Thun

braindead potato·2/2/2017, 7:26:23 PM·1 votes·551 views

Hey everyone! This is a first draft of the lore for a champion im trying to visualise. Just keep in mind english is not my first language so there might be some grammar mistakes etc. if you think anything is missing or something should be added, feel free to tell me :) enjoy! The title is a name i came up with, but not yet satisfied with.

P.S it takes place in the "voodoo lands", an outdated concept i know! :p just thought it would be interesting to do something with it :)

Soon after entering the Voodoo lands, the patrol came to a halt after they spotted a body on the road. The guards called out, only to be answered by silence. As the guards moved closer, they could see a faint glow coming from the forest. After they came closer to the body, they could see it was a woman, her clothes ripped and strange marks all over her body.

As they aproached, they could hear a unaudible murmuring coming from the woman. Still cautious, the guards moved closer, only to see the woman was bloody and beaten. The woman continued to try and tell them something, she seemed to think it was important. After inspecting the woman they concluded most, if not all of the blood, had come from her eyes and ears.

Suddenly, one of the guards started bleeding heavily from his eyes, blinding him. The same strange markings appeared on his face as he fell to the ground.

Suddenly a dark figure appeared from the forest. Some sort of fog moving ahead of the figure. When the guards came in contact with the fog, streams of blood started pouring out of their eyes, unable to move they fell one for one.

As the last guard was about to fall he could hear the woman mutter a sentance with her last breath.

“He has risen, run.”

after finishing the first draft, im not sure wether or not its "PG" enough, since graves cant even have his cigar :(

2 Comments

midnight oil242/2/2017, 8:06:09 PM1 votes

This is pretty good. I want to know more about the champ, so that's a good way to bait people into reading more. I'm looking forward to the next installment!