Here have some REAL lore pt.2 (Last thread GOT DELETED by mods for unknown reasons)

IS1d51f7fd0f8e2764617b0·3/4/2015, 7:38:30 PM·30 votes·2,520 views

EDIT: Old thread is now back and can be found here:

Feel free to check out Skarners AMAZING original backstory

http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/story-art/WGkjd7wd-from-all-of-you-newcomers-here-have-some-real-lore

Link to ALL judgements

http://forums.na.leagueoflegends.com/board/showthread.php?t=256575

Here however is the judgement of LUX! // NOT written by me, all credit goes to RIOT's old narrative department

Now before we begin, lux lore has not yet been retconned meaning it is still a good quick DESCRIPTION of the character, however it fails to grasp the darker more tragic aspects of her persona, and this is why the JUDGEMENT you will read below was developed.

(I also apologise for my english, i am Swedish so there may be some grammatic errors above ^)

Candidate: Lux Date: October 17, 20 CLE

OBSERVATION

Lux runs briskly into the hallway, almost bursting with excitement. The light plays off of the young girl’s golden hair, emitting a brightness that almost gives her an ethereal air. Her colorful attire and disarming smile would fool any ignorant passerby, but the ease with which she wears her battle armor would give any seasoned warrior pause.

She pauses for a moment to take in the scenery, her intelligent eyes darting around. An intricate baton darts rapidly between her fingers, conveying her impatience.

The truest opponent lies within.

An unimpressed “hmph” spills out of her lips. Striding forward, she pushes firmly with a gloved hand to open the marble doors before her. With an effortless spin of her baton, her body is enveloped in a bright aura. She runs inside, undaunted by the complete darkness that swallows her up.

REFLECTION

Garen, the Might of Demacia, her long-lost brother, stood before her. His face was stern, yet kind, and exactly how she had imagined he would look in real life, having only seen him in the League match broadcasts since he had been taken away. “Why do you want to join the League?”

Lux allowed herself a smile, trying to not seem smug. While anyone who had been subject to a League judgment was forbidden to discuss the trial, Lux had done her research, and she knew that they summoned illusions to extract their answers. It was mere child’s play for her; she could see right through it, and she knew what they wanted to hear.

She straightened and looked the illusion of her brother straight in the eye. “To fight for justice in the name of Demacia.”

“What is the real reason, Luxanna?”

“Victory for our allies, defeat for our enemies, and justice for all.” They were both quotes from The Measured Tread, the handbook that any self-respecting Demacian could recite on command, but they did not make them any less true for her own purposes.

Her brother frowned, and that was the last thing Lux saw before an explosion of light consumed them.

It was happening again. Sometimes, the light would bounce off the glass hall of the Demacian Royal Academy, casting a bewitching display of prisms in every direction. Lux’s skin would shimmer, as if composed from the dust of crystals. Her mood lifted and she let the light envelop her, rendering her invisible in plain sight.

She hadn’t yet gained control over the odd occurrence, which was unfortunate as it would happen at random intervals during the most inopportune of moments. Lux ran off in the direction of her home, heart racing in the hopes that the illusion would stick around long enough for her to show her parents. There was only a fleeting twinge of guilt that struck her for leaving school, but her teacher would count her as absent anyway.

Lux burst into the Crownguard residence. To her delight, she heard familiar voices speaking quietly in the kitchen. She found three military officials standing at attention, speaking to her parents. Her heart skipped a beat as she started to retreat back into the living room; they were discussing important business, and she had been taught better than to interrupt. She would have left the house entirely, except at that one dreadful moment, she heard her name.

She froze.

“It is the greatest honor you could bestow upon our household to take Luxanna. She will serve you well, just as Garen has before her.” A chair scraped along the floor as her mother stood.

“You are sure, Lilia? Your daughter is at the age where she needs her parents the most, especially after taking her older brother away.”

“It is all in the King’s name. You will provide all the parenting that she will need.” Her father’s tone was dismissive.

“Very well. It is done.”

Lux fell to the ground, the repressed memories unforgivingly rushing back into her mind. Her parents delivering the news. Lux barricading herself in her room. The pain in her arms as they forcibly dragged her away from her home. Her hair draped across her face as she refused to look at her parents. The burn of her tears as she cried herself to sleep every night. The booming voices yelling at her to focus. Her screams as she cursed her family for doing this to her.

