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Baron of Bread21 votes

My advice: stop being nervous 'cause that's awesome.

A Superb Villain3 votes

Sound advice.

Amy Khal6 votes

Thanks ! And yeah I suck I'm sorry lol... Sorry for the late answers he posted the thread super late for me so I was asleep.

RiotMaliceCity11 votes

This is so good!

Only A Soldier5 votes

All around it looks pretty nice. Shes a little to fat in some areas though.

Knalxz4 votes

The legs do become a little disproportionate to the upper body and feet. Probably just an oversight from all the flamboyant colors in the waist, drawing the artist away.

Amy Khal5 votes

Hi ! I'm the artist of this piece.

I totally agree after reading what you said, I had actually a base body that I planned on using for whatever then this skin got released and I simply didn't change the proportions. I'm taking notes for next time though ! Thanks a lot.

Knalxz1 votes

np,

David Haller4 votes

Maybe you could make it look like Lux before saying it's Lux.

Just a suggestion.

Because that honestly looks more like some random girl at an anime convention.

Amy Khal2 votes

Hi ! I can see why you feel that way it's probably because she isn't as skinny, that's a mistake on my part, I noticed now and will be taking this in consideration for next time. Thanks.

Seth the Bum4 votes

The art is good, but I'm more impressed with how positive the artist has reacted to the feedback. Sometimes it can be hard to accept criticism, yet she has taken it in stride like a true Lux fan. Anyway, most everyone else has already expressed how I feel about this piece, so I'll just leave it at that. Keep it up!

Final GirI3 votes

YAAASSS! IT LOOKS SO GOOD! THAT'S WONDERFUL! YAAAASSSS! POST MORE ARTWORK! :O

Amy Khal1 votes

Thanks !

Sinister Snail3 votes

It looks excellent. The lighting and colors are especially well executed.

As a bit of constructive criticism, it's a bit curvier than lux is usually portrayed.

But very well done regardless.

Amy Khal3 votes

Thanks ! I'm the artist of that piece. I answered already but I'm taking notes. And thanks again for your critics, I really almost never get those makes me happier than the compliments. Thanks again for taking your time to write that.

UPfreely3 votes

ask her to do magical girl taric next

Amy Khal3 votes

Hi ! And maybe lol but I suck with guys, I've been asked to do Magical Girl Garen too.

Rhinovex3 votes

It's already been said but, the proportions below her waist (thighs, legs, etc.) are off and maybe it's just me but her shoulders look a bit too broad. Besides that.. it looks great, nice job Lux

KoKoboto3 votes

How can you be nervous when you're being internet anonymous wtf? ...Unless OP is actually the person who drew it.... DUN DUN DUUUUUUN

Pucking Purrfect1 votes

Awesome.

Amy Khal1 votes

Thanks !

Larcis Caasck1 votes

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Amy Khal1 votes

Thanks !

Solari Fortune1 votes

This get 2 Double Rainbow explanations (This is good grade)

Amy Khal1 votes

What does it mean...? Thanks !

TemmoDaTitan1 votes

Its honestly meh. ive seen better ones but good job

Amy Khal5 votes

Thanks ! But I'd have preferred if you just looked at the piece objectively instead of just comparing it to others you've seen. Thanks for taking the time to write that anyway.

Lucifer1 votes

I like the colors. The style itself is nice, but it needs some work. You can tell her thighs are well... Awkward, and they honestly look like thunder thighs. The shifty eye look also distracts from the other nice aspects of the artwork. The upper torso is very well draw, and the details on her staff are quite lovely. As an artist myself, I can also tell you I know the hand trick~ placing the hands/hand behind the back because hands are a bitchhhhhhhhhhhhhhh to draw. You shouldn't do this, you'll only get better the more you try (: This is a nice first attempt, but I think it could use some improvements! Good job

Amy Khal3 votes

Hi and thanks ! I've noticed that the thighs are the overall least favorite part, I'm taking it in consideration. And the hands are drawn but they're just hidden. I don't really have any grudge against drawing them but it just happen that one was hidden lol. Anyway thank you so much for taking the time to write all of this !

Rhyto1 votes

Good appearance but does have some noted details that need to be worked on, 8.6/10 Good effort, I'm also working on mine as well.

Amy Khal1 votes

Thanks ! I'm still learning of course. And I'd love to see your fan art once you finish it ! Either add me or post it on the boards :) !

Rhyto1 votes

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Thanks ! I'm still learning of course. And I'd love to see your fan art once you finish it ! Either add me or post it on the boards :) !

Roger that, I'll keep that in mind. ^_^

Igotlazy1 votes

Very well done, I will say that I think she should be a little taller though, she kinda looks squished.

Amy Khal1 votes

Hi ! Thanks a lot I'm taking notes for next time !

Kieferr1 votes

Yeah her thighs are too large. And as a "sexy" skin, her outfit and body should be the focus of the picture, not her staff; its blocking her. But everything else is good. Colors, technique... Its incredible.

Amy Khal3 votes

Hi and thanks ! But I'm sorry I'm going to have to disagree with you, I don't think it's a sexy skin at all. Senshi's are not supposed to be "sexy" and Lux doesn't go with this. She's cute but not sexy. Still thank you for taking your time to write that !

Duckling Deluxe1 votes

Wow. Beautiful ^^

Treyen1 votes

she's looking at her staff like she wants to eat it. maybe it's tasty i dunno

Amy Khal3 votes

Lmao maybe ;).

Ninimania1 votes

It looks cute ;-; I like it^^ Good job c:

WhiskerWow1 votes

This is really good looking! :) I'm not too good at critiquing, but the yellow streak on top doesn't really look good. The one on the bottom looks nice because it's mixed with all the pink. But I don't really know how you could fix something like that. :/

lDontLiftIcarry1 votes

Art is good, I'm more of a fan of a more "3D" looking art myself... Not CGI stuff just a more flushed out art like uh...

http://images6.fanpop.com/image/photos/36300000/League-of-legends-image-league-of-legends-36321656-960-540.jpg

Kinjishi1 votes

Personally, the wand feels way too big. Unless it is going to be redesigned at a later time as a staff, then there is no real reason to have it so large.

RiotKoobrick1 votes

This is awesome! Tell her to not be nervous because there is real talent here!

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