I came up with this complicated Champion and I need your advice.

I don't like her ultimate. Too easy to counter (full self/ally cast team comp). It would be awesome if her ult caused her to cycle through the elements, changing her skills or skill bonuses (but has a long cooldown like Karma ult or it has to proc like Yasuo's ult) I don't know about her e though.

Reminds me of kirby.

The entire champion doesn't really make sense. And I doubt it would even fit in the current meta. Why not play Diana she's completed and ready to play or you could play lee sin with the same Q.

so rubrik ult basically?

Edited.

Rawr.

May I remind you this thread may be removed so I suggest you copy/paste it into the Skins and Champion Concepts sub forums for the convenience of the Devs.

Now onward to the suggestions.

Neirin(Nay-rin) Earth is AD Q: An AOE ranged attack, she can then leap to the enemy. W: Passive bonus damage to Q when active and will knock the enemy up if also active when Q is active on the enemy champion. E: Gives her attack speed. R: Her ultimate can cycle through the elements and it changes her skills based on what element she has cycled to. (Light and Magic's help, crediting him/her for the idea -- thanks!)

Water(Under co) is AP Add's a silence effect to her skills.

Fire is AP Add's a burning effect to her skills.

Wind is AD Add's a slowing effect to her skills.

She is an AD and AP skilled champ. How her skills change is depending on what hits her such as Janna or Yasuo will give her the wind passive -- changing her skills. If Nami hits her it will change to water and so on. She is an elemental priestess, therefore she can control all elements. Fire, water, earth and wind. Where she was born is unknown, an elder couple took her in and took care of her when they found her laying at their doorsteps.

From the looks of things you mixed Jayce and Fiora together and made a new champion, I'd advise more thought into it however the ultimate ability where the champions abilities switch effects is different from others like Jayce, Nidalee, etc. Try reforming its Q,w,e and making it more of a Mid laner type champ instead of top lane (which is what it looks like) and I'm sure it'll be great, but that's just MY opinion, its your ideas and your champion to work on do what you will :)

Seems like an overloaded kit and doesn't really make sense. Think about it, why would an AP mage want to dive into an enemy or take an ulti to the face? And how would she throw for example a blitz ult back? Do you mean that if I were to activate her ult and then get hit by another ult I could then use that ult?

Herpderp.