2 new item ideas

so i got one of these ideas from CyanideDrift's post and worked on it, so credit to him and anyone else who contributed to his post, then that lead to me thinking of a different one Link to original post: http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/44lrrFOA-new-item

First item: Warlords Overhaul: 2900g build path: Phage + Chain Vest +850 40 armor, 400 hp, 30 attack, UNIQUE Passive - RAGE: Dealing physical damage grants 20 movement speed for 2 seconds. Assists on Cleaved enemy champions or kills on any unit grant 60 movement speed for 2 seconds instead. This movement speed bonus is halved for ranged champions. UNIQUE Passive - Divine Move - Being attacked by an enemy lowers their critical strike chance by 5% per auto attack stacking up to 25% lasting for 3 seconds? thoughts?

Second item, this item is made to kind of counteract the last one, and/or balance it Berserker's Grief: 3400g Build path: B.F. Sword + Cloak of agility + pickaxe + 525g +70 Attack, +20% critical strike chance UNIQUE Passive - Berserkers Rage: User gains 5% critical strike chance per auto attack on enemy champions, stacking up to 30% and lasting for 3 seconds while in combat (When max stacks are achieved critical strike damage is lowered by 10%) 10 seconds cooldown after max stacks have been earned UNIQUE Active - Pickpocket: When activated, User steals Enemy champions critical strike for 5% every auto attack stacking up to 30% lasting for 2 seconds while in combat, Active for 8 seconds (45 Second cooldown) (does not stack with Berserkers Rage passive)

let me know what you guys think, i think they're both cool ideas, i tried to find a biy of balance, although they seem sloppy just a starter idea, PLEASE LEAVE feedback so we can all work on it?