"that really does sound like death dance" a potential fix to botrk and crit?

I discovered this phrase when i trolled normals with a gunblade on sivir. later in the game i sold the and took a because you can sell while having 1000g in pocket and purchase a SO after doing research i realized that the weakest component in a death dance? is the but it doesn't really SEEM like what you're building would be called death dance. so I thought about the stat value of the items and figured a death dance would be softer on your build path if you built it out of two: this would allow you to purchase the item as such: +900G = this way, if you build this in lane you're really going to have to cling to the minions waves. the items stat value would be 80AD 70 AD+10% CD and then 15% 20% healing from damage. so technically you're building 3: just to get the passive and the would be there for the AD and the CD. essentially your build is dancing around . IF WE HAD THIS BUILD PATH. then we would need to reduce the combined cost of (-150 from the total combined cost) and add a second instead of the so it would be 80AD+20%LS+100-300 shield (maximum) for 150 less gold! but i believe this would make and a more practical purchase in every lane because of how it scales into the late game

this concept was created on the day of a patch release so I implore you to take this idea with a grain of salt, 8.4 was a huge patch and should be respected as much as a preseason patch.