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Chupacabra/Chimera (champion idea)

K54··1 votes·406 views

R. An AD champ with an ultimate like Vi's, but about 3000 range. On arrival, this ultimate should knock all other enemy champions back like Xin Zhao's ultimate. Damage shouldn't be too high, the objective of the ultimate is for focusing the enemy team's well protected ADC in late game team fighting.

E. A dash skill shot with about 850 range (if collides with enemy unit/neutral monster/champion dash will stop short but does damage on collision, like Gragas' charge, but single target) followed by 40% increased movement speed which reduces to normal over 2 seconds.

Q. A ranged slow/stun skill shot like Anivia's Q, but different effect. Has 1sec stun (not effected by CC reduction). After enemy recovers from stun, there's decreased movement speed of 20%, movement speed will gradually recover over 5seconds. NO damage. Needs long range, this is for catching an escaping ranged ADC.

W. Should have passive passive bleed damage. Activated should grant 100% critical strike for the duration and give bonus attack speed. 100% critical from level 1. Bonus attack speed is +20/40/60/80/100%. Duration should be about 4 seconds. (like having Sword of the Divine item 3131 but with an extra second)

Champion passive should be 100% movement speed when chasing chasing a target below 20/25/30/35% health.

Visual preference would favor a mix of MonkeyKing Wukong (monkey) and Warwick Warwick (wolf).

3 Comments

Crowe Stalker1 votes

This is literally the most overpowered mobility champion I have ever seen. Do you even know how long 3000 range is? or 800? 800 is how far Ahri can fling her Orb of Deception, and 3000 is from either wolf camp to the middle turret (or pretty freaking close)

"R. An AD champ with an ultimate like Vi's, but about 3000 range. On arrival, this ultimate should knock all other enemy champions back like Xin Zhao's ultimate. Damage shouldn't be too high, the objective of the ultimate is for focusing the enemy team's well protected ADC in late game team fighting." Ultimate is insane, just flat out. The way you describe it, it's a suicide run into the enemy in an attempt to divide and conquer, which only a tank could pull off (and no tank has THAT much mobility) There is only one champion that should be able to do that, and Nocturne is squishy as all hell to compensate for his ability to do that.

"E. A dash skill shot with about 850 range (if collides with enemy unit/neutral monster/champion dash will stop short but does damage on collision, like Gragas' charge, but single target) followed by 40% increased movement speed which reduces to normal over 2 seconds." An 850 unit dash is almost as powerful as a Kha'zix leap with Evolved Wings (900, and he starts it off at 600 units range BEFORE he can leap 900 AFTER an Evolution Point) and the 40% movement speed buff, even if it decays quickly, is still far beyond enough for a chase or engage (which really is insane)

"Q. A ranged slow/stun skill shot like Anivia's Q, but different effect. Has 1sec stun (not effected by CC reduction). After enemy recovers from stun, there's decreased movement speed of 20%, movement speed will gradually recover over 5seconds. NO damage. Needs long range, this is for catching an escaping ranged ADC." A 1 second stun not affected by CC reduction could be a knockup. This is about the only ability I see that could be implemented.

"W. Should have passive passive bleed damage. Activated should grant 100% critical strike for the duration and give bonus attack speed. 100% critical from level 1. Bonus attack speed is +20/40/60/80/100%. Duration should be about 4 seconds. (like having Sword of the Divine but with an extra second)" W is literally just way too overpowered with item 3031 assuming this is an AD champion, and is still ridiculous even if not. The extra attack damage in addition would break the game on how high it goes (even Nocturne's Shroud of Darkness can, at BEST, reach 80% speed with his shield, which takes practice to block a spell.)

"Champion passive should be 100% movement speed when chasing chasing a target below 20/25/30/35% health." Even Warwick's blood scent adds even half 100% movement speed even if his Blood Scent is utilized to the maximum potential. Vayne's Night Hunter (including her Final Hour Ultimate) can do this with 90 movement speed and ONLY WHEN APPROACHING AN ENEMY IN RANGE AND IN SIGHT.

Overall, this Champion would be INSANELY overpowered for it's ability to engage a target, beat them to all hell, and run away like they were never there, which no one should be able to do unless it's a 1v1 in the jungle (which, based on how this character is looking, is NOT what you are aiming for)

Take some time, play a few more champions and try to understand how each one works individually. Try to understand how each ability plays out and why certain abilities have long cooldowns (and why certain abilities have very short cooldowns) The main problem here is that the numbers you are aiming for are too high. I am not saying this champion's concepts can't be done, but you need to tone down the numbers drastically.

K541 votes

No different from Pantheon's ultimate. Just drops in on whoever he wants lol

I used these numbers because they compare to the numbers that a lot of champions have and none of them are considered op. I in no way want this champion to be a high damage dealer and he/she/it should be squishy. This champion comes in handy late game when you have an ADC running around with absolutely no armor or magic resist, but are able to escape from bruisers cause they don't have CC. So far, the only way to safely get to an ADC is an ambush with mobility or swift shoes and you have use a champ like Yorick, Pantheon, Vi or Wukong just to secure the kill.

The dash range is not unheard of because most champions dash or leap is about 700range. Pantheon's ulti is at least 3000.

Nothing wrong with the W, just give it high CD (a lot of champions have a speed burst ability, only difference is this crit strikes, but it'd be no different than building 100% critical) and consider it a champion who comes pre-equipped with Sword of the Divine. Since this champion doesn't deal burst damage, it's his only real way to kill or at least get the enemy ADC to low health. With bleed damage.

I understand what you're saying number wise, but it's just long range. It's no different that Master Yi sprinting across the map everywhere with highlander active and Swift/Mobility shoes.

Crowe Stalker1 votes

Keep in mind that Panth's ult does have some conditions to it (mainly small channel time and marking the area where he's landing). The way you stated your ultimate will work is far beyond reasonable, since Vi has about 800 range and Shyvana (longest thing I can find akin) is about 1000 units maximum. This also is usually done with a somewhat survivable champion, which you just stated was not your intent (in which case, have fun when the CC is over, the enemy team sure as hell isn't going to be happy to see you.)

Most mobile ADCs can be countered relatively easily if you play decently, and place a few wards in the jungle (or are just lucky and stumble across her either alone or with a squishy partner) and in some cases it might actually be more unreasonable for them to be easily countered.

Most of the dashes I'm seeing for ranged champions like Lucian and Graves is around 425-500 units. Most melee Champions have gap closers usually sitting around 500-700, and 850 is REALLY a stretch without some kind of prerequisite in place to earn it (For example, Khazix must invest 1 Evolution point into Evolved Wings to increase his Leap range, and Rengar needs 14 stacks on his item 3166 or item 3175 to increase his leap range from 600 to 750.) Even without the movement speed buff your dash is really asking for a lot in and of itself.

W would need to be on a static half minute cooldown, if not much longer than that to compensate for the sheer damage output of the 100% critical hit chance alone, not even beginning to look at anything else. item 3131 has a full minute cooldown without champion kills or assists.

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