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Could someone please tell me what code I violated posting this?

SmknWdl··1 votes·1,512 views

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[Deleted] Omega Squad Teemo Skin SmknWdl (NA) submitted about an hour ago in Story & Art So the new teemo skin coming out needs some lore behind it...

In a war stricken Valoran, Teemo has brought out his inner killer... Teemo is known for shutting off his emotions in battle, but he has reached a whole new level since Zaun invaded Bandle city. The Zaunites, funded by Noxus, invented a mind controlling technology that affected most of the yordles in Bandle city. Teemo remained one of the few unaffected, but at a horrible price. He had to turn on some of his own kind that day... killing Tristana and several other of his closest friends that had succumbed to Zaun's creation. That same day, the League of Legends lost its peacekeeping powers. The Voidlings invaded, bringing monsters that were sickeningly deadly, and other unspoken horrors into Runeterra. The Shadow Isles began their assault on the mainland, leaving a trail of death and destruction in their wake. Entire forests were killed off; hollow trees and dead plants were all that remained. Demacian and Noxian hostilities have arisen again, and assorted factions throughout Runeterra are hunkering down and choosing an every man for himself attitude... Teemo and a group of assorted yordles, humans, and other individuals that wish to save what remains of Runeterra formed what is known as the Omega Squad, placing Teemo as their leader. But concerning Teemo's mind... some fear that when the fighting is finished he will never resurface from the cold, calculated, and emotionless yordle he has become.

Ok I know that was really cheesy and lame, and probs really stupid too. But leave your thoughts anyways, as I do think the little guy needs some loving in the lore.

little fan lore about the new teemo skin to story and art... Could someone please tell me what i violated in posting it, as it is quite frustrating that riot games doesnt actually take the time to tell me what i have done wrong in posting an innocent little story about satan himself...

27 Comments

Angry Monster2 votes

i do no think story and art are for fan fics.

insaiyanbacca2 votes

just a question then what do you put in story & art

Angry Monster1 votes

I think riot story and art. This section usually has comments on riot lore and art

yours belongs in community creation. Since you are a member of the coummity.

repost orginal there and see what happens

SmknWdl1 votes

ok thanks will do

Sona Ping1 votes

Discussion about League's Story & Art predictably belongs on the Story & Art board.

Some guy's personal fanfiction belongs on fanfiction.net

SmknWdl1 votes

its not fanfic it's fan lore... (i sound like a total dweeb dont i?)

Sona Ping1 votes

its not fanfic it's fan lore...

Dude, you already know this... It's fanfiction about League Lore. It was deleted because it's against the rules for being irrelevant to the board topic. Sorry.

(i sound like a total dweeb dont i?)

No comment. ;P

Angry Monster1 votes

also technically this thread could end up getting deleted at some point. This is not about the boards.

SmknWdl1 votes

isn't it about how the boards are run?

Angry Monster1 votes

I guess you could try and stretch that way.

Personally it comes off what is wrong with my post. Which is not the same thing. I have seen these threads get deleted before for wrong location.

SmknWdl1 votes

ok thanks for the feedback

Sir ArmaMalum1 votes

Link doesn't help if it's been removed. Give a tl;dr of what it was.

SmknWdl1 votes

just did

Sir ArmaMalum1 votes

ah, kk. yeah don't see anything wrong with it myself.

SmknWdl1 votes

;_; rito plz... is it at least good?

Sir ArmaMalum2 votes

Direction and atmosphere is good. I think you could smooth out the jumps a bit and merge a few to tone it down. It comes off almost as if you're trying too hard to make it fit. All imho of course. That being said yeah, it's good. Always love it when fellow players go above and beyond with the game's characters. And/or their alternate versions. :)

SmknWdl1 votes

k thx.... that was kinda my first time doing something like that so i was wondering what the response would be :)

Sir ArmaMalum1 votes

Hey if you like doing it you can always try making a champion concept for fun. We gotta an alright sized community over in Skins & Champion Concepts full of people who find it entertaining. I run a monthly contest there, completely open to anyone who wants to give it a shot. :D

SmknWdl1 votes

well i actually have a primitive idea for a four armed champion, although i never really went into it too much. He would be unique in that his passive would have him hit with all four arms every couple of autos... and one of his abilites would passive toggle hitting two targets at once for a mana cost... thoughts?

Sir ArmaMalum1 votes

As far as the champ idea itself it all depends on how you execute it. I've seen amazing concepts from everything from a giant dragonfly to a cell, literally just a cell. If you're not too confident on that regard try reading this.

As far as the kit ideas:

An every X hit bonus is a often used mechanic but is great for synergizing with other sustained damage abilities/effects. Slows usually do you good elsewhere on the kit so he can get all those autos down on a target.

Two target autos I haven't seen too often, even less on a melee (I'm assuming melee here). It'd be hard to justify without some other mechanic to ensure you'll have two targets to hit for a period of time. (A pulsing AoE or a two-target taunt could be an example of that)

SmknWdl1 votes

well i was thinking if there aren't two targets then all four arms would hit a single champ at once dealing double damage... of course there's always the 16X op damage you might get from a crit with both passives up at the same time on a single target... maybe a tad too strong?

Sir ArmaMalum1 votes

A but yeah, lol.

A work-around for that would be to make the 4 arm strike an actual ability so it wouldn't crit (like Nasus Q or Draven Q)

SmknWdl1 votes

that would be a good idea... ill have to think about it more. (I'm too busy thinking about that i saw ao shin in a tree next to bard XD HES COMING NEXT)

Tsugaga1 votes

Riot deletes fan lore all the time, literally every day, no idea why.

Sona Ping2 votes

Yeah, who on earth could ever figure out why...

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...Here you can discuss the existing story, or speculate about new events that could be transpiring. DO talk or speculate about existing stories in the League of Legends universe

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DO NOT post fan-fiction or roleplaying discussions

Tsugaga1 votes

[{quoted}](name=Sona Ping,realm=NA,application-id=bzRrPGQO,discussion-id=MdeEFJfr,comment-id=00020000,timestamp=2015-03-26T00:36:45.547+0000)

Yeah, who on earth could ever figure out why...

I know that, relax and don't be rude. I meant it shouldn't be like that.

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