As the title already says, I would love to have some feedback on my video/s. This is my 3rd youtube video and I'm trying to improve my editing skills to create content that people like :) Hope you enjoy!! <3 (hope I'm in the right category for it)
It's not bad content but at the same time it's not very interesting content. People only watch League videos on youtube because they either enjoy the commentary of the person playing or the video tries to teach the audience how to do something within the game or show something new within the game. You don't really any of those things in this video which I think will turn most people away if they even manage to find your videos in the search results. I'd suggest either focusing on interesting topics while you speak and just play the game normally (which doesn't really leave a lot of room for editing) or try to focus on specific gameplay mechanics/strategies/champion/new content so people will find your videos when they search common things related to League and more importantly stay to watch what you're making.
the title card is really well done*[slayer-pantheon-thumbs]*. I found that the sound of music versus your audio was off perhaps increase the volume of your voice and soften the music, Ideally music should compliment what is going on and if done correctly is usually not directly noticeable(not that you can't hear it at all), good music adds to a moment it doesn't make it. that said i would encourage you to take your opinion over mine in this matter because the way my computer deals with sound is stupid. you seem to be trying a stream highlight style which isn't bad however it is saturated with both educational and comedy styles, which yours seems to be banking on the latter with an emphasis on cool or exciting plays, which again there is an abundance of especially if you consider the number of pros and ex-pros who have youtube channels of exactly that. The big thing i feel like your video lacked is a reason for wanting to see more, what about you or your videos is going to draw me back to your channel? is going to compel me to sub? Note: I dont mean you have to have a gimmick, however since you are streaming in these clips what you believe you bring entertainment wise to your stream you should do your best to show though your video. Also nice end card and I enjoyed the Christmas lights they were a nice touch.
Pretty great for your 3rd video. Most new Youtubers mumble, and aren't very enthusiastic. But I can hear you and you don't sound like you were forced to play and record.
Meh. I have seen worse. However it seems a bit stale to me.
At 1:39 it sounds like a cackle....
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well made keep it up :)
