I Need Constructive Critisism

Raide··2 votes·625 views

I was b3 at the end of season 5. Then I did promos and I had an afk every match and went 2/10........ Now I carry almost every match and I still lose. I main ADC so there is only so much I can do when my team initiates without me and leaves me in a 1v5. Some one look at my stats and give me pointers or tell me what im doing wrong Thanks

8 Comments

Korillo3 votes

For one, your vayne build is terrible. item 3046 and item 3085 are not good items on vayne. You could perhaps make an argument for phantom dancer, but drop item 3085 from your build and never think of it again when playing vayne.

You also have an insane amount of deaths. In the last 7 vayne games you've played, you average 9.29 deaths. Some of these games you have a lot of kills, but dying so many times suggests that you are prioritizing kills too highly, and probably making trades - which often is not the right decision.

In your last 20 games you have never, not even a single time, purchased a pink ward. Not a single one. Nor have you ever bought a blue trinket (and as an adc main this amazes me). The blue trinket is incredibly useful for an adc, and never buying a pink ward suggests that place little to no importance on ward control - which also suggests you have poor map awareness (along with your high number of deaths), so these are likely things you can work on.

Your cs/minute is quite low, which goes along with the theory that you prioritize kills to highly. Try focusing more on farm and objectives and less on kills.

Ronker2 votes

Why do you want to leave Bronze? Crazy talk man...stop it.... Sit back and enjoy the wonders of Bronze

Catloaf1 votes

Your are NOT carrying. You have 10+ deaths almost everygame so it doesnt matter that u also have 15 kills. If you wanna get out of bronze you must go 20 0 everygame but if you cant do that then you dont deserve to get higher. #BRONZEISEASY

Poptart Evelynn1 votes

Itemization and skill order are poorly optimized.

item 1055 item 2003 Normal start item 1038 item 1001 First B item 3094 First complete item Then from there base it on the events of the game but most people go infinity edge next.

With vayne you need to be maximizing utilization of her W. Max W first.

Stop getting W first and E second. Start your roll first.

Stop getting Hurricane and PD on Vayne. It's not that good compared to other choices. Rapid first is amazing on her.

Randomonium1 votes
  1. You are not carrying your games. You might have the most kills but that doesn't mean you are carrying. What is important is your KDA and your damage dealt to champions. If your KDA isn't above 3 AND you don't have the highest damage to champions on your team then you are not carrying.
  2. Your build order look sub-optimal which also makes me wonder what runes/masteries you are running. Honestly, you should be going on probuilds.net or champion.gg and if your build order, runes and masteries don't match those players then you most likely have a problem.
  3. CS scores are very inconsistent. Sometimes you are as high as 7 and sometimes as low as 3. Try working on consistently getting higher than 5 cs/min.
  4. Use OBS to record yourself or get a replay program like SkinSpotlights Replay. Compare your play to high level players and see what they do differently.
delonix1 votes

A lot of my advice has already been given, but I figure it wouldn't hurt to hear it again from somebody else.

  1. You shouldn't think that you "carry almost every match." If you did carry so often, you would be winning more. You probably need to adjust your definition of "carrying." To you, it might mean having a lot more kills than deaths, which you seem able to do. That doesn't win games. You main ADC, which means you should be focusing on getting objectives, killing enemies in teamfights, and staying alive. If you spend time chasing down a kill when you could have done a bunch of damage to a tower, you aren't carrying, you are throwing. If you don't want your team to fight without you, tell them not to fight while you splitpush or recall and join them.

  2. Do some research. Learn what items do, what your abilities do, and what items work well on which champions. I'm not as opposed to phantom dancer on Vayne as other people seem to be, but you are making questionable decisions when buying items in at least some of your games. You should also no longer rush item 3031 . It's better to get item 1038 +item 3086 and then finish IE.

  3. Your CS is low. Low CS means it takes you longer to buy items, which means you do less damage to objectives and less damage to enemy champions.

Calabok1 votes

I suggest a baseball bat to keyboard repeatedly while yelling obscenities at your monitor. This will achieve platinum in no time

Raide1 votes

Thanks for the info peeps I'll let you know how I do as I start focusing cs not kills and looking over my builds I realize I can do better and I shouldn't blame my team for a large majority of my losses also I'm in the habit of haphazardly warding so I'll get that sht straightened out haha

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