My Champion Concept (Claire, The Tainted Hero)

Just Lux·9/16/2018, 2:12:07 PM·3 votes·2,709 views

I've been working on this Champion for about a month or so now, and eventually got around to typing up her Lore and Abilities and tried drawing her

Here's what I have so far, Let me know your thoughts about her, I tried to keep the Abilities fairly basic because I didn't want to go overboard

Concept Art Concept Art While using her Ultimate

EDIT: After some feedback, I figured I'd type out the Abilities (In better detail and changed up a bit... Probably)

Passive: Gain 30% Tenacity when below 40% HP. Pretty self explanatory

Q: Attack Stance (Think of it like Udyr's Stances but there's only two) Passive: Increases Total AD and AP by 5% Q Second cast: Omega Strike Active: Strike an enemy for 10% of their max HP, deals bonus true damage against barriers

W: Defence Stance Passive: Increases total Armour and MR by 5% W second cast: Counter attack When hit by an empowered Auto attack (Such as Nasus' Q, Jax's W, Aatrox's Passive) Stagger the enemy (Staggering would be an effect unique to Claire, where if an enemy hits her with an empowered Auto attack, when she blocks she will stun the enemy and lower the resistances temporarily) And counter attack the enemy

E: Shield Strike Claire Dashes forward, if she hits an enemy champion they are stunned for 2 seconds E While in Ult: Blast Wave Claire Punches the ground sending out three blast waves, Knocking up and slowing all enemies hit (So basically like a Mini braum ult)

R: Unbound Power Claire takes on a Powered up form (Like Aatrox's World Ender) Upon casting she knocks back and stuns all enemies close to her R second cast: Darkin Flare Claire sends out a sphere of energy at a target location, dealing more damage at the centre of the blast (So kinda like Zigg's ultimate)

Since the Bio won't open for a lot of people, I'll add it here

Claire was born and raised in Demacia. she Idealised her father: A famed warrior in the Dauntless Vanguard, And captain before Garen took up the role. Claire dreamed of joining the Dauntless Vanguards to fight along side her father, though that day was not able to come to pass, Her father passed away before she had the chance. She tried not to show that it upset it, and still strived to become one of the Dauntless Vanguards, But wanted to make her father proud, Once she became a Dauntless Vanguard, she planned to go even higher, and be recognised as a powerful beacon of hope to the people of Demacia, she wanted to be their “Hero”

Claire made friends with other Demacians as she rose in the ranks, She became close friends with Luxanna Crownguard, and friendly rivals with Lux's Brother and her Captain Garen, Claire and Garen mutually respected each other and both trained to be better than each other, Garen used a single handed sword, whereas Claire would use a Sword and Shield, like her father.

Biography: Claire fought in many battles, Never faltering, Never backing down, and Always giving it everything she had, in time she was recognised by the people of Demacia as “The Hero of Demacia” but never took up the position of Captain, she wanted Garen to stay in that position, due to not wanting to take that away from him.

Her dream attained, and hoping she made her Father proud, she was at the top and swore to always be the Hero Demacia saw her as

Story: The fall of Demacia's Hero

It was an event I will never forget, one foolish mistake that cost me everything. I heard a voice, something calling my name from outside Demacia's walls. I grabbed my sword and shield and went to investigate, I walked into the Petricite forests, The voice was getting louder, not much louder but it went from a faint whisper to a regular voice, Who... or what this was, I didn't know. I eventually found the source of the calling. A Grey and Red greatsword, with a glow that emanated from around what would be the guard of the blade. It groomed me into picking it up, telling me of all the things it could help me do, Protect people, Be an immortal Hero... But I never thought of the catch, as soon as I touched the handle of the blade, my life was put in more peril than it had been in any battle I had fought in before.

As soon as I wrapped my hand around the handle, My heart skipped a beat, a surge of evil, dark energy began seeping into me, like a virus it tried taking over me, but I did everything I could to resist it, I screamed in agony, but I couldn't loosen my grip from the sword, I could feel the darkness clawing it's way ever further into my soul, I did everything I could to resist it, and eventually managed to let go of the sword, It dropped to the floor, I struggled to breath my vision was going blurry and eventually all went dark, I collapsed in front of the cursed blade.

