Champion Concept: Teival, The Sorcerer of Chaos

4inviso997·May 28, 2014·3 votes·1,535 views

Teival The Chaos Mage

Lore:

There are those in this world who would have it fall into chaos by bringing the creatures of the void here. Some for a vendetta, some for magical or scientific purposes, and some for pure enjoyment and pleasure. Teival was trained in a mage academy and was a promising student but he decided the "trivial" spells of normal mages were not good enough for him. Thus, he dabbled in other forms of magic and finally found a very old and powerful magic that was strictly forbidden, chaos magic. He embraced it and with it he became very powerful. The mages found out his practices and attempted to stop him, but Teival overpowered them and left the academy continuing his studies away from the world, until now. In his practices he found that chaos magic has close ties with the void, in fact chaos magic draws its power from the void and its creatures. Therefore it would only be natural that he go to the place where the beings who are the source of his power seem to be gathering.

"There are those who are afraid of magic itself, and there are those who are afraid of the consequences of using it. I am neither. I fully embrace all that comes with my power." Teival

Abilities:

Passive: Chaotic Absorbtion-Teival absorbs power from the chaotic residue from nearby spells gaining 3/4/5/6 AP per nearby spell cast. (stacks up to 5 times, lasts 5 seconds, includes his own spells, scales at levels 1/6/11/16)

Q,Chaos Charge- Passive: Teival's attacks become charged with chaos energy dealing .6/.7/.8/.9/1% of the targets max health in magic damage per hit. his basic attacks also deal magic damage instead of physical damage

Active: Teival fires a bolt of chaos energy at an enemy dealing 80/120/160/200/240 magic damage (+75 ap) Teival loses the passive while this ability is on cooldown Mana Cost:60/65/70/75/80 Cooldown: 6/6/5/5/4

W,Wave of entropy: Teival launches a wave of magic in front of him dealing 60/120/180/240/300 magic damage (+.5ap) also silences all enemy champions hit for .5 seconds Mana Cost:80/85/90/95/100 Cooldown: 17/16/15/14/13

E,Bolt of disarray: Teival fires a bolt of chaos energy at a target stunning them for .25/.5/.5/.75/.75 seconds also deals 80/110/140/170/200 damage (+.5ap) Mana Cost: 80/85/90/95/100 Cooldown: 12/12/11/11/10

R,Turmoil and Pandemonium: Teival unleashes all of his power in a target area dealing 75/100/125 (+.2ap) magic damage a second. Enemies in the area are slowed for 40/50/60% while in the area of effect. Lasts 3/4/5 seconds. Teival must channel for the first 1.5 seconds of this ability. Enemies who remain in the area for the whole effect take an additional (1.0ap) magic damage Mana Cost:100/125/150 Cooldown: 90/85/80

Stats:

Health: 340 (+85 per level)

Health Regeneration (per 5): 5 (+.52 per level)

Mana: 240 (+60 per level)

Mana Regeneration (per 5): 7 (+.85 per level)

Attack Damage: 45 (+3 per level)

Attack Speed: .625 (+2.2% per level)

Armor: 15 (+ 4 per level)

Magic Resistance: 25 (+1.6 per level)

Movement Speed: 330

Speech:

Movement: I will bring chaos

 The magic is gathering

 Do not waste my power

Attack: With all of my power

To the end of their lives

Joke: I'll show you summoners how to cause real chaos

I would like to order, actually no, i hate order.

Taunt: I will show you what magic is actually used for

   You really think you can match me? You couldn't last 1 second against my full power

On Pick: I am chaos incarnate

 Your magic binds me, for now

15 Comments

LilStacey87May 28, 20142 votes

I like the Q's active. It sounds pretty balanced while reading it, especially how it nullify's the passive. I thought the passive was too strong until I read it clearly. Basicly your saying as long as there is champions fighting in the area he can stack up to 30 AP right? the "W"'s silence is kind of short but Im sure you were just trying to keep him fair. Do you have a visual for your idea?

