on a kit before posting the lore, may I suggest including a snipit of a lore idea you have for your concepts if you want to do it this way? It helps in understanding the theme and that of what you're going for!

Please have a lovely day, and let me know if you have any questions or concerns.