Takeo, Keeper of Justice

Big Tiddies·3/26/2015, 3:48:03 PM·2 votes·1,390 views

"Justice. I'll serve it."

At very young age, our hero made a traumatic experience... a horrible, vicious creature... Loud, disturbing gnarls... Screaming people, and a village riddled with holes. That's all he can remember.

His family was brutally murdered in this massacre, so he got adopted by the blacksmith of the nearest town. This blacksmith, but, was a cruel man, he beat his children and gave them almost no food. Also, our hero was bullied by the children of the town, so, some years later, he escaped the watchful eye of his "father" and went out, in the wide world. He wandered 4 days, with no food or water. He then collapsed, in the middle of the forest.

As he woke up, he found himself in a small cave. As he looked around, he saw a young man. "You're awake. I thought you won't make it.", the man said. "I found you in the forest, alone. Looks like we share the same fate." Our hero was speechless. "Don't be afraid, I wont hurt you. What's your name?" Still no response. "My name is Yasuo." Yasuo walked over and gave him some meat and water in a stone bowl. Our hero smiled, he was happy, he found someone who cared for him.

The years later, Yasuo gave him a name. "Takeo. Your name is Takeo. You'll bring justice among the people, and hopefully, to me."

Yasuo trained him in the art of sword fighting, quickly, Yasuo noticed Takeos talent. At one evening, Yasuo gave him a sword. "This is the blade of my brother. Take it. You're my brother now."

Many years passed, and Takeo developed his own technique. His strikes were lightning fast, and extremely devastating. Takeo, again, left Yasuo, so he can seek revenge for his dead family, his destroyed village and Yasuo.

Takeo wandered through Valoran, in the depths of the Kumungu Jungle, through Noxus and even into Bandle, the holy city. Everyone, who challenged Takeo, was striked down. Finally, Takeo arrived. The League of Legends.

He will find Justice.


INFO: Takeo uses his own resource. His abilities have no cost.

Passive: Takeo charges up his lightning sword, after 6 basic attacks he will empower his next ability.

Also, he gains attack speed with each successful basic attack, up to a cap. (max +45%)/(55%)/(65%)

Q: Steel-Light CD: 7/6,5/5,5/4,5/3,5

Passive: Every 6th basic attack, Takeo infuses his target with lightning, applying a debuff called Lightning-Charge.

Active: Takeo strikes his sword forward extremely fast, slowing the target's movement speed by 20%, and dealing 30/80/110/180/260 (+80% AD) physical damage. (thunder sound in the background)

Empowered: Detonates Lightning-Charge, stunning the target for 1 seconds.

**W: Slither ** CD: 14/12/10/9/7

Takeo's next basic attacks will strike around him, dealing 25/60/100/150/200 (+70% AD; +40% AP) bonus damage.

Empowered: Heals for each enemy hit 30/30/40/40/50 (+70% AP).

**E: Bolt Rush ** CD: 1,5 at all ranks.

Passive: Gains 1 Stack per 30 seconds. Max. 3. Active: Uses 1 Stack, Takeo leaps with brutal force to his target location, dealing 50/80/145/180/250 physical damage (+40% AD; +80% AP). 1,5 seconds cooldown between leaps. (thunder sound in the background)

Empowered: Targets hit will be stunned for 0,5 second.

R: Thunderstorm CD: 100/70/60

Can only use this ultimate on stunned targets.

Takeo teleports to all stunned targets and slashes 5 times through them for 1,5 seconds. All champions hit recieve 200/320/460 (100% AD) physical damage. After this ability ends, he will teleport to the first champion hit. (thunder sound in the background, 5 times)

Empowered: Gains 30/50/70 attack damage for 8 seconds.


Design: •25 years old •tall •Male •short, brown-black hair, •Light armor, assassin-like (for example, Talon), •Wields sword, a bit like the one of Yasuo, but -> he doesn't hold his sword exactly like Yasuo, it's still at his hip, but one hand is at his sword, the other one is above the grip, NOT AT IT, ready to draw it •Eyepatch on his right eye •Blue Eye(s) •beard around his mouth


Idle: Presses his sword in the ground, leaning on it, looking around

Joke: 1# "You want to see my sword?" draws it for 0,01sec "You want to see it again?"

   2# "You are a true warrior of the Three... oh wait, that's not my line." 

Taunt: 1# "My slashes are like lightning." pulls out sword, strikes in the air a couple of times.

            2# "My blade will like you." *pulls out sword, strikes in the air a couple of times.*

**Dance: **????

Laugh: Laughs, confident of victory.


Quotes:

Using Q: "Ton!" "Lightning!"

Using E: "Come here!" "Choryia!"

Using R: "Realise!" "Igo ge Cho! "Get lost!"

Movement: "Forward." "Yes." "Can't wait." "Sure." "One step closer." "I'll find him." "I'll help him." "Justice shall be served." "Never rest."

Attacking: "Are you sure?" "Think again." "I'll die later." "Keep running." "Death can wait." "Don't laugh about death." "A new target." "Maybe you can help me." "Useless."

Death: "It's not over yet!" "Cancel that!" "Justice will judge you!"


**Taunting enemy MasterYi ** "Wuju... looks interesting."

Taunting enemy Riven "I've seen you before." "Looks like you have some problems."

Taunting enemy Yasuo "Some tips for me, Yasuo?" "We should hang out more."

Taunting enemy Zac "Why are you green?" "I like you."

Taunting enemy Teemo "Don't worry, everyone underestimates me as well!" "I was also the smallest in my childhood."

Taunting enemy Fiora "You got any plans for tonight?" "I know a good restaurant."

Taunting enemy Rengar "I love cats."


Special Interactions: Same Team Yasuo uses Last Breath: "I love that." "Do it again!"

Buying item 3078 "That's awesome."

Buying item 3089 "Why... not?"

Upon placing a item 2044 "Place wards, place wards. That's all I ever hear."

Upon buying item 3153 "This will serve me well."

Upon buying item 3143 "How am I supposed to hold a shield?"

Upon buying item 3046 "So I have to use 3 swords?"

Upon buying item 1001 "Now I'll reach my purpose even faster."

Upon buying item 3087 "Lightning-fast."

Upon buying item 3022 "They won't escape."


I hope you like my concept, any more ideas or feedback? Write them in the comments!

11 Comments

MadCakes3/26/2015, 3:56:37 PM1 votes

this guy is too op and GAREN IS ALREADY THE KEEPER OF JUSTICE, well kind of

Metikulus3/27/2015, 3:30:29 AM1 votes

This is way too strong. He's basically Yasuo, who can perma-stun a champion. He would be literally unbeatable. The Q stuns for 1.5 seconds with the debuff, and it only takes 4 hits to get a debuff on an opponent. That would perma-stun anyone caught by him because his passive also increases his attack speed. All you have to do is stack AS until you get 2.0 or higher and 40% CDR. So Frozen Heart+Lucidity boots+AS=win.

Nameless Hero3/27/2015, 1:02:58 PM1 votes

Take a look at how they use Sasuke's lightning blade abilities in Naruto. :)