My "fantasy world" concept. I'm looking for criticism.

https://goo.gl/forms/XyE3vwVWpJK6Vg1D2

There's the google form. The link to the google document with each region's information is in the form itself. Please give me your honest opinion, and don't treat this like a joke. Thanks to those who do try. This form is just about each region, culture, and the world so far. Ignore the note about Lester's Conquest.

Sorry if this is considered against the Universal Rules, tell me and ill remove it.