(Probably a really bad) Champion Concept.

RoastingInFlames·5/24/2014, 4:26:15 AM·1 votes·966 views

Hello I am bored and decided to make a Champion Concept. It nothing serious and really was just made for fun.

Saran – Champion Concept.

Role – Assassin

Secondary Role – Fighter

Health : 445 Attack Damage : 60 Health Regeneration : 7. Attack Speed : 0.650

Armor : 20 Magic Resist : 30 Movement Speed : 340 Range : 325

Passive – Each time Saran attack or use one of her abilities on an enemy champion will gain Saran 2.5% attack speed and 5% Movement Speed that stacks up to 4 times for 10 seconds.

Hitting Multiplies targets will give you 2 times the effect.

Q – Saran will started letting dark energy out of her sword for 10 sec, each auto attack she does will do bonus magical damage per hit.

Each hit will also heal some of her health.

Bonus Magic damages: 20/30/40/45/50 (Plus 45% Ability Power)(Plus 50% Attack Damage)

Health gain per hit : 10/20/25/30/35 ( Plus 25% Ability Power) Cool Down : 20

W - Saran dashes toward her enemies and slams her long sword into him, dealing physical damage and stunning the enemy for 1 sec.

After that, it will slow him for 30% of his movement speed for 3 sec.

Can also dashes toward enemy minions and monsters.

Physical Damage: 40/45/50/100/125 (Plus 100% Attack Damage)

Cool Down: 12/11/10/9/8

E – Saran will charged up her weapon, let out a strong powerful waves of energy into the enemies, dealing psychical damage to all who get caught in it and will slow all enemies for 25% of their movement speed.

Physical Damage : 70/80/90/115/150 (Plus 125% Attack Damage)

Cool Down: 10/10/10/10/8

R – Saran will let out a strong dark energy out of her weapon and will have her movement speed reduce my 25% for a small duration of 5 sec. All enemies who are around Saran will have their movement speed reduce my 50%.

All enemies that cannot get away from Saran will take massive physical damage and will be stun for 1.25 sec.

When using her ultimate she cannot use any other of her abilities.

Each enemy who get kill will reduce her cd on her ultimate by 5.

Physical damage: 250/500/750(Plus 250% Attack Damage)

Range – 700 Cooldown: 150/135/125


I still haven`t thought of a good name for all her abilities. It goes the same for her name since I am terrible of coming up with awesome names.

I also didn't make a lore for this...

It nothing serious but I just wanted to show my idea to everyone to see what they think about this.

I don`t know what I was thinking when I made this so hopefully it not that bad...

I am also kind of tired so things can be a bit confusing if you actually read this or not..

3 Comments

Hyrum Graff5/24/2014, 7:31:48 PM1 votes

I haven't read it yet (I'll go back and do so shortly), but I'd like to make one quick suggestion: Don't bother too much with the numbers. If Riot decided to make your champ, they're going to playgtest the numbers themselves, so your numbers don't mean much; they also make it harder to think about, when you're trying to figure out if an ability is high-damaging, etc.

Instead, just say something like,

Q - Saran lets dark energy out of her sword; for 10 sec, her auto attacks gain a small heal (AP) and high magic damage (AP and AD scaling) on-hit.
Long cooldown."

There's a great example of how I'd suggest doing it here.

Note: there's no problem with putting in numbers, but do it in a quote or something so that those of us who don't want to be distracted by them, don't have to be.


Edit: Now I've read the post. Further comments below this line

Is her w a skillshot or a targeted ability?

E - I'd like a little more detail here. How long does it take to charge? What shape are the waves? I'm guessing it's like a cone away from her, but I'm not sure.

R - Is that whenever Saran kills an enemy, or only when she kills them with her ult?

In general, she seems more like a fighter to me than an assassin. You want to talk a little bit about what you think her combos will be (I'm thinking, E-W-Q for harass, E-W-R-Q for the kill) and her playstyle?

Nihil Art5/25/2014, 10:23:04 AM1 votes

Too much damage for R, if it were single target maybe, but no aoe