4inviso997May 28, 20141 votes

Yes as long as there are spells being cast every 5 seconds from champions nearby he maintains his passive. The W was a bit difficult as attaching long cc to a wave ability is kinda op so i imagined it more of as a disruption ability. And unfortunately I do not have a visual for him as I am a terrible artist in every aspect.

LilStacey87May 28, 20141 votes

Ahh, I completely know how you feel. So what would you say the W's range would be? Give me an example with the real league champions.

4inviso997May 28, 20141 votes

I would say it is similar to kassadins force pulse in range but a bit less wide and a bit longer.

LilStacey87May 28, 20142 votes

Funny you mentioned him, because that's the 1st person I thought of when I read the skill.

WorgslargMay 28, 20141 votes

I like it. However, it seems a bit too easy to kill a target with just some team cc and your ultimate, ala J4 ult keeping them in the zone for 340% AP + 1900 magic damage.

I would suggest working increased ult damage into his W, and reducing the scalings on his ult. Perhaps making his ult deal a set amount + %ap over the entire cast, so you could reduce the channel time at higher ranks, making it a faster cast, while also still increasing the DPS

A 6 second channel seems like a bit of a liability in a teamfight during mid-late game

LilStacey87May 28, 20141 votes

Yea, like i was saying in your other champion concept, you should try lowering the ratio's to balance you guy out. I know you want a BIG DAMAGE mage but even Riot has to make their characters with in boundary of the game.

4inviso997May 30, 20141 votes

I think it just never clicked how much damage that the base per damage per second plus the ap ratio per second would do. I heavily reduced them to lower the damage. Thank you and worgslarg for pointing out the ridiculousness of that damage.

4inviso997May 30, 20141 votes

Thank you for your feedback. I changed the ratios on his ult and reduced the base damage I also changed the channel time to lessen the teamfight liability. Once again thank you for your feedback I really appreciate it.

TardRanglerMay 29, 20141 votes

its a nice idea i have one of my own just not in as much depth as yours

the idea I have is a champ that his q, w, and e modify his basic attack [like say he uses his q and his attacks get an on going certain effect until he uses another ability with out mana costs because I see him as a nonmana champ where his bottom bar builds up charges to add a second effect once then the bar empties and he starts again like rengar]such as lightning might make his attacks arc off and deal a smaller amount of damage to another enemy and when his bottom bar fills up his next attack with lightning makes an aura go out from the enemy and hit surrounding enemies which the cause all of said enemy hit to also emit the arc effect to a lesser extent. and his next fire would light enemies on fire bottom bar fills up aura goes out all enemies hit catch on fire. Next element ice would slow enemies bottom bar fills up aura goes out all enemies hit get slowed. that's just my idea improvements by riot and the community are welcome please no hate and if there is a thread for these things I would like to know if not and idea thread could be made the community input would help you make a better game and I know not everyone would get accepted only the great ideas would but still please consider it I for one would love it to be put in the game and hey free champ idea no charge ill leave the hard part to you riot programming and tweaking

4inviso997May 30, 20141 votes

You can put up fan made champion concepts in the fan creations sub section of the forum.It sounds like you have an awesome idea you should definitely develop it more and post it in a thread. I really hope you do and if you choose to, I cannot wait to see the end result.

Name ErrorMay 29, 20141 votes

Is this another Kassadin the w sounds like it just in a wider range than Kassadins previous q before the rework

4inviso997May 30, 20141 votes

I would say he is quite different from kassadin in several ways however, yes, the w is quite similar to kassadins force pulse.

hugsabugsMay 30, 20141 votes

His W looks massively OP early game. That would do 1/5 to 1/3 of the entire health of any champion lv 1, making his getting first blood supremely easy. And then it is not powered enough late game. Similar thoughts with his E.

4inviso997May 31, 20141 votes

lowered the w and e's damage early game as they were quite strong and also increased the scaling into the late game. I really appreciate your feedback, thank you.