First video, Talking about my new case :]

Hey! [slayer-jinx-catface] I would like some feed back. I know my editing needs a bit of work but id appreciate constructive criticism :]

Sorry in advance if i put it in the wrong discussion board :/

Heres a league montage i put together forever ago xD as well https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CR7amltlif4