I woke up to Lux holding me in her arms, she came looking for me after she had heard the screaming, She found me in the Petricite Forest where I collapse, but the sword was no where to be seen. She told me “It must've been a dream” and with me in the state I was; accepted what she said, and went back to Demacia with her.

The next day, Garen and I were training, all felt normal, but then I felt a head splitting ringing in my head, I fell to the ground. Dark clouds began to envelope the sky, and a dark energy... The same energy from the sword began to take over my body, I screamed in anguish, it felt like my soul was being ripped away from me, and soon, I became a Prisoner in my own body. The demon that was inside that blade took control... and all I could do was watch, It struck out at Garen sending him into a wall like he was nothing, it cackled maniacally and let loose a ring of dark flames. Members of the Dauntless Vanguard came to fight what I had become, but they couldn't stop it, It defeated them all effortlessly, but Garen refused to back down and kept fighting. As Garen held it off, Lux came out and saw what was happening... This Demon saw Lux and knew Garen and I were close to her. It crushed Garen into the floor, and walked towards Lux, and Raised my blade preparing to Strike, I couldn't let her get hurt and tried to get control of my body again, I told Lux to not hold back, and use everything she had to take it... and me out, She hesitated slightly but let loose a Final Spark against me, I somehow survived. Maybe it was the Demons energy? I don't know. But it's hold over me was gone and I fell to the floor I woke up several days later I awoke in a holding cell, Stripped of my sword, Shield, and Armour. With cuffs around my wrists, All I could do was wait for whatever fate had in store for me. After a while Garen walked in and Opened my cell, I looked up at him, His face said it all. He told me I was to be executed for what happened; To ensure what happened before hand doesn't happen again. I accepted my fate, Knowing it would be for the greater good of Demacia.

I was walked out to where I would be executed; people had gathered to watch, I awaited for my death, and hope it would be quick, The Executioner Raised his Axe, he didn't want to do it but knew he had to... and in his moment of Hesitation it came out, as the Axe was about to hit my neck, that Dark Aura cloaked me and the axe's blade shattered. My Body raised and faced the Executioner, The demon had taken control again, The Executioner swung his axe again, but It caught it and ripped it away from him and threw it down, It said I would be it's Vessel for it's Quest... It's Quest of Oblivion... This thing wanted to end the world as we know it, but it wasn't at full strength: Due to me resisting the Cursed Swords The dark soul that resided in the blade had fragmented, a Piece of it's Soul was inside of me.

The demon took back my Armour, My Shield, and My Sword, Then flew my body away away from Demacia. As we approached the ground I regained control of my Body, I wasn't sure whether to be grateful for being alive or regretful for not being able to stop it in time. I couldn't return to Demacia... Not until I had destroyed the Fragmented soul of this Demon from my Body; I ventured forward to find a way to purge it from me. I was a Hero to Demacia, But now I might never be again

Aatrox, You will not have me as your vessel, and I will stop you when you truly arise.

Special Interactions:

Claire First Encounter Interactions

Garen: “Garen... Hi... This is awkward” “Garen... I would say it's good to see you again, but you're here to kill me aren't you?”

Lux: “Oh, Lux, Glad to see a friendly face” “It's been a while Lux, show me how Strong you've got”

Riven: “Another Exile with White hair and a Sword... I did not steal your look I swear” “Alright, one of us has to Change”

Kayn: “why does your Scythe have an eye?” “I'm sensing something Similar to that Cursed Sword in your Scythe.. Hmm”

Rhaast: “Is that Aatrox? Or are there More Darkin than just him?”

Varus: “Oh... My, he's not wearing pants is he?” “You have a similar Aura to that Cursed Blade”

Fiora: “Ah the Grand Duellist, this isn't a Duel you'll win” “Mocking French accent I HaS nO eQuAl”

Poppy: “I'm not the Hero you're looking for” “I know I was a Hero, but I'm not anymore”

Aatrox: “Aatrox?! Damn it, you're here already?” “I guess now, it's do or die”

Leona: “Ooh, someone else who uses a sword and shield

Block with Counter blow

Aatrox (Deathbringer Stance): “The only death you'll bring is your own, demon!”

