I drew a mouth for the first time on a drawing tablet - Whats your oppinion and how could I improve?

º Kindred º·6/27/2018, 12:46:00 AM·4 votes·2,763 views

https://imgur.com/WxuzR4v I used to draw only a line as a mouth (since dragonball mouths are just like that) and overall kinda held my drawings simplystic as possible. So I wanted to improve into a soft-painter(?) feel free to give your oppinion on the nose too if you want to. Please dont be too harsh, bought my tablet 2 days ago [sg-soraka] note: The light is coming from above Anyways, thanks for stopping by c:

5 Comments

The Soulforged6/27/2018, 1:21:32 AM3 votes

I think the left nostril needs to be a bit more visible. Other than that, only complaint is it looks weird without a chin. Keep up the good work.

Ebonmaw Dragon6/27/2018, 1:43:08 AM3 votes

Wrong boards, read the guidelines:

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Arakadia6/27/2018, 4:04:26 PM2 votes

Shade underneath the bottom lip to define it better (but that's also just how it should be).