Then, her own voice echoing back at her, reciting the Justice Pledge alongside her fellow recruits. The comfort of re-reading The Measured Tread cover to cover countless times. The indoctrination of the new incoming class, led by Lux herself. The pride swelling in her heart as she marched forth under Demacia’s shining banner. The accolades in praise of her exemplary work. The absolute love for her country. The emptiness of realization of what she had willingly grown to love.

The assault of memories subsided, and she was left slumped in the darkness. She knew the League had retreated from her mind, but the test wasn’t over yet. Someone was standing before her, and she didn’t even have to look up to know who it was.

“Will you admit the real reason why you want to join the League now?”

Her labored breaths caught in her throat just long enough for her to whisper, “Because I have nothing else…”

The darkness shattered around her, falling to the ground in shards. She crumpled to the ground, heaving sobs racking her body.

Garen remained standing, his normally kind face gruff and unreadable as the illusion dissolved around them. “You have just shared your mind with me. To become a champion of the League, you must allow others into your mind, and they will know your true conviction and purpose better than you yourself. If you are prepared, you know what you must do.”

Her brother turned and strode through the hallway that stretched before them to another set of double doors. He did not stop to lend her a hand, nor did he glance backwards to see if she would follow.

He didn’t need to. Lux remained on the floor, composing herself. For a moment, she considered calling out to her brother or running back into the Great Hallway, out of the League’s penetrative gaze. This was the first challenge that ever daunted her, even moreso than when she was being tested by Demacia’s top magicians or sneaking through Noxus’s innermost tunnels. But she was a Crownguard, and she knew that she would overcome this challenge, just as she had overcome all other challenges in her life.

She stood, clutching the baton deftly in her hand. She would prove that her dedication to her city-state was true, and that she had not been lying when she first answered their question.

So tell me, does this seem ineffecient and two dimensional to you ?

37 Comments

Motajo3/4/2015, 10:25:55 PM15 votes

Sigh... I wonder how long until this does get retconned. Changing Lux will be the last straw for me. The only thing I'll have left is gameplay (and that's really only there because I can play with friends).

I wish I could do more to voice this than just post on the forums and refuse to spend more on this game.

BetaDude403/4/2015, 11:23:02 PM10 votes

Wait, the mods actually did that???

'Scuse me, but doesn't that violate a basic human right of expression??

Are we not allowed to dislike the new lore and show others the old lore if we want????

From what I recall, NOTHING in the previous post you made alluded to something offensive, it wasn't spam, it's in the perfectly correct board...

Alright, if Rito also deletes this one, make a part three. Have a little talk with Riot's support staff (if they aren't bots). I've never said anyone at Riot deserves to be fired, but I believe those moderators seriously need to consider what their power is.

A Superb Villain3/5/2015, 2:54:36 AM7 votes

{quoted}

So tell me, does this seem ineffecient and two dimensional to you ?

It brings tears to my eyes every time; such delicious sorrow should persist through all time. Luxanna's laugh is the most aggravating sound in League of Legends, but remembering how empty she is makes it sound so sweet.

libraryseraph 3/5/2015, 3:43:44 AM5 votes

I thought you'd like to know your old thread is right here

Dyvius3/5/2015, 8:52:09 AM4 votes

Also, OP:

I honestly found Orianna's Judgment to be the most eerie and rich piece of lore ever written by Riot.

While Lux's is definitely one of the greats, Orianna's was honestly the one that stuck with me the best.

RIP good storytelling.

Narasimha3/5/2015, 2:32:58 PM4 votes

The main problem is that, for the vast majority of players, this side of Lux doesn't exist. Its sad, but its true. Most people are only going to go off what they see in the game, because thats the easiest way to get their personality. And the only thing we get from Lux IS her happy, bubbly, carefree side. And at its core, Riot is still a game company, and its game has never been fully lore focused. They really have no incentive to keep churning out works like this, no matter how good it is, if it only affects a minority of players.

Chaotic Reks3/5/2015, 6:25:32 PM3 votes

copies and saves everything

Squarefighter3/5/2015, 6:53:39 AM3 votes

(Last thread GOT DELETED by mods for unknown reasons)

Needs more tin foil

Impetual3/5/2015, 7:48:12 AM3 votes

Well written. I wish Riot released work like this so that it could actually be considered canon.

You Sir, have excellent narrative skills.

ActuallyArrow3/5/2015, 6:59:32 AM2 votes

It looks and reads like a fanfiction...

Chromatic Eagle3/5/2015, 5:18:50 PM1 votes

You could've just linked the wiki.