Akali (Assassin's Mark): “Run while you can, Ninja”

Blitzcrank (Power Fist): “I don't feel like getting knocked up by Robots today”

Caitlyn (Headshot): “Boom! No headshot”

Camille (Precison Protocol) “Weren't very precise there”

Draven: (Spinning Axe): “You're a sitting duck now, Noxian”

Cho'gath (Vorpal Spikes) “Oof, My shield may need repairing after that”

Darius (Crippling Strike): “I don't plan on getting crippled anytime soon”

Dr. Mundo (Masochism): “Alright, you kinky bastard”

Elise (Skittering Frenzy): “Piss off, you damn Spider”

Garen (Decisive Strike): “Gonna have to do better than that, Garen”

Gragas (Drunken rage) “Let's sober you up Eggman”

Kassadin (Nether blade): “Nether means “Lower in position” Like you in the pecking order”

Illaoi (Harsh lesson): “Was that a Harsh lesson for me or you?”

Jax (Empower): “Nice Try, Jaxxy boy”

Leona (Shield of daybreak): “Shield bump?”

Mordekaiser (Mace of spades): “I thought it was Ace of Spades”

Nasus (Siphoning strike): “No stacks today Giant... Dog... Man”

Nidalee (Takedown) “Not today, Cougar lady” Rek'sai (Queen's Wrath): “What was that supposed to be exactly?”

Rengar (Savagery): “Not very Savage there were you?”

Renekton (Ruthless predator): “Try again next time, Giant Crocodile”

Shyvana (Twin bites): “Bit off more than you could chew?”

Talon (Noxian Diplomacy) “Run back to the Shadow's assassin, that won't work on me”

Trundle (Chomp): “How'd the Shield taste?”

Twisted Fate (Pick a card): “Quite the Twist of fate, eh?”

Vayne (Tumble) “Try that again, and You'll be joining your parents”

Vi (Excessive Force): “I think my Arm's tingling from that”

Volibear (Rolling Thunder): “Usually it's Lightning before the Thunder, but I'll make an exception this time”

Wukong (Crushing Blow) “The only one who's getting crushed is you”

Xin Zhao (Three talon strike): “Consider the other talon's clipped”

Yorick (Last Rites): “This'll be your grave”

Activate Unbound Power:

Garen: “[Screams in Agony] ...Come, Garen: See the Demon your friend has become!”

Lux: “[Screams in agony] Face me, Light made! I will drown your light in Chaos!”

Jarvan “[Screams in Agony] Come, Jarvan! I will Crumble your nation to dust”

Fiora: “[Screams in Agony] Duellist, I will crush your pride, and your body!”

Kayn: “[Screams in Agony] I see you have acquired Rhaast Mortal...”

Rhaast: “[Screams in Agony] Come, Rhaast! Let us see how you compare to this Vessel”

Pantheon: “[Screams in Agony] Pantheon! I will use this Vessel to tear the heavens asunder, Starting with you!”

Zoe: “[Screams in Agony] I will slay you Trickster! Nothing will stop me!”

Taric: “[Screams in Agony] Your aspect is meaningless before my power, Taric!”

Aatrox: “[Scream in Agony] Ah, I see you found another Vessel. Come! And join me in this Vessel so we may achieve our ultimate goal”

Varus: “[Screams in Agony] Varus... Still not letting you live down the two boys thing”

Leona: “[Screams in Agony] The sun's light shall be blinded by the Chaos to come!”

Diana: “[Screams in Agony] The Moon's light is a mere reflection of the sun's. But it too shall drown in Chaos!”

