Can you review my (ranked) games and give me advice

I clearly have lots to improve on, but if you could just make a bullet-point list of everything I need to improve on and in what order that would be great. If you need to spectate a game, just I.M. me or something. Don't be afraid to be harsh, I'm in bronze 5, I get flamed constantly anyways. I just want to be better than a monkey with a mouse tbh. also recommend champions and lanes based on what you see, so i have someone (and somewhere) to work with and learn/improve upon.