Small tweeks to Viktor's splash that might help

333lom··31 votes·3,182 views

I've noticed some details that if adjusted, would make this splash perfect. I don't know how much time the art department has, but I've edited these details to point out to what I meant, I apologize. It didn't take much effort, the edits are rather small.

This is the edited version: http://40.media.tumblr.com/d50b45aabbdb0c6729e8bf9744cfcbb7/tumblr_nbonuxMR1j1tbpqalo2_1280.png While this is the original version: http://41.media.tumblr.com/ea4151d4b3cc9296abc610a9bf7c4ae0/tumblr_nbonuxMR1j1tbpqalo1_1280.png

In the original, his spine looks twisted a bit too much... and his right chest plate appears to be missing. He shouldn't be that thin! It might have been intended because of the extreme pose, but it's exaggerated too much. And the pose isn't compromised with the edits. I've also added a line on the drape that he has on the in-game model. Here are the two splashes side-by-side: http://41.media.tumblr.com/34784a39914fc7e9df7b9b8ac57b98dd/tumblr_nbonuxMR1j1tbpqalo3_1280.png

24 Comments

Dustogrei6 votes

Really really subtle change. It does look better, so I'll give you an upvote, but it's so subtle that I don't see them changing it.

333lom3 votes

Thanks. Though exactly because the change is small, it would be easy to make the said change.

ShakySurgeon4 votes

I agree it looks much better.

TheMachineHerald4 votes

Oh, I think I saw this some time ago in your tumblr~ I would love to see these changes in the real splash art. I really like how did you make these adjustments, you can't tell if these were done by the same guy who did the splash art. They fit so... nicely.

I hope that Riot-senpai gives an eye to this post!

333lom3 votes

Thank you! I hope the Art department finds this worthy of their time.

Gunpoint3 votes

No point in changing this, his splash is fine, and I can barely see what you even did.

junglerboy163 votes

While I think it looks good with the change, I think you are confusing foreshortening (a kind of perspective technique) with distorted proportions. We are very obviously supposed to be looking up at Viktor from the ground (you can tell because of the scale of his leg in comparison to the rest of his body) and the way he is turning makes it seem like he has shifted a little from his natural walking posture to turn towards us as we look through the gate he has just melted. It makes him look like he is moving and less static. Additionally, look at the walls of the structures right behind him, they are also angled backwards slightly, and this confirms our perspective. Adding in his shoulder like you have makes him look better in isolation, but when put into the rest of the background, it actually makes it mismatch ever so slightly.

333lom4 votes

Actually, it's quite the opposite of what you wrote. I know what foreshortening is, and this is not it. http://40.media.tumblr.com/8ad23e22b55fc33eeab3453680a0af7e/tumblr_njednaVjoj1tbpqalo1_500.png You can see here exactly what I modified in his anatomy. http://41.media.tumblr.com/fff20969b37ce8b23348bbde102c7cd5/tumblr_njednaVjoj1tbpqalo2_500.png And here are the lines of the perspective. I actually made him fit into the perspective.

junglerboy162 votes

You know, I see it a lot more clearly now, thanks! That said, it seems like a small change, and hopefully Riot puts it through.

The Anagram King3 votes

Support, bump, favourited, etc.

I saw this when you first posted it on your blog, and it's been annoying the hell out've me ever since! :P

Fix the shoulder, Riot!

Only Play Darius2 votes

Do you have a job in graphic design? The edits you made look like it was done by Riot themselves!

Also, I think they may have made viktor look skinny so as not to confuse players, 90% of him is made of metal so people might already think he is a tank, having him bulky/muscular would confuse these players even more.

333lom1 votes

Well I'm a freelance artist and a comic book author, thanks btw :D Have you seen the in-game model for Creator? Now that is too bulky!

willcarry4gold2 votes

ummm guys I just realized that in his splash he looks like he's either breaking himself out of a prison, or breaking someone else out of prison

333lom1 votes

It always looked to me like he was going inside a sewage tunnel xD

KING OF MASKS2 votes

A few glorious changes to make one of the best splashes in the game that much better. Nice work.

AquariusGine1 votes

I like slim men :/

I'm sure he has a body of a swimmer under there

A Superb Villain1 votes

But it is mostly wires and metal under there.

sakuda1 votes

I really like his spine though

333lom1 votes

Who doesn't?...(but only when it's not broken)

DrCyanide1 votes

When I started looking at them, I just thought you darkened the chest plate a hair on the edited version.

Don't really care about the spine change on Viktor. There are plenty worse splash arts to worry about if that bothers you.

SleepyLionCub1 votes

First of all it does look better.

However, who's to say vik isnt really skinny? He is a nerd who works on robots all day.

333lom1 votes

Thanks!

(I heard a theory somewhere that he must work out to be in good shape, carrying augments is no easy task :P)

Salt and Veigar1 votes

They look the same to me

I guess that makes me a racist :(

The Ellimiist1 votes

I literally can not see a difference >

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