Kills:

Garen: “I'm sorry, Garen. You left me with no other choice”

Lux: “I'm sorry old friend”

Jarvan: “You should've known better than to face me, Prince”

Aatrox: “It's not over yet, He'll be back”

Kayn: “This was a lose, lose situation for you. You either got killed by me, or got enslaved by a Darkin”

Rhaast: “One Darkin down”

Varus: “Did he... Really join with two guys? You'd think he'd look... Different”

Fiora: “You won't win against me, Fiora”

Poppy: “No hammer time today”

Kills (Unbound power) Garen: “How does it feel to be crushed by the woman you fought alongside with for so long?”

Lux: “Your light will never be reignited in the Chaos to come”

Jarvan: “Scream your nations name once more, before I crush it”

Aatrox: “I think I overdid it...”

Kayn: “Oh sorry, Rhaast? Did I kill your vessel? Good.”

Rhaast: “Even at only a fraction of my strength, you are nothing to me Rhaast!”

Varus: “Does killing him count as two kills? You know with the whole two boys thing?”

Fiora: “What is so Grand about you again?”

Poppy: “HA HA, it bounces!”

First move:

“Another day, Another battle” “Just gotta keep going”

Garen (enemy): “Garen's here... This might not be an easy battle”

Lux (enemy): “sigh I hope she stays away from me so I don't have to do anything drastic”

Jarvan (enemy): “The Prince is here? How many times do you think he's gonna yell in manly voice Demacia”

Aatrox (enemy): “Damn it, Aatrox is out already? Am I truly ready for this?”

Kayn (enemy): “I sense... Something similar to Aatrox, but it's not him”

Varus (enemy): “It's something like Aatrox... but it's also not”

Garen (Ally): “Feels good to fight with you again Garen”

Lux (Ally): “Lux! Good to see you again”

Aatrox (Ally): “You've got to be kidding me...”

Kayn (Ally): “He's emitting so much edge, I question how women fall for him”

Varus (Ally): “Anyone else seeing Rainbows? Just me?”

Start game with four other white haired Champions (Ashe, Camille, Diana, Ekko, Rakan, Riven, Soraka, Tristana, Varus) “Yeah! White power! ...I'm referring to the hair... Fyi” “White hair squad, anyone? No?... I'll just go to my lane”

Enemy Flashes Mastery: “Oh you're a master?... of what exactly?” “Fancy, but you probably got that from beating Bronze players” “Ah, Mastery. About as Significant as you.”

Joke response: “I'm guessing that was a joke?” “I've heard worse” “Hah, nice”

Taunt response: “Was that a challenge or something?” “Are you sure that's advisable?” “Alright, Imma deck you in the schnoz for that one”

Let me know what you think of her

15 Comments

Arakadia9/16/2018, 4:20:13 PM2 votes

You should definitely type out/directly link her info rather than making hyper links. Its not a lot of work but your going to get a lot of people not willing to click on ever single link for every little thing.

So instead of having a little link to click on try something like this:

##Kit:

https://i.imgur.com/Bw4LVOF.png/img

https://i.imgur.com/TyxoQm1.png/img

https://i.imgur.com/1Hw4zoT.png/img

https://i.imgur.com/zAFw6mh.png/img

https://i.imgur.com/jhM2Mwz.png/img

This way we can read your whole champion concept from your original post. Although the images are pretty small so I would just type them out and insert a picture of the icon right next to the text.

Butt Stabber9/16/2018, 2:25:11 PM1 votes

HONESTLY EVERYTHING ABOUT HER IS PERFECT

David 7779/16/2018, 2:33:07 PM1 votes

Bio and story aren't on the given links. I don't understand how the AD/AP/resists bonus work. Neither do I understand how W works. The shield shattering on Q looks really cancerous. It'd be probably better to change it to bonus damage against shields, shield pierce or shield duration reduction. E looks really nice. R global range looks really overpowered. Also, the part of having completely different effects when cast on different health values looks weird. It might be better to have a single effect, empowered while on lower health.

F Ù Ń9/16/2018, 5:17:26 PM1 votes

Fiora rework?

BlueSmurf20189/17/2018, 4:48:33 PM1 votes

Trundle : Noms shield

Claire: How'd the shield taste?