I did a very long time ago, the Title says in Production in fact indeed it was, but I never had the courage to post on the forums so it just stood there. My Dream that one day it can be used for a login theme song for a champ.
Any suggestions? If the flute is too much i can redo it hopefully
I have a couple issues with it.
First, it's a mash up of a lot of different styles: Some classical, some dubcrap, some... rap? Just doesn't fit together well, and sounds a bit confused.
Second, there's no real progression. The song repeats over and over and over, and it gets boring after a while.
So, sit down and figure out what kind of sound you want to make. Electrical crap? Classical? Hip-hop-y? Then roll with that. Don't try to mix and match everything, it just turns into a cacophony. Second, make an actual melody, and have progression in the song. You should be able to hear a beginning, climax and end -- not just one repeating loop.
Sorry if I sound mean. Kudos for being brave enough to put your work out there -- I could never do that.
