@Riot. The Skarner story was awesome! But...

Solideus··4 votes·954 views

I really liked the read, high praise for the writing!

But...I couldn't help but feel the Brackern's history was very disconnected from the history of Valoran.. Are you confident that you can use them in stories in a way that makes them feel like they are part of and relevant to the world?

Seems to me they were distancing themselves or inactive for ALL of Valoran's relevant history. Like, they're more alien to the world and the setting than actual space-aliens would've been. Because.. they barely even interacted with any of it in any tangible way?

I feel like there were many other ways you could have used the Brackern race without compromising their core themes, like making them a dormant army from ancient-ancient-ancient Shuriman, or something. (After Azir's Shurima event I was pretty confident this would be the actual direction you'd go in, but was obviously wrong)

Why didn't you go for something more easily made relevant to the contemporary world of Valoran? I always felt Skarner's biggest problem was that he and his race always felt VERY out of place in a world-building sense; the new story didn't amend that, if anything it made them even more distant from the world around them.

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Sharjo1 votes

I feel like that's the point; Skarner's people have always been highly isolated. They're elementals in a world of organic lifeforms, where the only other beings like them are colossal super powers in the magical sense. They're kinda like Coelacanths; been doing their own thing for 300 million years without issue and then humans found out they're still a thing.

It's not like the Brackern are the only one of League's fantasy races like this; the Marai are basically in the same boat but it's easier to swallow for some in their case because they're fully aquatic and living in the deep ocean, and an argument can be made for the Darkin too, as their only involvement in history that we've seen has been through Aatrox.

What I'm basically saying is that Skarner, Nami and Aatrox are prehistoric fish and that can work in the narrative.

Solideus2 votes

I think it's very relevant though that Aatrox has a very strong influence and inprint on Valoran's history, and while the Marai are distant they are still an active society which can have enough infrequent contact with humans to appear in stories, be part of legends and inspire folklore.

Not to mention the Tropes of demons and mermaids are much easier to place and work with as a reader even with little actual information about the in-canon variations specifically. A "Crystal scorpion" doesn't have any tropes that gives much to a reader (other than being a generic RPG mob to farm?); that puts more responsibility on the writers to flesh them out and make them relevant to the world-building.

What I guess I'm saying is I agree Skarner is a prehistoric fish, but I'd disagree the Darkin and Marai are.

The Brackern were asleep and inactive for millenia, entirely disconnected from everything and not seeming to have left an impact on history, scattered any relics or inspired any culture before then. Had the Brackern been at the center of some mythology, been deified by some cult, the sleeping guardians of some ancient people, etc, they would at least have some relevance in the tangible world around them, even if they hadn't taken part in anything important for millennia, "until now!".

I love the story, but I'm a bit worried it now hinders writers from giving the Brackern some way that that they had interacted with the world or something that made them relevant to Valoran's history. Writing them as having slept for millenia may or may not also have been a bad call.

Doctor Ivellius1 votes

But Solideus, why do you think the writers are going to write anything else about them down the road?

:-D

Solideus1 votes

Old memes die hard.. :)

Doctor Ivellius1 votes

I'm sure in 5 years they'll have an update.

GreenLore1 votes

I'm a bit sad that they specifically referred to the Brackern as scorpions.

Before it was unknown if all of them had the appearance of scorpions,which meant that Riot had the possibility to make another brackern champ who is based on something else,but now the chance to ever get another brackern champ are basically zero,since it would mean that they'd need to introduce another crystaline scorpion which they obviously won't do.

Solideus1 votes

Yeah I would have preferred a wider physiology too! I think his old judgement did mention they were scorpions, but I might be wrong. Either way, would have loved them to be more varied too!

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