Lux Art
Not by me, but she is nervous to post herself and wants opinions and any suggestions. http://i.imgur.com/U9GzdeD.jpg
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My advice: stop being nervous 'cause that's awesome.
This is so good!
All around it looks pretty nice. Shes a little to fat in some areas though.
The art is good, but I'm more impressed with how positive the artist has reacted to the feedback. Sometimes it can be hard to accept criticism, yet she has taken it in stride like a true Lux fan. Anyway, most everyone else has already expressed how I feel about this piece, so I'll just leave it at that. Keep it up!
Maybe you could make it look like Lux before saying it's Lux.
Just a suggestion.
Because that honestly looks more like some random girl at an anime convention.
YAAASSS! IT LOOKS SO GOOD! THAT'S WONDERFUL! YAAAASSSS! POST MORE ARTWORK! :O
It looks excellent. The lighting and colors are especially well executed.
As a bit of constructive criticism, it's a bit curvier than lux is usually portrayed.
But very well done regardless.
ask her to do magical girl taric next
It's already been said but, the proportions below her waist (thighs, legs, etc.) are off and maybe it's just me but her shoulders look a bit too broad. Besides that.. it looks great, nice job 
How can you be nervous when you're being internet anonymous wtf? ...Unless OP is actually the person who drew it.... DUN DUN DUUUUUUN
Awesome.
Very well done, I will say that I think she should be a little taller though, she kinda looks squished.
This get 2 Double Rainbow explanations (This is good grade)
Yeah her thighs are too large. And as a "sexy" skin, her outfit and body should be the focus of the picture, not her staff; its blocking her. But everything else is good. Colors, technique... Its incredible.
Wow. Beautiful ^^
she's looking at her staff like she wants to eat it. maybe it's tasty i dunno
It looks cute ;-; I like it^^ Good job c:
This is really good looking! :) I'm not too good at critiquing, but the yellow streak on top doesn't really look good. The one on the bottom looks nice because it's mixed with all the pink. But I don't really know how you could fix something like that. :/
Art is good, I'm more of a fan of a more "3D" looking art myself... Not CGI stuff just a more flushed out art like uh...
Personally, the wand feels way too big. Unless it is going to be redesigned at a later time as a staff, then there is no real reason to have it so large.
This is awesome! Tell her to not be nervous because there is real talent here!
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Its honestly meh. ive seen better ones but good job
I like the colors. The style itself is nice, but it needs some work. You can tell her thighs are well... Awkward, and they honestly look like thunder thighs. The shifty eye look also distracts from the other nice aspects of the artwork. The upper torso is very well draw, and the details on her staff are quite lovely. As an artist myself, I can also tell you I know the hand trick~ placing the hands/hand behind the back because hands are a bitchhhhhhhhhhhhhhh to draw. You shouldn't do this, you'll only get better the more you try (: This is a nice first attempt, but I think it could use some improvements! Good job
Good appearance but does have some noted details that need to be worked on, 8.6/10 Good effort, I'm also working on mine as well.