Chira - The Terror of The Deep

Rakans cool cape·3/22/2016, 5:56:07 PM·1 votes·1,220 views

Appearance: http://partywith666.deviantart.com/art/13-599289845

Champion name: Chira

Champion type: AD

Epithet: The Terror of The Deep

Role: Assassin/Fighter

Attack power: ============ Ability power: ========== Defense: ==== Difficulty: =============

Description: Chira is a long eel like champion, having the walk animation of a swimming snake. He has Three Crab like arms on each side of his stomach, the appearance of mini praying mantis claws. His front arms are in a constant limp state when he is "walking", they flow behind him and sway with his body. He has a blunt head, much like a catfish's, but thicker. His Two fangs poke from his lip slightly, almost like a saber tooth tiger. He has a black swirl on the back of his eyes, like long teardrops. He also has a thin mane like growth around his neck. His long tail has a tadpole like appearance, but it is rounded at the base of his body.

Lore: The legend of the infamous deep sea terror, is far beyond fake. A simple fishing boat in the deep waters of bilgewater would be completely devoured in a matter of seconds by an unseen nightmare, Chira. Chira has ravaged the shoreline of bilgewater for many millenia, attacking the innocent under the cover of darkness. The sheer power of this creature was unmatched, until a brave champion stands up to defeat this deep sea terror.


dance: if he is near another allied champion, he will do Ring Around The Rosie with them while singing it

Taunts:

"Keep running, i like fast food.." He licks his lips.

"This is not a game of hide and seek, the point of tag, is to RUN." He growls and spins around.

"I can smell your stench, oh wait, that's your fear.." He snarls and licks his lips.

"I hope you can swim as fast as the words fall out of your filthy mouth.." He chuckles.

Jokes:

"Where does seaweed look for a job?.. In the "Kelp-Wanted" ads!." Chira chuckles deeply.

"Why don't clams give to charity?.. Because they're Shellfish!.." He spins in a circle.

"What is a fish's favorite show?.. Whale of Fortune!.." Chira laughs.


Skins in production: Nightmare Chira, Blood Moon Chira, Assassin Chira

Abilities:

Passive: Blighted Maw (No cost) - When Chira attacks an enemy champion, his diseased maw infects the champion, dealing magic damage depending on Chira's level. (It increases by 10 attack damage when he levels up)

Q: Preying Swipe (30 Mana) (10 second cool down) - Chira swings his claw, slashing any enemies close by, but they must be within decent range. This deals Physical damage depending on Chira's level.

W: Scent of Night (50 mana) (20 second cool down) - Chira's reveals enemy champions in the brush/bushes, for up to 5 seconds.

E: Bite Force (100 mana) (10 second cool down) - Chira takes a large bite out of the champion, draining some of their health and transferring it to Chira. This attack deals both physical and magic damage. (This attack depends on how any stacks Chira has built up on his Bite Force) (He builds 1 stack when he kills 2 minions) (It goes up to 5 stacks)

R: Chastised Soul (150 Mana) (120 second cool down) - Chira lunches at an enemy champion and jabs them rapidly with his claws, dealing physical damage to the champion depending on the level of the enemy champion. (This ability lasts 4 seconds when he attaches to the enemy, ending with a burst of damage) (during the attack, he immobilizes the champion in the process)


Recommended Build:

??? (suggestions?)

Statistics:

Mana - 300 (+30 per level) Armor: 30 (+3.80 per level) Attack speed: .70 (+3.20% per level) Attack damage: 50.12 (+5 per level) Movement speed: 355

is Strong against:

(Suggestions?)

Is weak against:

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(Please give me feedback! I'm looking for any way to fix him! this is just the first stage of development for him) (please leave a suggestion, thank you for reading!)

4 Comments

Leroyswish3/22/2016, 6:39:28 PM2 votes

So, this kit does damage, and is very linear. Playing Chira, you essentially walk into melee range and spam your abilities. His passive is very boring, it does bonus damage (I'm assuming magic damage, you never specified). Also, I think it's with every basic attack, but I'm not sure on that either.

The Q doesn't have any numbers, nor does it say what kind of damage it does. It's pretty boring as well, it just does damage and is limited to the first three enemy units hit. Chira's W has some utility but is a bit lackluster. Bite Force is confusing, because it doesn't say how you build stacks of Bite Force. However, the life steal can be useful.

Lastly, the ultimate seems out of place. It basically puts a damage-over-time component on them, which is extremely weak and boring for an ultimate. I like the theme and visuals of the champion, but the abilities lack synergy, versatility, and utility.

Furthermore I can't recommend a build because there's no indication of if it is an AD or AP build.