As the title already says, I would love to have some feedback on my video/s. This is my 3rd youtube video and I'm trying to improve my editing skills to create content that people like :) Hope you enjoy!! <3 (hope I'm in the right category for it)
Flaherty2 votesIt's not bad content but at the same time it's not very interesting content. People only watch League videos on youtube because they either enjoy the commentary of the person playing or the video tries to teach the audience how to do something within the game or show something new within the game. You don't really any of those things in this video which I think will turn most people away if they even manage to find your videos in the search results. I'd suggest either focusing on interesting topics while you speak and just play the game normally (which doesn't really leave a lot of room for editing) or try to focus on specific gameplay mechanics/strategies/champion/new content so people will find your videos when they search common things related to League and more importantly stay to watch what you're making.
purpletoweljh1 voteswell i believe she is going more for a comedy approach.
Flaherty2 votesYeah I could kind of see that but the way it's edited and the lack of things she says and emotion doesn't really make that play out too well.
Riiasya1 votesThanks for the feedback! I will try to keep that in mind for my next videos. But it's hard to produce content with pro play tips etc, since I'm not really a pro and actually a diamond 5 support main. I'M trying to learn mid and adc since support is nothing very exciting to watch for most people, so I'm always pro. I guess my videos are more for the fun of watching someone than actually having very useful content. (like kaypea, pokimane etc)
purpletoweljh1 votesagreed
Sckullzz1 votesIt's not bad content but at the same time it's not very interesting content. People only watch League videos on youtube because they either enjoy the commentary of the person playing or the video tries to teach the audience how to do something within the game or show something new within the game. You don't really any of those things in this video which I think will turn most people away if they even manage to find your videos in the search results. I'd suggest either focusing on interesting topics while you speak and just play the game normally (which doesn't really leave a lot of room for editing) or try to focus on specific gameplay mechanics/strategies/champion/new content so people will find your videos when they search common things related to League and more importantly stay to watch what you're making.
Tagging on to this person, you want to have a goal in mind. Ask yourself, "What do I want my audience to think/feel/learn after watching?" This will help you get a better sense of how to set it up and what to edit. Nice penta!!
BakedLotion1 votesIt's not bad content but at the same time it's not very interesting content. People only watch League videos on youtube because they either enjoy the commentary or boobs
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Flaherty1 votesWhy watch a girl play league and show half her boobs when you could just watch porn?
BakedLotion1 votesWhy watch a girl play league and show half her boobs when you could just watch porn?
idk ask the horny teenagers
Riiasya1 votesTbh if people wanna see boobie streamers they can go there, there are enough out there. But some people don't wanna sell their body for money. And if I would like to ee boobs I don't watch streams to do so.
purpletoweljh2 votesthe title card is really well done*[slayer-pantheon-thumbs]*. I found that the sound of music versus your audio was off perhaps increase the volume of your voice and soften the music, Ideally music should compliment what is going on and if done correctly is usually not directly noticeable(not that you can't hear it at all), good music adds to a moment it doesn't make it. that said i would encourage you to take your opinion over mine in this matter because the way my computer deals with sound is stupid. you seem to be trying a stream highlight style which isn't bad however it is saturated with both educational and comedy styles, which yours seems to be banking on the latter with an emphasis on cool or exciting plays, which again there is an abundance of especially if you consider the number of pros and ex-pros who have youtube channels of exactly that. The big thing i feel like your video lacked is a reason for wanting to see more, what about you or your videos is going to draw me back to your channel? is going to compel me to sub? Note: I dont mean you have to have a gimmick, however since you are streaming in these clips what you believe you bring entertainment wise to your stream you should do your best to show though your video. Also nice end card and I enjoyed the Christmas lights they were a nice touch.
Riiasya2 votesThanks for the feedback :) I'm more or less new to editing and I still need to find the right style for it. I don't really know yet what kind of content draws people into watching more, since I'm not a pro player with pro tips and super awesome new playstyles haha I will try to keep it up and improve though!
purpletoweljh2 votesfrom reading your comments you seem to have a pretty strong sense of humor maybe try some comedy, and good luck with your new venture
Riiasya1 votesI'll try. Thanks :)
iWinIvan1 voteswell made keep it up :)
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VelvetCrotch1 votesBrah u should know how i look! i am creepy af! x)
And btw i could ask if ure just jealous...
VelvetCrotch1 votesWow congrats. U reported me for what? I tried to be constructive and praised her for NOT beeing sexualized. Gave her feedback she asked for. And u reported me?
Lmfao. Some dudes of this community... Cant stand constructive criticism. Superficial kids.
Riiasya2 votesThanks for the feedback! I'm mostly quiet at the begin of a play, because I'm concentrated, but I'm talking a lot during the stream. I will try to have more content in it where I speak more :) Also don't worry, I don't plan to be a boobie streamer. I actually wanna have people who watch because they like my personality and playstyle and less because they wanna have somethign to stare at :)
VelvetCrotch2 votesWow big thx that u seem to be a kind of person who understands constructive criticism. Seems like a rare gift not everbody has. ;) Just want to be positive, cause i think a step like this to do such things and ask for feedback is nothing for cowards! ( im no native speaker sry)
Btw thx for reply, keep it up and good luck Riiasya! :)
Arakadia1 votesPretty great for your 3rd video. Most new Youtubers mumble, and aren't very enthusiastic. But I can hear you and you don't sound like you were forced to play and record.
Riiasya2 votesThanks! And you're right I wasn't forced to play haha
Anomander1 votesMeh. I have seen worse. However it seems a bit stale to me.
LBmyBB1 votesAt 1:39 it sounds like a cackle....