Riot, small complaint about the Order vs Chaos comic

Cryo00·6/15/2017, 11:34:38 PM·4 votes·966 views

Hey guys, fantastic work on the comic.

I think its is absolutely amazing art-wise, but the facial expression for Yasuo is off. For a being hellbent (heh) on ushering an age of chaos, Yasuo is way too composed and serious. He needs to relish in war smiling as he wipes down waves after waves of angels. Riven's expressions are done extremely well, as a being who wants to bring in order, she has to be stern and composed.

I think the comic would have been better without the dialogues, cause it feels really unnecessary. The narration is amazing, but the dialogues feel...robotic. I know that didn't make much sense, but I don't know how to explain it.

3 Comments

Thorgram6/16/2017, 12:02:55 AM2 votes

Their dialogs are in-game quotes, so it's a nice touch, but yeah they feel pretty empty, because, yeah, it is generic phrase they throw during the match.

But on another note, the Angels were pretty cool, and i hope the whole order vs chaos thing will be embodied by Kayle vs Morgana in Valoran :3

Marshbouy6/15/2017, 11:36:13 PM1 votes

I agree. I think Yasuo should have had a Cicero like vibe.

Arakadia6/16/2017, 8:18:11 AM1 votes

Where did you see this comic? Link if you can.

EDIT: Found it.