Avaska, The Defender of Zaun CHAMPION CONCEPT

DemonicSlug·8/14/2015, 5:14:45 PM·1 votes·1,032 views

No concept art, but I'm more of just an ideas person. Now, before you read the lore, it might not be completely accurate. It's my version of the future of Runeterra, where Zaun becomes corrupt and attacks. So please enjoy, and if no, please don't comment saying hurtful things to me or anyone else. I want everyone to be civil.

Lore: : In Ionia, the blade master Irelia looks out from a cliff, watching the beautiful scenery as she meditates with Karma. Riven was also there, as she had been wandering around Ionia and stopped to find enlightenment from Karma, who had gained a reputation. Yasuo is at the bottom of the cliff, gazing up at the steps. He had been gathering up the courage to fight and kill Riven. He had a burden with her for so long, and he had saw her come from afar. The wind blew the leaves around, one hit him and he turned his head. It was then he saw a ship from Zaun. Out of the boat came people with high powered weaponry who shot their beams all over the peaceful land, making innocent people scower. Out of the boat came a woman who was sharply dressed in black, along with a male partner who was dressed the same way. They both had swords that were singed with electricity, and their movement seemed slow.

Yasuo ran up the steps. It seems that Irelia had seen it right after Yasuo had, as her and Riven bumped into him. Yasuo drew his blade and pointed it at Riven’s throat. Riven drew her blade as well, but instead attacked the four assassins that had jumped up the cliff. There was a man named Octavius and his partner Avaska. Beside them were two swordsmen, one was unknown due to his mask, but the other was Ekko. Ekko did not look content on fighting. He seemed to be forced to fight since of the Zaun uprising. Now everyone in Zaun is attacking Runeterra. Avaska lunged at Yasuo, who blocked her blow instantly. Riven and Irelia fought the others, which had the faceless swordsman dead within 1 minute. Karma ran down the steps to help. Octavius slashed Yasuo diagonally up his chest. Yasuo stayed standing as Octavius was about to kill him. He paused for a moment, looking over at Karma. Ekko saw that look in his eyes, and he raced up the steps. Octavius threw his sword in Karma’s direction, and Ekko dove, pushing her out of the way and having her fall to the ground.

Ekko got up. Octavius was reaching for his dagger to kill Yasuo, but Riven cut his head off. Avaska yelled in fury as she ran towards her. Yasuo blocked her with the wind, and stabbed her with his sword, then sliced her cheek, leaving a permanent mark. Ekko Smashed Yasuo’s sword, breaking it. Yasuo looked at him in shock as Ekko knocked him out. He grabbed Avaska and ran back to the ship. Yasuo woke up some time later being healed by Karma, making him feel foolish about trying to kill her and Riven, who ended up saving him. He turned to thank her, but she had disappeared into the wreckage that is now Ionia.

The ship barely reached the shores. Ekko jumped off with Avaska, who was in tremendous pain. Ekko looked over near Zaun. "It'll be ok, Avaska. I know a Doctor who is still in Zaun. Be positive though, he's a bit mad, but he's our only choice." Avaska had a look in her eyes, she knew who he was talking about, but she reluctantly agreed. As they walked towards Zaun, an old rickety dinghy started to make i’s way into the deserted city’s harbor…

Abilities:

Passive: Power of Zaun Avaska is a noble fighter, which allows her armor to increase by 5 every 3 seconds when she's in combat. She also thrives against scared enemies, given her bonus critical strike chance and armor penetration with basic attacks or Lunge of Zaun (Against enemies with their back turned).

Q: Spinning Slash Avaska spins for 1.5 seconds, blocking any basic attacks and reflecting a set amount of magic damage back to the attacker. If the spin was successful, all enemies who had attacked her during this state will be slowed while Avaska gains a small movement speed buff. No Cost, 7/7/6/5/4 second cool-down.

W: Dash Avaska Dashes toward a target location, causing her next attack to crit and granting her attack speed for the next 5 seconds. No Cost, 12/10/8/7/6 second cool-down.

E: Lunge of Zaun Avaska jumps into the air and lunges toward a target area, causing any enemy in the area to take a minimum of 50 physical damage. The less targets in the area, the more damage that is done, up to a maximum of 140 physical damage (+70% of Physical Damage) if there is only one target (applies to monsters and minions). If the target is slowed by Spinning Slash, The target is stunned for one second, but is not slowed afterwards. No Cost, 7/6/5/4/4 second cool-down.

R: Blade of the Crescent City Passive: Avaska ignores 20% of her enemies armor. Active: Avaska Stabs her target once, Dealing 250 (+55% of Physical Damage) True Damage and applying a slow. If she then can get the target below 50% of their maximum health in the next 5/4/3 seconds (or if they already are) She can activate it again to do 300 (+65% of Physical Damage) True Damage and stun the target. Costs 25% of current health, 137/105/85 second cool-down.

Now, if you have any questions about the abilities, ask me, and I will answer. If you have anything nice to say, please say it, I love feedback! If you have anything bad to say, try saying it in a nice way. I hope you enjoyed!

2 Comments

Posui Gart8/14/2015, 5:41:37 PM1 votes

First, I didn't read the lore, it just looks like some fanfiction with too much champions there. No offence to you, just my personal dislike About abilities: Passive: "She also thrives against scared enemies", but she has no "fear" effect on her spells. Q: Can she attack/use other spells while spinning? And 4 sec cd looks like too low for 1.5 sec immunity to AA and magic reflection. And that's 2.4 sec cd with 40% cdr W: The only problem is the name. E: So she has 2 mobility spells, and both are area-tageted. And again, 4 sec cd is too low. She already has +ms from Q and dash from W. But the idea of dividing damage is nice. Also maybe replace stun with fear, so her passive does something R: Please explane how this spell scales with level, I hope its not lvl1 numbers(600 true damage at lvl6, and add 110% AD to it). But the idea itself is fine too. Overall: She is not really Zaun-themed(that city of mad scientists), and she has too much control and mobility My ideas: Passive: Nothing to say here, it depends too much on her other spells Q: Blocks all incoming projectiles with her sword for some short time(maybe 1 sec), but she can't attack(too busy with reflecting). After this, she gets MS boost based on amount of reflected projectiles W: Nice as it is E: Strikes all enemies around her with damage based on their number(like it is now), and slows them, but if there is only one target-it is feared. R: Nice as it is, just change the numbers and maybe make first part of damage physical. And also if target is ulted, it is counted as the only target for E(so you can W-crit-ult someone and then E him for max dmg and fear, after that attack him a bit with passive bonus and finish with recasting ult and stun with some more attacks)

Shadr23698/15/2015, 2:22:45 AM1 votes

True damage on the Ult is too strong. You should change it to physical damage. Q has the same name as tryndamere's E. W needs a more unique name. E is somewhat decent.

Overall it's a nice concept but needs a little work. You should but the cooldowns and mana costs to make it more complete.