Balanced Storm Razor Rework Suggestion

This is a rework suggestion that I feel makes fit better in game since riot wanted more diverse builds in game.

For each second in combat gain critical strike upto 200% based on your attack speed.

Gain permanent attack speed when you get a Take down.

something like eyeball collection .06% for attack speed for how much you get per takedown for perm attack speed.

Thoughts? Also If this is in wrong section sorry 😐